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LittleMissSkuld — Dawning on You pg 5
Published: 2012-07-18 16:51:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 328; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Not exactly the most usual thing you find in the Woods.This will probably lead to bad things ahead.
We'll find out Friday.
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If Dead Space has taught me anything, it's: Don't go near the big, pointy rock sticking out of the ground.
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Love the first panel! haha it really makes you want to know what they're looking at. I also like the cartoony look of the second panel. The lack of anatomy reference isn't as apparent because you've stylized it so much and it's so tiny. More of a gesture!
Oh shit, is the person smoking a girl? I just noticed her boobs on the fourth panel. Sorry! Maybe you were intending for the character to be a bit androgynous? If so- Mission accomplished! If not- maybe consider revising the design a bit to be more clear? Either way, the character is appealing!
I really love the last panel! You're very good at mood shading.
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When you said "His" in earlier comments I looked and thought "Omg she really does look like a guy!" Made me giggle X3
I'm going to refine a lot of the designs, and possibly redo a few pages to go with revisions. (YAY REVISIONS 
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Haha I DO like the short hair look, though!! 
Yay revisions is right!! I can't wait to get some back from work so I can improve!! I'm going to ask for some tomorrow to keep on top of it. The lack of revisions after graduation is scary til you get a job and you get millions. hahaha
I hope I am helping! If you want me to stop let me know! If you do take my words into consideration though, I think your comic will be a very strong piece and maybe even a possible portfolio piece!
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I have my note book on hand and the rim of my desk is now covered in post-it notes telling me to get refferences, remember construction etc.
I think I was feeling completely lost without any revisions. Thankee!!!!
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