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Published: 2015-06-11 01:00:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 2842; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 0
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Description nights like tonight
make me believe we're
the only people alive,
that everyone else has vanished
and left us beneath this
massive patchwork sky.

we hold close together
in the dark,
survivors of a silent apocalypse.
even though there are
no souls around to hear us,
we speak in whispers
as if stainless steel words
could raise their ghosts from the dust.

but we are not alone.

I am once again reminded
of how small you and I are,
how insignificant.
we are two grains of sand
slowly sinking through
god's hourglass,
invisible and loose,
quietly drifting
in our own gravity.

the universe is uncomprehendingly
large,
but when I am with you
I carry it on a thread
like a balloon,
like something light and insignificant
that could slip away forever
and not change a thing.
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Comments: 17

HTTYDismylife [2016-07-17 08:42:53 +0000 UTC]

This is so perfect!

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littleblueraccoon In reply to HTTYDismylife [2016-08-23 22:43:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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secret-life-of-mine [2015-06-17 09:13:02 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful, I loved every line.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to secret-life-of-mine [2015-06-17 14:39:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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Northern-Compass [2015-06-13 03:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, truly amazing !

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littleblueraccoon In reply to Northern-Compass [2015-06-13 23:16:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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Northern-Compass In reply to littleblueraccoon [2015-06-14 02:01:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome !

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FeatherEyed [2015-06-12 16:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Your descriptive words are so perfect.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to FeatherEyed [2015-06-13 23:17:00 +0000 UTC]

aw thank you so much!

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smilekeeper [2015-06-12 02:55:36 +0000 UTC]

I had no doubts this would be another good work.
Thanks for taking the time to complete my request.

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littleblueraccoon In reply to smilekeeper [2015-06-13 23:17:51 +0000 UTC]

EEEK REALLY? I'm so happy! Let me know if there's anything you want changed. c:

And of course, it was a joy to do. Thank YOU for the support!

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i8candy [2015-06-11 02:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Whoa this is really incredible~
I love how you described being in love as feeling like the only two people left in the entire world.
Like nothing else matters but each other <3

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littleblueraccoon In reply to i8candy [2015-06-13 23:16:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! awww I love that feeling

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FridgePoetProject [2015-06-11 01:53:39 +0000 UTC]

This began beautifully, and somehow managed to get more and more beautiful as it went on. Β The timelessness -- even weightlessness -- of it really gets under your skin. Β I especially enjoyed:Β 

"we speak in whispers
as if stainless steel words
could raise their ghosts from the dust."

and

"we are two grains of sand
slowly sinking through
god's hourglass,
invisible and loose,
quietly drifting
in our own gravity"

The ending was phenomenal, as well. Β Gorgeous words, once again. Β 

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littleblueraccoon In reply to FridgePoetProject [2015-06-13 23:16:10 +0000 UTC]

ahhhh thank you so much! I wanted to write something about how being alone with someone you love makes you feel isolated, but in the best possible way. and I'm really happy you liked the stanza with "stainless steel words", that was a favorite of mine to write. Β 

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oliviacolomar [2015-06-11 01:11:13 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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littleblueraccoon In reply to oliviacolomar [2015-06-13 23:15:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you dearly

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