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Lisella-Yos — Ahkryll and Mogg

Published: 2009-07-11 04:40:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1263; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 19
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Description My shaman Ahkryll and her lil son Mogg

although this deviation is old im sure it fits well...


Happy Children's week!
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kuroshi [2009-07-11 05:12:01 +0000 UTC]

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Hah! I saw this and immediately squealed with, "YAY, WoW LOVE!" before I even full-viewed it. The fact that it's a shaman? Even better.

The pose is so sweet; nothing like Horde family values to give you the warm-fuzzies, eh?
The detail in the armor is very well done, especially the shoulder piece. I like the facial expressions -- they're subtly tender, especially little Mogg's e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> The small smile is just enough without being too sappy.

My one big suggestion for the whoooooole piece is to EXAGGERATE THE COLORING. You have such a good start with your linework that the colors seem washed out. Try more shading dynamics, play with crazy lighting (shading dark red on green, dark blue on orange, etc.).
You might also check your perspective a bit on the shoulder behind Mogg -- surely her shoulderpad on that side would stick out behind him?

You've got a really nice start, would just like to see it pushed farther e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />

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Lisella-Yos In reply to kuroshi [2009-07-11 16:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I've been really trying different techniques. the tutorials on dA really help out. I think im more of a hands on learner though, if i had school i think it would turn out a whole lot better.

Thanks so much for your compliments and advice!

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kuroshi In reply to Lisella-Yos [2009-07-11 23:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, definitely keep working! School is nice, but I find the best way to figure something out is just to do it! DA is an awesome resource with loads of talented people to learn from, so keep going and good luck

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AmbreRosa [2010-05-04 06:36:17 +0000 UTC]

So sweet!

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Lisella-Yos In reply to AmbreRosa [2010-05-04 06:51:35 +0000 UTC]

:>

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MartinisMartin [2010-05-03 19:55:01 +0000 UTC]

aww cute C:

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Lisella-Yos In reply to MartinisMartin [2010-05-03 21:18:48 +0000 UTC]

ty :>

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MartinisMartin In reply to Lisella-Yos [2010-05-03 21:47:41 +0000 UTC]

no prob glad to see them orcs u know C:

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PhantasmMarquesses [2009-07-11 14:45:47 +0000 UTC]

This is way to f'in cute! I really like how you crafted this drawing, the over all feeling of this makes me want to leap in and join them all for a hug! It is beautifully done! Keep up the amazing work darling This is truely a great piece

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Lisella-Yos In reply to PhantasmMarquesses [2009-07-11 16:21:43 +0000 UTC]

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Thalaskaru [2009-07-11 08:09:55 +0000 UTC]

the Coloring is absolutely amazing,not to mention how adorable the little orc boy is!

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Lisella-Yos In reply to Thalaskaru [2009-07-11 16:23:50 +0000 UTC]

^^ ty!

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Lionessa93 [2009-07-11 06:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Sweet job on the colour!

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Lisella-Yos In reply to Lionessa93 [2009-07-11 16:25:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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