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Purpleguykin [2014-11-09 03:52:48 +0000 UTC]
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Technique
Impact
Okay so, first off I'll talk about the anatomy.
I'm not sure if you're male, female, Agender, ect.
but uh
ANYONE would know boobs do not work that way. They are not circles/spheres, even if they were fake they would not look like that.
Also, with those boobs being that...enormous..her Nipples would be showing.
Her Butt is also not correct, whether it be large or not. It's just...engulfing her thighs. That's not right, her thighs are not pert of her ass. Another thing about large breasts/butts are THEY. SAG. they do NOT stick out like that. That is verysexuallizing and actually really offending.
Nailing this whole section down: Her spine would be snapped in half if this were real.
Also: Her tail is really
Next I'll look at the technique. The lines are, actually pretty good! i don't see any lines going through the others, all of them are nice. Good work on those c:
The Coloring isn't THAT bad, but it's very bland and a low of the shadows are moving
the only reason impact is 5 stars is because this literally scared the hell out of me when I first saw it.
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1supermushroom [2014-12-12 03:24:51 +0000 UTC]
My question is what does lollie actually look like irl? O.o
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1supermushroom In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-12-12 03:38:56 +0000 UTC]
I was just wondering wasn't trying to get a picture of you or anything sorry.
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metroidfannumber2 [2014-11-12 10:31:30 +0000 UTC]
I always think its fun to have a character dress as another char. That shouLD happen e often Β should have a word for it.
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angel1985 [2014-11-09 12:55:59 +0000 UTC]
Looks great!
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darkstormskull [2014-11-09 12:36:44 +0000 UTC]
amazing work lollieΒ
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BlueSArts92 [2014-11-09 09:48:51 +0000 UTC]
Nothing can beat the original Lollie anyway.
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Seritaph [2014-11-09 05:10:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so we must blame the underwear!
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Seritaph In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 07:49:18 +0000 UTC]
Never borrow your clothes and then pull any strings on 'em, I take it!
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Mariodeblob41 [2014-11-09 03:57:03 +0000 UTC]
I heard you had some surgery before. What happened?
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Lollie-Narala In reply to Mariodeblob41 [2014-11-09 04:25:44 +0000 UTC]
i got a breats cancer , a tumor , they get it off without problem and now im on remissionΒ
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Mariodeblob41 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 05:05:55 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Thank goodness it was benign. Anyway, I like your new avatar. Where did you get it?
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Mariodeblob41 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 06:32:43 +0000 UTC]
Ok. Anyway, look out for . It's the China guy, an art thief. Be careful and ban him.
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Sdude1768 [2014-11-09 03:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Damn her butt can knock over a whole table!Β
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rouxls In reply to Sdude1768 [2014-11-09 04:15:16 +0000 UTC]
more like a fucking building
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Sdude1768 In reply to rouxls [2014-11-09 06:13:55 +0000 UTC]
yeah no kidding lol
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Lollie-Narala In reply to Sdude1768 [2014-11-09 03:07:31 +0000 UTC]
im jealous !!!! i have the best butt >.<
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Sdude1768 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 03:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Hey don't worry your butt is still hot too! and tbh you have the hottest butt ;3
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Sdude1768 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 06:14:14 +0000 UTC]
the best booty of all is you :3
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Sdude1768 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 16:27:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey np! *smacks your big round booty* ;3
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GoldLinaric [2014-11-09 02:50:05 +0000 UTC]
very lovely thank you so much
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SouthChickenGuy [2014-11-09 02:41:54 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work! x3
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Sephy90 [2014-11-09 02:41:00 +0000 UTC]
Very lovely. ^^ Looks like your clothes might be a form of fashion.
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Sephy90 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 03:10:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. ^^ That might work on my genderbent self since the hourglass growth might mess the armor up.
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Sephy90 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 04:27:16 +0000 UTC]
^^ Think that might help with the commission idea for mine?
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Sephy90 In reply to Lollie-Narala [2014-11-09 04:31:23 +0000 UTC]
Alright. ^^ *playfully scratching your ears like on an actual cat*
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