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comatose-comet [2016-10-03 21:20:00 +0000 UTC]
god this imagery is perfect - rich and unsettling and divine.
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13ZexyDragons [2016-09-09 20:56:12 +0000 UTC]
Meaningful. Deep. Your writing always inspires me to keep writing myself.
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Ch-Ch-Cherry [2016-08-28 20:07:41 +0000 UTC]
This what you come up with when you force yourself to write? When I do that, I get a hundred variations of "it was dark and there might have been a woman speaking." That first line ruined my heart and now I'll be thinking of tangerines all day. I don't think they even sell tangerines at the grocery store by my house.Ā Ā
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kobrakaiii [2016-08-28 18:02:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's definitely a fascinating and original imagery on the concept. Great work
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pansydiv [2016-08-28 07:33:43 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is something else altogether. It doesn't feel forced at all, and the imagery is so incredibly breathtaking and outright glorious, it's spellbinding. Ā
you had me at the first line <3
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littleblueraccoon In reply to pansydiv [2016-08-30 00:46:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad, because it definitely felt forced while I was writing it :b thank you so, so much!
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Thystyn [2016-08-28 03:25:52 +0000 UTC]
It's lovely, and is imbued with wild abandon.Ā
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Annabeth5110 [2016-08-28 00:25:13 +0000 UTC]
Love the symbolism.
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