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Published: 2009-09-23 00:27:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 235; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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FINALLY!!! MY ARTBLOCK IS OVER!!!
. Anyways, remember some pictures I previously submitted here: Kota-> [link] & A_I-> [link] , well the dreams I had also had a few other characters in it. one of them being this character. :3 here is his bio:Name: Jerome
Age: 16
D.O.B: 04/12/1993
Species: Jackal / mutt mix
height: 5'10" *yes he's tall*
weight: 158 lbs
type of build: tall, athletic build
Skin color: light brown w/ orange tint, brown on tail, hands, outer ear, & belly
Nationality: Egyptian & Honduran
Hair color: Blackish/brownish
Eye color brown: dark brown
Personality: funny, kind, sensitive, basically the type of guy that looks intimidating but in real life, he's actually a really sweet & caring guy
likes: carpentry, surfing, hanging out with his friends, surfing the internet, writing & making songs, camping
dislikes: people thinking he's a mean guy, high-pitched noises, snakes, immature people, sour food, scary movies
Biography: Jerome is a nice guy, but he is insecure to new people, so it would take some time to really get to know him, but once he is your friend, he is a friend for life. Loyal, he can feel hurt when his friends drift apart. has a difficulty in relationships. The girlfriends he dates always cheat on him or take advantage of him, which caused him him insecurity mainly towards girls, but he hopes to find his 'true love', somewhere...
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Comments: 26
You're getting better...^_^
He's cute by the way.
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Aww, he is so cute!
I love the colours you used
And he matches your style a lot
Nice job!
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aww hes so sweet :3
you always think up really cool characters ^^
and your drawing skills are getting better and better
if you want crits then i would say his nose is under his right eye, little things like that but other than that the anatomy seems good :]
maybe look at real life images and see the shadows and stuff in them
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^w^ thank you very much. & thanks for the critique.
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no problem i'm happy to help out ^^
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Interesting! Nice characterization.
As far as the artwork itself goes: there's some discrepancy of the line of his back where it ends below the arm on the page-left vs. where it starts over his shoulder there. His neck looks like it is placed a little far forward also. Assuming the dark belly is in the middle, I would make it a little wider and place it farther left (page-left). The mouth is also very small comparatively, it may be just the expression, but I'd make it bigger, or at least make the lips and teeth bigger even if it's a puckered expression.
I don't know if you use the disney method of drawing circles and base shapes in a sort of pseudo-3D way to compose the character, then outline around that, but it's useful. I didn't really believe in doing that until I got into college, but it actually is helpful for visualizing form, even if you're drawing a 2D character.
As far as colors go, I would clarify the eyes a little, add a dark pupil and the whites of the eyes, then you can see them better from far away. Also, for clarity, I'd make the tail droop down where the hand is in front of it so they don't intersect; it's hard to tell one from another since they're the same color.
Hope this helps! 
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Thank you for the critiques. I appericiate them.
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Yay! I'm glad you appreciate them
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He looks so sweet,wonderful expression and colors.
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