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Lionnfart — pollen, sugar, bees
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Published: 2020-05-01 02:35:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 416; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description I'm not even outside

and the pollen

is gathering on my bones

like a thin dusting

of powdered sugar.

I know

by the end

I will taste like honey,

and the bees will be my friends.

I am a guest

in the tent of Abram;

I am a slave

to the earth, and it is a kind master.

Clutch us close

before the heat takes us away,

and save the blossom petals

to remind you of the good days.
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Comments: 21

TheLunaLily [2020-12-21 00:37:26 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to TheLunaLily [2020-12-24 04:55:27 +0000 UTC]

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TheLunaLily In reply to Lionnfart [2020-12-31 04:49:21 +0000 UTC]

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KiriHearts [2020-06-07 05:10:45 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to KiriHearts [2020-06-16 03:15:16 +0000 UTC]

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BornWithTheSun [2020-05-18 19:16:53 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart In reply to BornWithTheSun [2020-05-22 01:09:05 +0000 UTC]

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BornWithTheSun In reply to Lionnfart [2020-05-23 18:53:56 +0000 UTC]

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Malintra-Shadowmoon [2020-05-09 12:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Interesting read

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Lionnfart In reply to Malintra-Shadowmoon [2020-05-10 05:26:55 +0000 UTC]

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Malintra-Shadowmoon In reply to Lionnfart [2020-05-10 10:24:23 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome

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YouInventedMe [2020-05-09 00:22:37 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely.

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Lionnfart In reply to YouInventedMe [2020-05-10 05:26:39 +0000 UTC]

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Bobibillius [2020-05-05 12:05:20 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice, really tight knit. Just the right amount of words. I had to go back and read it twice.

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Lionnfart In reply to Bobibillius [2020-05-08 03:04:53 +0000 UTC]

happy to hear you liked it! thank you

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Eefera [2020-05-05 05:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Girl stop. 
Seriously, your poetry is so good, and every time I read one of your pieces, I have to go back over and over again just to let the words sink in and roll around in my head. 


You're amazing. 

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Lionnfart In reply to Eefera [2020-05-08 03:05:13 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE amazing. thank you for always being here dear.

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EkoFox [2020-05-02 04:55:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm not even outside

and the pollen

is gathering on my bones


That really drew me in. The imagery in this is beautiful, and the words flow well. Thank you for this lovely little read.

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Lionnfart In reply to EkoFox [2020-05-08 03:05:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading!

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Alice-Hutchison [2020-05-01 03:38:49 +0000 UTC]

This is well-written and beautiful.

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Lionnfart In reply to Alice-Hutchison [2020-05-02 04:14:52 +0000 UTC]

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