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Mo0nX [2014-04-17 20:11:10 +0000 UTC]
You got talent and I can tell that
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ExpeditionEndurance [2014-04-06 16:26:09 +0000 UTC]
I like the use of Cycles for this render, however I have some suggestions. The composition causes Dante to get a little lost in the scene and since the model was rendered so beautifully, wouldn't you wan that to be your focal point? Right now, my eyes are distracted by that blurry android at the left of the image. In addition to that, I feel like the background is too blurred. Normally, the greater the blur, the greater the distance is from the focal point. Based on where Dante stands, it looks like he could run to that building in 3 seconds, making it pretty close but the blurs suggest otherwise backing it confusing. If you tone down the blurs, it will look natural to the eye and not fuzzy. Lastly, the pose is neat, but the gun behind the back is unrealistic. Considering recoil and safety, why would he ever consider shooting from his back. I feel like if that arm wasn't visible (just hanging down, perhaps in a fist) it would look way better.
Overall though, this piece is very breathtaking and captivating! I'm hoping those small adjustments will help you improve!
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LitoPerezito In reply to ExpeditionEndurance [2014-04-06 16:49:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, for the blurry background, you are totally right ... it's just that I had to use screenshots from the game, and you know, that's not HQ stuff. If I had the 3d model of this place, I would've squarely taken it as a model :/ I had to remake the floor on blender and that took me so much to be made and to render ! For the pose I like it how it is, I needed something really bad ass, and I wanted to pay a tribute to Fear Effect Inferno ( the canceled game ).
So, still have the PSD, i'll see if I can do something with the background !
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ExpeditionEndurance In reply to LitoPerezito [2014-04-06 18:41:16 +0000 UTC]
No problem! It's okay if the background image is not totally high def, it still will have a slight blur! The floor looks great, BTW. Just search " City" in Google or dA Stocks, with the settings as a large image. It may provide you with better results.
Also, I was unaware of the pose reference. In that case, it's great!
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LitoPerezito In reply to LitoPerezito [2014-04-06 17:05:49 +0000 UTC]
So ... I tried but nothing, i can't do better :/
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