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Published: 2019-07-18 03:40:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 290; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description i'd love to dress like this someday!

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Monseo [2019-07-18 04:33:50 +0000 UTC]

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First of all I would like to say how well thought out the accessories go with this characters personality.

The choice of colours and including flower/heart references consistently throughout the wardrobe. The crystal necklace and heart shaped glasses have strong retro vibes, with enough modern designs to keep it from looking dated.

A few things I might suggest would be to vary the width of the line work/and or alternatively deepen portions of the shadows to increase the over all contrast. To have a better balance with a few darker areas. Maybe incorporate their shadow in the circle and gradually fade out the circles boundaries to make the transition to the ground less sudden.

There are some anatomical improvements you could make of course, good job so far. Keep it up!

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littletea10 In reply to Monseo [2019-07-18 18:13:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the critique! i completely agree. can u tell me where the anatomy is wonky though? i thought i covered all my grounds

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Monseo In reply to littletea10 [2019-07-19 06:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Sure, 
their right hand looks a bit flat right now. There's no change between the digits of the thumb and the palm itself for support.

One hand also shows a knuckle and the other one shows none, it makes the fingers look really short once you get to the last digit.

Maybe show a few toes past the big toe on the foot at this angle, and rest the arm a little higher up on the knee so that it doesn't look like it's hovering.

I hope that helps, anatomy can be a pain at the best of times lol.

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Artastic-CW In reply to Monseo [2019-07-18 12:16:54 +0000 UTC]

I agree

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gordonphilbin [2019-07-21 13:30:14 +0000 UTC]

She looks beautiful!

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guyoninternet101 [2019-07-18 11:08:47 +0000 UTC]

do i see an energem 

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littletea10 In reply to guyoninternet101 [2019-07-18 18:14:56 +0000 UTC]

lmao no, but it does look like one! it's a amethyst pendant necklace

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guyoninternet101 In reply to littletea10 [2019-07-18 23:08:32 +0000 UTC]

oh i just google amethyst pendant necklace and it made me think of 2 things 
1 she is a Crystal Gem she'll always save the day
2 she is a power ranger 

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