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Just a rando future look at OC Noire Bellows.Thrown together in a few hours. With some help from 's description.
I guess her weapon is supposed to be like brass knuckles that expand into a bow? I forgot to add a quiver... Shoot. Okay, fixed.
I'm hungry now.
I'll get to that weird comic idea later.
Boi!
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MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!
This child is amazing. And pretty. And beautiful. And perfect. And literally the best thing ever.
I see you've made some changes to her design. Not that I care of course, she's your OC; you're allowed to do what you will with her appearance. Actually, I rather like the idea of her bow becoming some kind of brass knuckle. Then she can punch dudes in the face! I mean, swords are cool, but nothing really beats the feeling of decking some evil person.
I see you also went for a more "lingerie" kind of shirt in the upper chest area instead of a cut-shoulder shirt. I think this suits her personality though! Her tattoos are also pretty good with the illusion that her arm is absolutely covered in tattoos with the larger and more prominent ones being shown and the others being represented as green blurs. I like that; it saves time coloring and looks good too.
And how could we forget those stylish glasses and that rocking curly hair?
I won't go on and on about her appearance, but I really enjoy the changes you've made. My description was rough anyway, so don't expect me to flip out like a whiny bitch about how she looks now isn't EXACTLY how I described her earlier. And again, she's your OC, so there you go.
In less whiny news, thanks for drawing her. She just looks fantastic, enough said. It's almost like Oran and Nichol fused together to make... Oh, wait, no, that actually is what happened.
And with that having been said, I'm going to shrink away to my dark corner of the internet where NO ONE can find me or ridicule me on the dark and forbidden fanfictions I create! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
But not actually; it was just a joke.
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Glad you like it! This is by no means a final version of her, I'm just trying to stick to my New Years resolution of drawing at least a little everyday. How's that going you might ask? Well, video games and the internet still exist soooooo.... it's a work in progress.
I kinda winged her weapon honestly, but the more I look at it and think about it, I'm kinda proud of it. I suppose it's more of a spiked knuckle than a brass one, but whatever, it makes your punchies more punchtastic. And I think it suits her to have a more blunt force option for her weapon, I mean her dad was one of the many kings of punching. I bet he'd teach her to throw a haymaker or two. I wanted to draw a different pose with the bow form, but I was dying of starvation at the time, so we'll put that in the later pile I suppose.
Also I totally gave up on her tattoo at a point. THIS IS WHY I GAVE EDEN LONG SLEEVES!!! I could only think of like four types of flowers at the time. Like I said before, my brain was focusing on food at the moment.
Glad you like the glasses, they are 90% of the reason I wanted to do this. I saw those style glasses somewhere and immediately wanted to draw them on her.
Enjoy your darkness and your corners. I'm gonna stand here on this rooftop throwing my art into the air, screaming into the void for attention. Wondering how I'm ever going to live up to that damn Qrow and Jaune picture I did which is by far the most popular thing I've ever made and it literally took me a few hours to throw together, but I can spend weeks in something and NO ONE BATS A GOD DAMNED-
Okay, tiger got out of the cage for a second there. The moral of the story is; To each there own.
Lastly!
Did you notice her armbands?
(Nudges you with elbow)
Did ya?
(Nudge)
Did you see the colors I used?
(Nudge again)
Huh? Didcha?
It's a reference.... did you get the reference? Did you see the thing I did?....
Please notice how clever (I think) I am...
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Yeah, I noticed the armbands. But I'm too stupid to understand clever references. Could you please explain?
And don't worry about never living up to your other stuff. The important thing is that you're doing what you love doing, and that's great! So keep doing all the Grimmwalkers and Oreonnas, because at least someone (usually me) will love it. This has been your SuperKamek inspiring soap box quote of the day. Thank you and goodnight.
Originally I came up with the idea of Noire having sort of like a dust sword or something, but when you say how her father taught her some fighting techniques this choice actually makes a lot more sense. So good on you for that one!
But she's keeping the shadow semblance.
I want to make Nichol suffer and always see a bit of her brother in her daughter.
Am I doing it? Am I sadistic now?
Also glasses. You're right, purple glasses was a good choice for her. Because she rocks them like Glynda Goodwitch does, and glasses are just... cute. Shitty kids in the 80s kept making fun of people with glasses and now glasses are actually some of the best articles of clothing you could ever put on your body. I just love glasses, and I kinda wish I didn't have good vision so I could wear them.
And now that's just creepy.
But hey, what can you do?
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Oh well we GOTTA torture Nichol! That's one of my favorite past times! I think it delicious that Noire and Sterling share the same semblance. I did have an idea for a story about some Hand of Humanity remnants finding out about her and seeing her as their former leaders second coming, and trying to take her from her home. Mainly just an excuse for Oran, Nichol, and Noire to get in a big family fight against some jobbers. No idea when or if that'll ever be a thing. So for now I figured I'd just torture you with that brief synopsis.
I do continue to enjoy the things I do, and you're right, that's al that matters. Not everything I do needs to get a 1,000 likes/reblogs/favs. Appreciate you reminding of that.
I won't explain what the colors on the armbands references, but I will give a single hint that will give it away.
Notice there's four, and why is one of them two colors?
There ya go.
Also, yes, glasses are awesome.
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OH SHIT!
How did I not see that?! Its the Team MOON colors! Gifts from the aunts, I suspect? I would guess Noire's really just every Team MOON member rolled into one, or better yet continuing the legacy of Team MOON on her lonesome. Very interesting!
That sounds like a pretty cool story, BTW! But you're right, you should focus on some more important things right now. I know how difficult it is to get an idea out of your head once you've thought of it, and from the moment you think it you have the urge to just do it instead of what you're trying to accomplish. Why do you think I have so many unfinished stories? I keep doing ideas to get them out of my brain so I can focus on other things.
Wow, what a great segue into my next point! I think I brought up the idea that Noire is actually a reincarnation of Sterling, hence the similar semblances.
I was thinking of two things.
One, the nicer idea, Sterling's spirit would haunt Noire and drive her up the wall with his nonstop blabbing of a perfect world without Faunus and continuously reminds her how imperfect she is or how he's ashamed to call her his niece because of her Faunus traits. He also ridicules Nichol, unbeknownst to the latter of course, on how she married such filth of the world and hardly considers her related to him anymore. Eventually Sterling will come to terms with his situation of being trapped inside Noire's body, and although he never stops being a dick/xenophobe he does SOMETIMES offer Noire some advice on combat and the sort
Two, the darker idea, Noire and Sterling continuously switch back and forth within Noire's mind. One moment you could be speaking to sweet, pun-loving Noire and the next you could be talking to nasty, Faunus-hating Sterling. Both minds are able to take control of Noire's body whenever they feel like it which leads to them constantly fighting and bickering. But on rare occasions, one mind will get "locked in" to Noire's body and the other mind won't be able to switch until at least a day or so. This can apply to both minds. Noire does her best to try and rehabilitate Sterling so he doesn't cause too much damage, but sometimes words aren't enough...
You don't have to use these ideas. Hell, you can completely ignore them if you want: this was just a brain dump of mine. But I thought they'd be pretty interesting to bring up.
Wow, another great segue!
So I hate to bring it up, but are you planning to do anything with Oreonna and Maybelle's life after Team MOON? All but a question, you needn't do it right now and spend time from making what you love. But Oreonna is technically the main star of your little AU, and she's going through some hardships as well. I mean, her dad died, her mom ran away and she feels alone in her new school in the desert.
I am just killing it with these segues here.
Oreonna's Revenge! Yeah! Nothing else to say, I'm just excited for the next installment.
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Woo! You guessed the thing!
God the whole Sterling being in Noires head thing makes my skin crawl, but those are both pretty good ideas for me to ponder on when and if this ever comes to be...
I haven't actually put a lot of thought into what Oreo and May's live would be like after they graduate. Honestly I think you probably put more thought into it in your last chapter then I ever did. But I guess i imagine they just both lived awesome lives killing monsters and traveling the world. Hopefully neither of them die a grisly death and- I DON'T WANT TO THINK ABOUT THIS ANYMORE!!!
I actually just started writing the next chapter of Revenge earlier today, so I am well on my way to easing all that pain I created in the cliffhanger of the last chapter. Though I think I may need to change the title of it since her actual Revenge is incredibly far off...
I'm trying to be less long winded this time, not really rushing, just trying to get to the point faster and cut out unnecessary dialogue. I at least would like to get the team together by the end of the next chapter.
Then we can have a few getting to know each other chapters, lay the ground work for a couple relationships maybe, and then get Sterling in there to be MOON's primary antagonist.
Hopefully we'll get to the Vital Festival eventually, that will be interesting. Hell, everything after Tukson's death will be exciting I think! I just have to get there.
I actually just watched the first episode of Volume 2 again yesterday. Reading Tukson's body language during his scene made me soooooooo sad. And it's even sadder to think about what it'd be like if he had a daughter halfway around the world who has no idea what's happened to him...
why do I do things? I don't know. But I do them.
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Sounds like you have a pretty set game plan for how you want to structure the story. Hopefully we can get to Sterling and Neo sometime soon, because A) I just want to see Neo again, and B) I want to see Sterling to be as badass as you make him out to be. I know those events are a little way off, but just letting you know I'm super pumped to see them!
I kinda wish they did more with Tukson instead of just have him as a throwaway character to be killed. Though for ever Yin there's a Yang; I'm not sure if you would have enjoyed Tukson as much if he didn't die. Then you wouldn't make comics about him, I wouldn't ship him with Neo, you wouldn't make Oreonna or Team MOON and we wouldn't have spiraled into the hell of no regret with No Laughing Platter and Cookies and Cream.
Speaking of Cookies and Cream (another great segue by yours truly), I'd love to see more of Oreonna and Maybelle together, maybe traveling the world, killing Grimm and being so amazingly gay while doing so that it makes me cry tears of joy. After you're done all the more important stuff, of course. I'm actually writing a CnC shot now as an attempt to get back into the game. Let's see how that goes.
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Well... I kind of took a week off from writing/drawing there on... accident?
I had a week off and the new Legend of Zelda came and out and...
Yeah...
I didn't blink a whole lot during that week.
But I have got a few pages done! And I'm back to work in it now! Also I think I might just release it in smaller bits now. That way I can update sooner... hopefully.
By I'm excited for future installments! Especially the first meeting of team MOON! So far I've just got a buncha Oran and Oreonna being best buds forever! But grumpy Nicky is in the horizon as well as currently misunderstood Maybelle.
Good luck with your writing as well! I understand you're struggle a little more every day!
Why is it so hard to words make good!?
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You're lucky. I still don't have the new Zelda yet. I can yet still exist for a little while longer! But it's only a matter of time now before I succumb to the breath of the wild.
Hey, whatever you feel is right for the future of the story, go for it. If you feel like updating in smaller parts of the story is better for update times, no one's stopping you from doing what you need to do. Is your cat stopping you? No, its a cat. Albeit an evil cat, but a cat nonetheless. Am I stopping you? No, I'm just some moron who stumbled upon your stuff and writes stuff sometimes.
I've come to understand that the way we write these characters is vastly different. Hell, even the setting is different (Beacon for me, Shade for you)! But I think this has something to do with the fact I'm still learning about writing. I'm still young and I have a lot to learn, but I am learning and I do hope to match up to your level of storytelling someday.
Speaking of, I posted my new shot recently. Did you see it?
Until then, keep it up!
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I did! I read the thing! Then I reviewed the thing!
Thanks again! I really loved this one!
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