Comments: 23
FlitShadowflame [2006-11-18 07:10:23 +0000 UTC]
you said to point out discrepancies, so I'll do so. for his left arm, the best way to fix it I can think of is sharpening the angle for his bicep. Or, you could try for a rotation/foreshortening effect (affect? I always get those two mixed up) but that would mean turning the hand so the palm is not visible to the viewer at all. As has been previously stated, the torso is slightly lopsided, but the belt is also a little lower than the hips should logically be. To fix that, you'd only have to move it up a tiny fraction of a centimeter, but I think it would help balance the torso a little more. You could cheat and just make the belt wider, too.
the main problem with the left hand? it looks like someone bent it in half, lengthwise. If you hold up your own hand, thumb turned toward you and palm down and parallel to the ground, you can barely see the other fingers. Mahaado looks like a contortionist with his hand like that, or some poor fellow with a broken/out of socket thumb.
the rest of it is really strong work, though; I like your style better than some manga artists!
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DarkflowerNeko [2004-06-08 23:51:51 +0000 UTC]
He needs a bigger chest...hmm....uhh yeah his elbow is poistioned wrong and uhh are his eyes alittle too small or is it me? lol he needs to be manly looking because he's a man isn't he?
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Hezzer [2004-06-04 02:00:45 +0000 UTC]
I don't really think anything is wrong with the torso...But the arms look too wide and short in comparison. Just me mumbling...It's very good!
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WolfHowlofDeath [2004-06-02 21:51:11 +0000 UTC]
o0o i saw him before in pictures of future episodes,i didn't know his name,KOOL MAHAADO!!
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SanguineousRose [2004-06-01 23:09:07 +0000 UTC]
::looks at picture, and reads comment::
::scans at it::
You weren't imagining things. Something is a bit off with the torso. If you put a line through him exactly, you might notice that he seems to be a tad leaner on the viewer's left side than on the right. I think the problem might be the line of his clothes on the viewer's right side. The torso-part of the robe looks as if its directly connected to that jewel on the Viewer's Right Side. (Since it's annoying to write it out, I'll just refer the sides as VLS or VRS.)
See where it just ends, that line that stops at Maahado's left arm? Yeah. I think that may just be the source of the off-ness.
Nothing seems to be wrong with his left hand. And the belt just compliments his... very nice torso. ^^ Heh.
Anyway...
Shall be looking forward to more of your fantastic drawings!
*~Rose
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tamayouchi [2004-06-01 03:09:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh WOW! Can't wait until he's coloured!
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storm90XM [2004-05-31 22:46:30 +0000 UTC]
that looks awesome!! i luv the pose. outfit is awesome!
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kyarorin [2004-05-31 22:16:42 +0000 UTC]
He looks awesome to me. I'm really impressed with the folds in the clothing.
Mrah, you'll find quite a few doujins that give Mahaado blonde hair. X3
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GutterFlowerGirl [2004-05-31 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]
MAHADO!!! ^_^ I miss him
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shadowwaker [2004-05-31 19:32:20 +0000 UTC]
aah, mahaado! *glomps*
He looks a bit different, his costume I mean. Those spikes on his crown-thingy are shorter. There are some other things that don't seem quite right, but I don't mind... It's still a cool drawing.
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swerly [2004-05-31 19:25:59 +0000 UTC]
This looks kool, you mind if i put it on my forum?????
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swerly In reply to Lizeth [2004-05-31 19:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanx.. here the url http:// [link]
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