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LionessAmaya — paved with good intentions [NSFW]
Published: 2012-09-07 03:48:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description you didn't mean it
you never do
but that's okay because
I say it too
let's be honest here
we're just mean
throwing spiteful words
trying to demean
we more than mean it
when it's said
it's when we're no
longer seeing red
that we feel a flicker
of regret and shame
and we apologise to
shift the blame
au revoir, auf wiedersehen
farewell to you
and last but not least
fuck you too
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Comments: 6

GatitaZ [2012-11-02 00:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Gawh, so accurate XD

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LionessAmaya In reply to GatitaZ [2012-11-04 05:31:22 +0000 UTC]

I was SO MAD when I wrote this and then I read it later and it was absolutely hilarious XD

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GatitaZ In reply to LionessAmaya [2012-11-04 14:33:56 +0000 UTC]

I believe it lol

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mermaidspock [2012-09-07 03:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Really awesome poem... I like that it rhymes, but it's not forced - it flows nicely, and the last line is awesome.

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LionessAmaya In reply to mermaidspock [2012-09-07 03:55:40 +0000 UTC]

YAY THANK YOU (: Honestly most of this was written with that final line in mind. And thanks for the fav. ^^

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mermaidspock In reply to LionessAmaya [2012-09-07 04:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm-hm! Very interesting... It works.
And no problem.

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