hydrogen-chloride [2011-12-30 20:25:15 +0000 UTC]
Not bad; the shading looks interesting. Though the scarf makes it look like her head is separated from the body. Also, I know, it's probably a style matter, but oh god her jaws and chin. I would suggest making them smoother and not so pointy next time! Another thing I would say is that her legs look kind of weird, you could have defined the knees more.
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hydrogen-chloride In reply to Livisi [2011-12-30 20:33:14 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, this wasn't really criticism, probably just some remarks? idk
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