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LizzDurr121 — One Moment
Published: 2011-07-28 00:31:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1444; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 16
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Description It was one moment to show love.
It was one moment to change a life.
It was one moment to impact someone.
It was one moment to give them hope for a better future.
It was one moment to make them smile.
It was one moment to encourage them.
It was one moment to hold their hand.
It was one moment to hold them.
It was one moment to give them memories of happiness.
It was one moment that they would never forget.
But it was that one moment,
You decided wasn't worth it.
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Comments: 15

shadewalker-94 [2011-07-30 22:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Small, but great truth.

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Postmorteum [2011-07-29 14:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem. Sad point but true, it happens, everyday.

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violetasilvestre2011 [2011-07-29 01:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Short but really well done!!

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Aifos96 [2011-07-28 20:20:25 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem to moving words, some people are just too cruel.

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Bickhamsarah [2011-07-28 15:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Great job!

Though that's awful about the others that wouldn't spend time with the little ones...

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deng-li-xin32 [2011-07-28 12:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Well written, and I agree. It's so sad that people would go on a mission trip and then not even do what they went there for! :/ Thanks for writing this!

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blue-eyed-bee [2011-07-28 09:48:27 +0000 UTC]

wow. a camp like that sounds amazing! to be given such a wonderful opportunity to help someone who needs it, that's something you can't miss out on... pity the church friends didn't see it... i'm glad you got the most out of it, and made the best of it ^_^

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Confuzzledness [2011-07-28 05:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Selfish. Immature. Stupid. I can't beleive they would do that!!!!
I love the poem. I love the message that goes with it, too.

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WritingxSQUIRRELxFTW [2011-07-28 05:29:50 +0000 UTC]

That's just seriously messed up. When you go somewhere to help, you help, you don't just chat with your friend.

Glad you yelled at them though.

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PATluvme [2011-07-28 02:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow those kids were being selfish! D: That's terrible! I'm glad you stood your ground for what your mission was there unlike those kids! D: I hope that later on in their future when they have another chance to help out that they will take it! Love this poem! Very nice. You're a very nice person and I'm truely glad that your spreading your love and kindness with others. You're an ispiration! I hope that you achieved what you went for :3 God Bless you a trillion times! <3

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snoogaloo [2011-07-28 00:36:48 +0000 UTC]

sounds like they missed out on the whole point of why they were there and doing what they were doing in the first place.
sad they missed out on that

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LizzDurr121 In reply to snoogaloo [2011-07-28 00:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. It was really sad because I know so many people could have had their lives changed but in that moment, they didn't care. :/

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snoogaloo In reply to LizzDurr121 [2011-07-28 00:39:24 +0000 UTC]

glad you got something so good from it

and by the way really well written poem...very well put and has a really good flow to it, too

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LizzDurr121 In reply to snoogaloo [2011-07-28 00:44:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you(:

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snoogaloo In reply to LizzDurr121 [2011-07-28 00:46:14 +0000 UTC]

you're so very welcome (: (:

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