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LiyuConberma β€” So Close yet So Far

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Description Hey, how's everybody's Christmas going? Hope that you guys received great presents. This year, which is my first white Christmas, my mom got me an ocarina from Legend of Zelda!! Isn't it cool or what? Although I do some practices on this instrument.... Hehehe....

Sorry, this is just something that come up in my mind. And also inspired by the song "So Close": [link]

My two OCs; Kaze the Hedgehog and Sapphire the Merhog, both came from different worlds and yet they had fallen in love. Hatred from their families as land and sea kept them separated. Yet they still ignored the laws and went out together.

I'm just gonna put down the main plot of the my original story, "Tales of Origin", which was about the past story of how Sonic, Shadow, and Silver's TRUE parents met, just in case some other people haven't seen it from my gallery (It's in "Story Ideas 1)

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Title: Tales of Origins
Couples: KazexSapphire (OCxOC)


Story Plot:

Sonic, Shadow and Silver had invited their friends to their home for a sleepover. At night, they've got overexcited that they hardly went to sleep. Sapphire told them a common bedtime story for them but it didn't work. Until Darren decided to tell them a TRUE story about a romance between a merhog and a prince.

Once upon a time, *Cosium and *Atlantis were once an alliance, a friendship was bond between the Kings of the two kingdoms. Cosium had two young Princes, *Kaze and *Darren. And the Atlantis had a young beautiful Princess, *Sapphire. The royal young ones had already met by a small coincidence, they had soon become best friends and small romance blossomed between Kaze and Sapphire that they secretly made a love pact; At first, there was a bit of happiness fallen upon the two Kingdoms.

Until a war, Wrath of Magic War, broken the friendship of the kingdoms because of some misunderstandings. You see, during the war, a Cosium witnesses saw their King was murdered by a citizen of Atlantis, and at some time, someone killed the Queen of Atlantis which had broken the hearts of the Kingdom. Ever since then, land and sea, Cosium and Atlantis was enemy. The King of Atlantis and the Queen of Cosium managed erase the childhood memory that Kaze and Sapphire met, forgot their feeling that towards to each other. But that would never stop the wheels of true love running! What kinds of challenges await them? Who was the mastermind behind all of these? Can true love stop before a war fall upon once again to their kingdoms?

Story contain tragedy, romance, hurt/comfort, family and mystery.


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So, what do you think? As usual, don't think, COMMENT, BUDDIES!!!! R&R! AND NO FLAMES PLZ!
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Comments: 155

cyborg802 [2017-12-03 00:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Can you make mario and sonic tale of two kingdoms once upon a time mario luigi sonic and tails went to the picnic with princess peach but suddenly bowser dr eggman and the koopa troop and infinite snivley and the robots came and battle the quartet but then a evil figure that came from the darkness his name was lord eclipus a evil dark one who wants to fuse the sun and the moon and banished the quartet to a time and kidnaps peach and takes her to his domain later mario and the others found themselves in two kingdoms and they met kaze sapphire darren and benonic and they went to the cosium castle meet mortesen and Athena and they went to atlantis and they also met posiden marissa nenna and sand but now the wrath of the magic war broke out because of eclipus' darkness rakar killed his brother and the queen is poisoned and the crystal of power is shattered into 12 colors into 12 different worlds and cosium and atlantis broke their friendship and turned enemy but it's up to mario and the others to stop eclipus and save the world

the colors are red orange yellow green blue indigo violet purple pink cyan magenta and crimson

lord eclipus' appearance was a black robe and a amulet with a ruby on his neck and white eyes and mouth and sharp teeth and sharp claws and black skin and a horned crown and long gold pauldrons

and his final form was demonic wings and legs fused into a serpent tail and he had long demon horns on forehead

He watched the heroes in his orb and draw his power in it

his powers are umbrakinesis black magic corruption dark energy balls trickery teleportation travel freeze and slow down space and time levatation black lasers

the worlds are grass desert snow jungle sea rock sky volcano giant prehistoric space and 8bitΒ 

it has musical numbers

and add bosses bowser and eggman tree monster sphinx snowball with arms and legs and eyes snake angler fish mole big vulture lava golem giant fat round body shape t-rex alien in a spaceship with ray gun arms and antenna that shoots a laser and a shape shifting 8bit character and you can make up the 12 names for the bosses

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in the happy ending kaze and sapphire are married and Athena and posiden apologized that they did wrong and mario sonic luigi tails and peach go home and they celebrate

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LittlePippy33 [2017-05-02 04:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Woah. This is ASTONISHING!

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JemelicaThunderheart [2016-09-25 00:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Why am I thinking of King Arthur all of a sudden.
This is sooooooo romantic. 😍

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M3RDIIA [2013-08-25 03:19:57 +0000 UTC]

so romantic

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SonicRanger-1 [2013-03-28 18:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Inspired by my favorite song. *sigh* How romantic!
I always imagine a romantic pic like this with a couple of my characters when I listen to that song, but I can't draw well enough to make it.

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LiyuConberma In reply to SonicRanger-1 [2013-03-29 06:51:32 +0000 UTC]

Just keep practice, that's how I always do.

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Malesx [2012-12-01 18:30:12 +0000 UTC]

very romantic i love it

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LiyuConberma In reply to Malesx [2013-03-29 06:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! XD

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Malesx In reply to LiyuConberma [2013-03-29 17:54:18 +0000 UTC]

you welcome my dear

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Malesx [2012-12-01 18:29:39 +0000 UTC]

very romantic i love it

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AnUnfoldedPaperTiger [2012-08-04 04:30:11 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THAT SONG! And I love the art too.

"So close to reaching that famous happy end. Almost most believing this one's not pretend. Now you're beside me, and look how far we've come. So far, we are so close."

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LiyuConberma In reply to AnUnfoldedPaperTiger [2012-08-04 04:55:18 +0000 UTC]

Yea, love that song and so true on the lyrics... ^///^

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Indayia [2012-07-25 01:52:17 +0000 UTC]

So sweet and romantic.. just drop dead Ahhh!!! I just love it!!! sorry I love sonic stuff

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LiyuConberma In reply to Indayia [2012-07-25 02:29:35 +0000 UTC]

^w^

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littleshadow3 [2012-06-25 00:05:17 +0000 UTC]

i an't wait!i'm jumping out off my fur in excitement

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CaramelLink [2012-02-10 19:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work.

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517Inuyasha [2012-01-11 23:00:47 +0000 UTC]

good art and story!

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lulii999 [2011-10-29 12:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Love the story, talk about Romeo and Juliet!

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CatLoveThieF [2011-08-27 17:56:27 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW

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Merboy6120 [2011-05-09 20:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for making this!

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LiyuConberma In reply to Merboy6120 [2011-05-09 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Merboy6120 In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-05-10 20:16:40 +0000 UTC]

I really love you works

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amijam [2011-04-26 14:47:48 +0000 UTC]

enchanted music much hahaha..well it fits the theme since that's it has the title of the song

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LVMeng [2011-02-17 03:59:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm thinking bookmark for this one XD or maybe print because I have no idea if that will fit on a bookmark XD

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SakuraMitsonomi [2011-02-07 01:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Omigosh! I got an ocarina for Christmas too!

Anyways, I looove the art you do, especially the comics!

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LiyuConberma In reply to SakuraMitsonomi [2011-02-08 21:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thankies.

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Sabrina5050 [2011-02-04 18:24:51 +0000 UTC]

this is waaaay past cool

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LiyuConberma In reply to Sabrina5050 [2011-02-08 21:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankies.

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Sabrina5050 In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-02-08 22:57:58 +0000 UTC]

ur welkomes hey if u r interested since ur so good at ur art maybe u can check out the contest im posting

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AnnieXBen [2011-01-23 03:52:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this picture!!!!

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LiyuConberma In reply to AnnieXBen [2011-01-24 23:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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AnnieXBen In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-01-25 10:13:24 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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NIGHTLYTHEWOLF [2011-01-22 03:01:44 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful!XD

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LiyuConberma In reply to NIGHTLYTHEWOLF [2011-01-22 06:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankies.

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NIGHTLYTHEWOLF In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-01-23 20:11:47 +0000 UTC]

welcome.

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yachiniji [2011-01-14 04:07:08 +0000 UTC]

This picture is very beautiful~

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LiyuConberma In reply to yachiniji [2011-01-22 06:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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yachiniji In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-01-25 02:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. Hope you make more beautiful pics.

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shadowXtikalfan [2011-01-12 04:19:49 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!!! It sounds so cute!!

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LiyuConberma In reply to shadowXtikalfan [2011-01-22 06:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Thankies.

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shadowXtikalfan In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-01-22 06:11:49 +0000 UTC]

lol, ahahha so whats new?

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LiyuConberma In reply to shadowXtikalfan [2011-01-22 16:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh just busying with the original manga thing for this May.

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shadowXtikalfan In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-01-22 23:23:27 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!

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0CloeTheHedgehog0 [2011-01-08 20:18:43 +0000 UTC]

i love it like all your pictures

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LiyuConberma In reply to 0CloeTheHedgehog0 [2011-01-22 06:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks.

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kia2849 [2011-01-06 01:04:28 +0000 UTC]

soooooo cute i think i going to scream

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LiyuConberma In reply to kia2849 [2011-01-22 06:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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kia2849 In reply to LiyuConberma [2011-01-23 06:43:34 +0000 UTC]

u welcome

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mshadowmeg [2011-01-05 01:48:03 +0000 UTC]

oh thats sounds so sweet! *0*
you should totaly write this! X3

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LiyuConberma In reply to mshadowmeg [2011-01-22 06:11:12 +0000 UTC]

I will!

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