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LionessAmaya In reply to GatitaZ [2012-11-04 05:31:22 +0000 UTC]
I was SO MAD when I wrote this and then I read it later and it was absolutely hilarious XD
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mermaidspock [2012-09-07 03:53:39 +0000 UTC]
Really awesome poem... I like that it rhymes, but it's not forced - it flows nicely, and the last line is awesome.
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LionessAmaya In reply to mermaidspock [2012-09-07 03:55:40 +0000 UTC]
YAY THANK YOU (: Honestly most of this was written with that final line in mind. And thanks for the fav. ^^
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mermaidspock In reply to LionessAmaya [2012-09-07 04:02:27 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm-hm! Very interesting... It works.
And no problem.
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