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LipsterLeo β€” Otter Twins

Published: 2014-10-18 23:08:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 698; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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Description Introducing Dolly and Donny Otter, the Otter twins. They are the newest denizens of my Willow Valley world. Dolly has a heart of gold and is friends with everybody, but she tends to be somewhat ditzy. Donny is the serious one, and is often called upon to help defend the valley and its inhabitants as a member of the "Guardians". Neither twin is afraid of work, and are willing to help out whenever called upon. But being otters they'd really rather play.
Most of the critters in Willow Valley play musical instruments or sing. Donny plays trumpet, and Dolly is a singer. But hey - you can't practice all the time, can you?
Here, Donny is at the pond, hoping to catch a fat fish for the community's midsummer solstice feast. He could dive in and catch one as otters normally do but that would be too much like work. This is more fun! Besides, the summer sun feels good in the fur. Maybe he'll even get a chance for a nap.
Dolly has decided that he needs to be "supervised", and she has come down to keep an eye on him. She says she "just wants to see what he's up to". Her brother knows her better than that.Β  No nap for you, Donny!

I have spent an average of six hours a day for the last two weeks on these two together, after redrawing them both together from scratch. I keep finding things I don't like and going back to redraw the part. Thank God for a digital pad and laptop so erasures can be easily made. But I'm going to call it quits on this image. I want to move on to something else. Maybe I'll come back and revisit it after I have more practice.Β 
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KosmoKOYOTE [2014-10-27 04:58:41 +0000 UTC]

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Well let me say to start this off that your composition of Dolly and Danny is really good with the general setting of the picture.I'll start with the dock.I think that in order to show better perspective that it should have been narrowed down (not by very much)where the dock met the shore line and lowered down in order to put more emphases on the trail.Where the water is meeting the shore line i think that it should have been just a little bit darker.If you look where you have the cat tails you can see where it is much more defined.As the shore line moves onto the meadow i feel that you should have Kept on defining it with more blades of grass at various positions with additional shading.I really like their facial looks as it really expresses the joy of their being in each others company.

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LipsterLeo In reply to KosmoKOYOTE [2014-10-27 05:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. The dock gave me fits. Haven't done a lot of perspective since High School Mechanical drawing class. I may have to reload the picture an fiddle with the dock some. I had an ungodly amount of time into the picture, and instead of settingΒ  it aside, I went ahead and posted it.

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KosmoKOYOTE In reply to LipsterLeo [2014-10-27 05:10:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!Β 

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DCLeadboot [2015-02-22 15:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Heh, cute siblings!
I love otters!

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Pact-Comics [2014-11-28 21:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Awesome otters you got here!

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LipsterLeo In reply to Pact-Comics [2014-11-29 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm just learning. Hopefully they'll get better.Β 

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Pact-Comics In reply to LipsterLeo [2014-12-07 23:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh they will. ;3

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KosmoKOYOTE [2014-10-27 05:06:10 +0000 UTC]

I really like the overall composition of your picture.Dolly and Danny are
really cute!Β  (I tried to write a critique but the DA is telling me i already submitted one.I didn't! )

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LipsterLeo In reply to KosmoKOYOTE [2014-10-27 05:16:13 +0000 UTC]

No, I got it. Tnx. I replied to it.

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KosmoKOYOTE In reply to LipsterLeo [2014-10-27 05:19:46 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome.I was afraid that it hadn't made it.That's a relief!Β 

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AjayRulezzz [2014-10-27 05:01:21 +0000 UTC]

love em

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LipsterLeo In reply to AjayRulezzz [2014-10-27 05:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Dolly and Donny thank you! :3

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AjayRulezzz In reply to LipsterLeo [2014-10-27 05:21:42 +0000 UTC]

yer welcome

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