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otherland78 [2014-10-07 18:47:26 +0000 UTC]
oh haha you already continued it ;_)
hehe i really have to do this mentos with coke some day soon and see for myyself what it is like ?
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llamaapocolypse In reply to otherland78 [2014-10-08 03:19:46 +0000 UTC]
Indeed I have, 5 chapters up on here in fact.
To be honest, I wouldn't know. I'm a feeder not a feedee. You should give it a go and let me know.
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VeemonUp [2012-06-25 01:15:35 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! I hope your next chapter comes out soon!
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VeemonUp In reply to llamaapocolypse [2012-07-07 21:47:01 +0000 UTC]
It's great! Do you think you will get part 5 up within the next month? I can't weight for that one.
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llamaapocolypse In reply to VeemonUp [2012-07-08 07:44:05 +0000 UTC]
Heheh, thanks! I'll try to get it up in the next few days if I can. I'm trying to decide where to take the plot and what to do to Oli next.
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reostzombie13 [2012-06-13 20:06:41 +0000 UTC]
This is exactly what I'm looking for when I'm reading this kind of stuff. Keep it up! The details you give about the subtle body changes and Riley's goal helps a lot. A lot of time the character is treated like a balloon and really takes me out of the story.
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llamaapocolypse In reply to reostzombie13 [2012-07-07 09:51:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I feel the same way. That's why when I write I make Riley behave in a way that shows that she doesn't only find Oliver attracte but she loves him as well.
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xxXXdei-deiXXxx [2012-06-07 02:37:22 +0000 UTC]
X3 hehe i love it! this is getting really great~ <3
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Joltsgal [2012-06-05 17:02:23 +0000 UTC]
This is getting really good, but don't be afraid to get even more explicit. Step outside your comfort zone a little it won't hurt you any.
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llamaapocolypse In reply to Joltsgal [2012-07-07 09:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I just posted chapter four, I owe you some smut but bear with me I'm recovering from writers block.
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Joltsgal In reply to llamaapocolypse [2012-07-10 17:56:09 +0000 UTC]
No problem I can't wait until I see what happens next!
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growinluvhandles [2012-06-05 13:33:31 +0000 UTC]
I am so glad you came out of the weight-gain writer's closet...you are really very talented. I am enjoying this tale immensely although it seems like I'm overeating as a reaction to reading it.
Oh well.... *patting belly* Probably won't hurt any.
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Sir-Walter-III [2012-06-02 18:44:17 +0000 UTC]
get more explicit. i write and read all sorts of novels and series and one thing i noticed is the bigger, riskier, out of your comfort zone steps you take the better your writing becomes.
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llamaapocolypse In reply to Sir-Walter-III [2012-07-07 09:55:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the advice, I'll give it a shot. Any particular requests?
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Mittles [2012-06-01 18:22:54 +0000 UTC]
This is quite unlike other stories, in my opinion. It is so well written.
Are you a regular writer?
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Mittles In reply to Mittles [2012-06-01 18:23:06 +0000 UTC]
pardon the accidental double message..
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Mittles [2012-06-01 18:22:25 +0000 UTC]
This is quite unlike other stories, in my opinion. It is so well written.
Are you a regular writer?
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