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Published: 2007-01-19 09:54:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Theres a girl i know,
she broke me once
I call her the inspirational angel.

A few guys I know like to write for her,
about her,
poetry of intense feeling.

Though this feeling be filled with confusion over love, anger and hate,
I still find myself jelous
that i myself, am not quite such an inspiration to those who love me now

And so here i am, writing my own poem about that girl,
a poem that was supoosed to be elegent,
in honour of that inspirational angel.
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Comments: 7

hobobill [2007-01-29 08:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Love you!

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lizpiz In reply to hobobill [2007-01-29 08:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Your online!?! I love you too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hobobill In reply to lizpiz [2007-01-29 08:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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lizpiz In reply to hobobill [2007-01-29 08:58:39 +0000 UTC]

yayayayay!

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hobobill In reply to lizpiz [2007-01-30 06:47:57 +0000 UTC]

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Chocban [2007-01-19 09:58:18 +0000 UTC]

LEAVE IT WHERE IT IS...I like it

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random-cheeky-monkey [2007-01-19 09:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Well, I like it and I say keep it...

(...might run it through a bit of a spellcheck though)

I think it's really good

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