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LionessAmaya — Crush
Published: 2012-10-21 05:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 723; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 1
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Description I am only the sum of parts:
these stumbling lips,
these wandering eyes,
this heart that skips too many beats.

I am not quite bold:
not content to watch,
not daring to speak,
making acquaintance with my feet.

I am scared:
awkward in silence,
clumsy in speech,
always just short of discreet.
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Comments: 12

giffordm [2013-01-29 21:33:34 +0000 UTC]

this is really good

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LionessAmaya In reply to giffordm [2013-02-04 03:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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giffordm In reply to LionessAmaya [2013-02-04 19:46:48 +0000 UTC]

yw!

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sarah1938 [2013-01-14 20:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Great poem. It is oh so true when I am near my crush. Its almost like my IQ drops lol
Great job

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LionessAmaya In reply to sarah1938 [2013-01-15 22:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I know, mine just shrivels up and dies XD
Thanks

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xXPapa-PaparazziXx [2013-01-13 14:17:09 +0000 UTC]

That is exactly how I feel when I'm around my crush too. But this is a really good poem!

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LionessAmaya In reply to xXPapa-PaparazziXx [2013-01-13 20:03:42 +0000 UTC]

This is possibly one of the most autobiographical poems I have ever written. I am the least smooth person ever, haha. I'm gald there are other people who feel this way... XD Thanks for the comment!

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xXPapa-PaparazziXx In reply to LionessAmaya [2013-01-13 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Yup, you're not alone! When I'm near my crush I can't breathe correctly, my heart starts pounding, my throat gets all dry and I can't talk. I guess it just happens to lots of people. But anyway you're welcome!

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LionessAmaya In reply to xXPapa-PaparazziXx [2013-01-15 22:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Crushes are awful, but I can't imagine life without them. ^.^

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xXPapa-PaparazziXx In reply to LionessAmaya [2013-01-15 23:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, in a way they're kind of exciting.

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KMforward [2012-10-21 07:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh god could I ever relate to this.

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LionessAmaya In reply to KMforward [2012-10-23 20:44:31 +0000 UTC]

(:

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