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SerenityFeueropal [2018-10-02 02:08:41 +0000 UTC]

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What I liked: The lighting is amazing throughout every panel and the change of the angles with each piece of dialogue is perfect. You make it look so effortless to draw your characters from any angle. I also think the gritty filter is a nice touch.

What could improve: The only negativity I spotted with this (and really the only reason I'm writing this) is that in Roland's mouth in the last panel, he appears to have a tooth popping out through his tongue. If I had to guess, I'd just say it was a layer order issue and is probably easily remedied.

Overall, I really feel Cassidy's desperation to prove his innocence when no one could believe he has an evil twin. Even his own brother cannot be convinced. Poor Cass!

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Lelmaster100 [2018-06-22 19:47:25 +0000 UTC]

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Another great job by Epic!
The visual impact of this comic is amazing, especially the lighting.
The dialogue is important to the story, and shows just how much everyone believes Cass and his tall tale about an evil copy of himself.
This also brings up questions as to whether or not Roland is Dark Cass, though we won't know until the judgement day.
The lighting in this comic is great, and you can tell that a lot of work was put into this.
There aren't many problems with this, except that the second and third panel are out of proportion.
Roland's muzzle has probably seen better days.

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Willowbrook105 [2018-07-11 02:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Poor casady

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doggokitty [2018-07-04 19:45:52 +0000 UTC]

I have some critique to make. Pros:

-The lighting is quite decent, far better than of what I can do.
-Cass's pose in the first panel looks realistic, very canine-like indeed.
-I also like how Cass's head hangs down in the 4th panel. It really defines him feeling sad, ashamed, or unsure of what to say.

What could use some improvement:

-Roland's muzzle looks a little crammed, as how the 5th panel is trying to not overlap the 3rd. 
-I can as well see the 2nd panel looks a little shaky. Is there a specific purpose for that technique.

However, there are very few cons to this. Awesome job, tho'!

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doggokitty [2018-07-04 19:33:41 +0000 UTC]

 Believe this, Roland. It's true. He really did get attacked by the wolf that looked just like him. And that wolf was the dark, evil side of Cass that bit Ridge's leg. You can judge between the neutral and villainous side of Cassidy by the glow in his eyes or not.
 

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RoyalQueenMidnight [2018-06-26 01:32:35 +0000 UTC]

#iloveyourart  
also please follow me
i have some thing you should base a comic off of

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CANIDStheInnovator [2018-06-24 01:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Very realistic

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masstransitkrow [2018-06-22 19:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the Final Fantasy XII plot with Basch and Noah Von Rosenberg

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NoTeaButMilk [2018-06-22 14:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice !
i make comics too!
Farthives : cover [ Episode 1 ]

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chaathon [2018-06-22 13:20:01 +0000 UTC]

All of that is Dark Cass's fault! D:
Why no one belive in Cass D: He cannot have done that :[

Anyway this page is so cool, as always! :]
(sorry for the bad english, guess i'm tired aha)

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Fail-Seeker [2018-06-22 12:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Cassidy has proof, doesn't he?

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NikoWantsAHug [2018-06-22 12:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Awww Poor Cassidy Q~Q

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