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LNIN9 β€” Deteriorating
Published: 2008-03-07 05:23:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 353; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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Description In case you don’t realize, in this
naturally decaying glass house, I am me.
I need to mend after this break.
You can’t make me fall in this bliss.
I can no longer see you in the shadows.
In the blink of an eye,
I have no need for you anymore.
You were as beautiful as the saddest rains.
A break in the clouds, a hole in my wall,
leave your footprints in the sand.
The calm after the storm.
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Comments: 7

cries-of-the-past [2008-03-07 23:30:18 +0000 UTC]

this is gorgeous.

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LNIN9 In reply to cries-of-the-past [2008-03-08 03:11:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you and thank you for the as well

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LNIN9 [2008-03-07 06:23:34 +0000 UTC]

that is my duty: to express emotions.....lol

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playacardzright In reply to LNIN9 [2008-03-07 07:32:43 +0000 UTC]

at least your so humble about it. that is a +!!

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playacardzright [2008-03-07 06:01:09 +0000 UTC]

the sun does eventually come out! this is promising although painful at the same time. i love how you express yourself in this piece, subtlety emotional but most of all.. DEEP!

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Love-G [2008-03-07 05:26:38 +0000 UTC]

Sad... but beautiful still

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LNIN9 In reply to Love-G [2008-03-07 05:30:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly.....

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