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lokisbitch2019 In reply to LokisApprentice [2019-07-12 18:48:35 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, yes I'd like to read that! I'm writing my own LJ story and making it up as I go along. Loki will appear later on in it. I have a big surprise in how he factors in to his association with Jack. My story will be about his journey of healing and balancing of his dark and light sides. There will be heavy metaphysical metaphors involving dream work. The sex act between he and Adara wasnt just about a good time. Its sex magic involving healing Jack's root and sacral chakras that were damaged during his traumatic transformation years ago where he lost his colors. I'm going to use a dream I had when I get to the heart chakra part, where I climbed through a house where this upper floor green room was mostly burnt out and caved in. There will be a catharsis. And a lot of other things both literal and symbolic.
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Irriliahamato13 [2018-02-09 05:56:31 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD IT HAS BEEN SUCH A LONG TIME SINCE I READ A GOOD LAUGHING JACK LEMON!! 10000/ 10! I LOVED IT! THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!
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OtakuFangirl1200 [2017-01-14 20:46:43 +0000 UTC]
I usually don't read Creepypasta smut but your writing quality is fantastic and it was actually a believeable storyline.
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LokisApprentice In reply to OtakuFangirl1200 [2017-07-28 04:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you darling! I appreciate that. I really tried to do honor to Jack's character there, glad it worked.
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Midnight--Comet [2016-09-10 20:54:19 +0000 UTC]
This is..damn haha amazing
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Mellamew [2016-09-06 06:31:03 +0000 UTC]
One of the best ones I've read in a long while. <3
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ShyOtakuPrincess [2016-06-09 11:47:33 +0000 UTC]
*fAINTS with a slight nosebleed and screeches*
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mango-hana [2016-03-19 05:17:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gods this is amazing O.O
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LokisApprentice In reply to mango-hana [2016-03-29 03:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. Why thank you. If you like it, there's a semi-sequel that I had to move to another site. The link is under my journal entry titled Trust My Rage. Also, if you liked that, please read some of my other stuff. I'm updating on a more frequent basis now, and I just finished a fan favorite titled Who'd Have Known. Give it a look!
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derpyderp910 [2015-12-15 05:11:07 +0000 UTC]
*explodes* 👍
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LokisApprentice In reply to derpyderp910 [2015-12-16 02:03:07 +0000 UTC]
Haha! Thank you! There's a bit of a sequel if you would like to read that too! The link is on my journal here: fav.me/d8cyb3s And please check out my other stories. Another popular one is Who'd Have Known. Pass it around, it's almost to it's end!
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makattac0 [2015-08-20 22:48:43 +0000 UTC]
This is the best thing I have ever fuckin read before
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LokisApprentice In reply to makattac0 [2015-08-26 14:58:17 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. Why thank you. I appreciate that! There's another if you want to read it, but I had to move it to another site. If you look at my journal Trust My Rage, the link is there.
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MochaPandaPlush [2015-05-28 03:59:21 +0000 UTC]
WRIGHT MOOOOOORE!!!!!!! *splodes*
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LokisApprentice In reply to MochaPandaPlush [2015-07-06 06:05:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you liked it! There is more actually, but I had to move it because Deviantart was being a stup. If you go to my journals and look up the one called Trust My Rage, there's a link.
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LokisApprentice In reply to MochaPandaPlush [2015-08-11 14:58:25 +0000 UTC]
Only the two so far. There might be a third part if I can get it to fit in with the others.
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flashingredfangs [2015-05-23 02:06:29 +0000 UTC]
BEST. LJ. SMUT. EVER!
daaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyum! Just. Asdfghjklzxvcbm!
Red.exe has stopped working
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LokisApprentice In reply to flashingredfangs [2015-07-06 06:06:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm honored! Thank you! There's more if you want to read it. There's a link in my journal called Trust My Rage.
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ArrianaRadkeSixx [2015-04-29 21:19:10 +0000 UTC]
*UNCONTROLLABLE FUCKING NOSEBLEED* EEEEKKKKK IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LokisApprentice In reply to ArrianaRadkeSixx [2015-05-01 12:31:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I have another story that is related to it, but it got taken down so It's moved to another website. Check my journal entry Trust My Rage for the link.
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LokisApprentice In reply to creepypastafreak241 [2015-01-14 02:26:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. There is actually a sequel that got taken down but I'm moving it to another site. If you check the journal entry called Trust My Rage often, eventually I'll get the link posted up.
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Vahisa [2014-04-30 15:44:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that totally blew me away! You are a wonderful writer and that was amazing to read. I really liked how she has a thing for old things, the way you described her feelings to the box matched mine exactly. Great job on all of this!
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LokisApprentice In reply to Vahisa [2014-04-30 16:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Really? Thank you! Did it flow well enough? I thought it might have dragged a bit.
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