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Description Happy belated Halloweeeeen

If you want mature content put on then just say!

Soooo, here it is!! Finally... (sorry for the wait) my Acornrush entry and my competition prize!!!

CONGRATS ~TheForgottenRain I really enjoyed reading your story, it had a great twist and I love how Stormpaw and Acornrush ganged up on everyone <3
Also, thank you to all who entered, I loved reading your stories, I was totally spooked out by the end

Overall... this was kinda rushed and it a bit dodgy but shhhhhh just enjoy the effort that went into it!!

READ IT:

CloudClan had claimed as their own. Only dusk-light was given to show each of the faces that
crowded around Acornrush, ears perked and attention directed as the Deputy Tom sat up straight,
a smirk upon his muzzle as he began to tell the gruesome tale.
His green eyes flickered across the group, spotting his mate, Swiftleaf, and their kits,
Drizzlekit, Singekit and Bouncekit sitting just outside the nursery, wanting to hear the tale that
was to be told. Closer in, he could see Gleamfire, Echolight, Pouncequick and his own
Apprentice, Stormpaw, sitting at the front of the gathered cats. Feeling confident, Acornrush
took a deep breath, his creamy chest puffing out as he spoke.
“Has anyone ever heard of „The Reaper‟?” He asked, voice becoming ominous to add
more feeling into the story. Glancing around, the Deputy noted that most of the cats either
remained silent, exchanged glances, or shook their heads. Good. He thought, tail curling over his
paws.
“Well, The Reaper actually was once one of our own. His name, back then of course, was
Snaketail, as his tail was long and thin, looking snake-like in appearance. Now, Snaketail always
had a..thing for she-cat Apprentices.” Acornrush‟s livid green eyes darted immediately to
Stormpaw, seeing that the dark gray she-cat‟s eyes were wide.
“W-what ki-kind of th-thing?” asked Stormpaw, voice quivering with both anticipation
and fear, yet the story had just begun.
“Why, simple, my dear Stormpaw. He had a thing, for murder.” replied the Deputy, ears
perking as a gasp or two broke out in the audience.
Night was settling in further, darkening the camp even more and resulting in a more
perfect setting. With that in mind, Acornrush continued.
“See, Snaketail has killed before, yet always got away with it since he only did it once a
season, around this time of the year, and always at darkening dusk.” It was a bit cruel, but the
Tom was getting more pleasure from scaring his own Apprentice more than the rest of the she-
cat Apprentices that were in the Clan. Why? He wasn‟t sure, but boy, was it fun.

By the time the story was nearly over, night had completely over-taken the camp, the
only light was from the glistening stars above that reflected in the fearful eyes of the cats that
surrounded the brown Deputy.
“...Aspenpaw was the last known victim of The Reaper, the whereabouts of her body,
however, wasn‟t. It is known, however, that the spirits of those Snaketail had killed still roam the
Clan, since they refused to move on to StarClan, as they were meant to. Instead, possessed by the
ever-living spirit of Snaketail, they assist the Tom with his cruel, savage kills. How will you
know when they‟re here?” he asked, taking a dramatic pause as he leaned down, pressing close
to Stormpaw‟s horrified face and whispering something in her ear, that only the she-cat could
hear.
When he pulled back, Acornrush closed his eyes, chin up as he spoke the final piece of
the story, “A scream will be heard, a blood-curdling one at that-” he cut off as a spine-shivering
shriek echoed throughout the camp, all eyes widened drastically as they looked around, trying to
see to whom the yowl had belonged to.
“Hey guys, where‟s Stormpaw?” asked Gleamfire, poking his golden paw around the
warm patch where the she-cat had just been.
Feelings of panic rose in the Clan, cats calling out her name one by one. “Stormpaw!
Stormpaw!” cry after cry, yet no answer was ever spoken.

All hell seemed to break loose at once as the Clan, eyes flashing and flickering about,
except for Acornrush‟s, which were still closed shut and expression unreadable.
“Acornrush! Why aren‟t you-” Blacksong began, but was cut short as a rolling hiss
interrupted, followed by some scuffling and a yelp from another cat. Everyone fell silent and
turned around to see what was happening at the back of the group. Shocked gasps erupted almost
instantly as a reaction to what they saw.
Cherrypaw growled and kicked about as to fight off her attacker, but ceased when she
saw who that mysterious cat was. It was Stormpaw! “Stormpaw?! Get off!” cried the stubborn
Apprentice, pushing her calico-marked legs against the belly fur of the other She-cat,
unstoppable laughter from the dark gray Apprentice making it easy for her to be pushed off.
Bouncing up and padding up to Acornrush, Stormpaw smirked, her tail beating against
her mentor‟s flank as she turned to face the others. “Man, we got you guys good!” She purred,
her sea-green eyes brimming with satisfaction of the fears of others.
Acornrush patted the she-cat‟s head with his paw, proud of their work. “And that is why
you never let me tell you guys a story.” Meowed the Deputy, a purr rising in his throat, yet he
could see the others weren‟t as pleased.
Glancing down at Stormpaw, his vivid green eyes shone with pride. “Fantastic work,
maybe we should do that again next season on some of the new Apprentices.” He suggested, tail
laid across her back.
Stormpaw looked up at her mentor with mischief, “Great idea.”

Art (c) Me
Story (c) ~TheForgottenRain
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Comments: 47

TheMajikalCocoa [2012-09-28 15:47:16 +0000 UTC]

but wjy did he have a "thing" for she-cat apps?

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to TheMajikalCocoa [2012-09-28 18:23:37 +0000 UTC]

its just part of the story, haha i didn't even write it :L

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TheMajikalCocoa In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2012-10-01 23:16:52 +0000 UTC]

lol, thanks anyway

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jayfeather116 [2012-08-18 02:26:12 +0000 UTC]

friggn funny

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lavenderblossom [2012-03-08 00:59:11 +0000 UTC]

May I submit this to my group #WarriorCatStories ?

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to lavenderblossom [2012-03-08 13:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Of course ^^

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lavenderblossom In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2012-03-09 22:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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RiverClanCatz [2011-11-07 16:53:41 +0000 UTC]

HAHA

i lol'ed when i saw this! it's pure awesome! and of course stormpaw would do something like that! XD

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to RiverClanCatz [2011-11-07 17:41:11 +0000 UTC]

YAY! go team"!

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kuiwi [2011-11-07 14:35:21 +0000 UTC]

This is epic. <3

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to kuiwi [2011-11-07 17:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kuiwi <3333

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Finchwing [2011-11-06 16:22:52 +0000 UTC]

OH MY ROFL!! This is awesome!! XD THEY REALLY SCARED THE FLEAS OUT OF THOSE APPRENTICES!!
Love this >8D Acornrush is expecially smexy here!

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to Finchwing [2011-11-06 20:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Thats cuz storm and acorn are too cool

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Finchwing In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-06 20:53:24 +0000 UTC]

BOOYEA! >8D

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to Finchwing [2011-11-06 21:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, Im starting the apprentice ceremonies, i need to think about mentors :S

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Finchwing In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-06 21:01:57 +0000 UTC]

OOH really?! 8'D *excitement*
ohmy, so many to pick from 8O

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to Finchwing [2011-11-06 21:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Yah, hmmm who needs mentors :S

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Finchwing In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-06 21:54:19 +0000 UTC]

NOBODEH >D

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Jayfeatherslover123 [2011-11-06 15:03:14 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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NoreyDragon [2011-11-06 12:15:03 +0000 UTC]

AHAHHAA Acorn has done it again, he has damaged the souls of innocent poor kitties. OH NOES *bawls in corner*

Great comic and very spooky Well done!

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to NoreyDragon [2011-11-06 20:49:05 +0000 UTC]

YAY! thanks nors *sniff* :')

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NoreyDragon In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-07 18:31:50 +0000 UTC]

It makes you happy to scare the crap off people, RITE, RITE?! AHAHHAHA

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to NoreyDragon [2011-11-08 20:45:43 +0000 UTC]

.... who are you again?

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NoreyDragon In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-08 21:18:03 +0000 UTC]

I'M YOUR WORST NIGHTMAREEE

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to NoreyDragon [2011-11-09 21:02:01 +0000 UTC]

HOLY FU-

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catz4ever [2011-11-06 11:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey, this is AMAZING I love it xD Which is kinda strange as it involves lots of dead kitties lol.
Amazing art as always :3

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to catz4ever [2011-11-06 20:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Hehe lawwwlll thank you!

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catpain [2011-11-06 10:22:57 +0000 UTC]

This scares me

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Hyperpantherstar [2011-11-06 08:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh god acorns eyes scare me o.o

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jos-i [2011-11-06 03:31:16 +0000 UTC]

XD awesome aww the poor apprentices.

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BlueMew919 [2011-11-06 02:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol. This was pretty good. Heheh. >: D

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MiddynightRain [2011-11-06 01:27:45 +0000 UTC]

YAYY! I knew you would get it Kearbear I love you! Great job!

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TheForgottenRain In reply to MiddynightRain [2011-11-06 16:59:19 +0000 UTC]

BAY 8DDD I loves chu too And thanks n.n

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to MiddynightRain [2011-11-06 09:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thank you!

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TheForgottenRain [2011-11-05 23:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Ohmygod I won? ;w; YES 8DD Although, you uh..got my name wrong.. /shrinks back ;m;

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to TheForgottenRain [2011-11-06 09:21:22 +0000 UTC]

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK im sooo sorry

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TheForgottenRain In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-06 15:04:46 +0000 UTC]

It's okay ;m; I thought it was kinda funny at first to be honest x'D

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to TheForgottenRain [2011-11-06 20:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Feewwww glad you did :S

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TheForgottenRain In reply to Lionstrikewhiskers [2011-11-06 22:57:34 +0000 UTC]

It was an honest mistake, so there's nothing to be mad about really n.n

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PuppetAngel [2011-11-05 22:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! This is the one I wanted to win!

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silverhawk101297 [2011-11-05 22:21:19 +0000 UTC]

awesome!!

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eyoung1997 [2011-11-05 22:14:07 +0000 UTC]

9th panel or whatever is my favorite <3

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Toadfoal [2011-11-05 22:09:11 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome!
You do such an amazing job with these comics, they're so much fun to read. 8D

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to Toadfoal [2011-11-06 09:22:01 +0000 UTC]

YAY! Thanks toadie <3 Oh oh, i need to tlk to you *notes you*

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snowandhawk123456789 [2011-11-05 22:06:49 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Catsroxz [2011-11-05 22:06:07 +0000 UTC]

mintflower: Acornrush your sexier than i remember! D;< hwy won't you know that i wuv uuuu!

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Lionstrikewhiskers In reply to Catsroxz [2011-11-06 09:21:42 +0000 UTC]

He does he does!

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