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Iceheart-Forever [2017-07-09 05:15:11 +0000 UTC]
What's a puma?😜
Her semblance reminds me of the tiger talisman from Jackie Chan Adventures. The talisman grants the holder spiritual balance. But if you break it you split in two becoming imbalanced, one half filled with positive energy(Yin) and the other half filled with negative energy(Yang).
Is 'Delsole' Tuksons real last name or did you make it up? If so how did you?
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LongSean22 In reply to Iceheart-Forever [2017-07-09 13:17:35 +0000 UTC]
Yuppers! The last name "Delsole" was one I came up with. It's a bit of a long story though.
Okay, so I read somewhere that Tukson's name was based off the book called "Under the Tuscan Sun", which has something to do with Tuscany, I don't know what really, I never read it. Anyway, Tuscany is in Italy so I wanted an Italian last name, so using google translate I searched for "under the sun" the Italian, but it was too long and didn't really sound like a good last name. So instead I looked up "of the sun", not exactly what I wanted, but I figured it was close enough. That translated to "del sole", then I just crammed those two words together. So yeah, Tukson Delsole. The more you know I suppose.
Lastly, I do remember Jackie chan adventures. It does sound similar to the tiger talisman, I never realized that. I don't know if I'd say Oreonna's darker haired half is "negative", but she might be a tad more aggressive. But I can confirm I was going for a ying and yang thing with her semblance.
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Iceheart-Forever In reply to LongSean22 [2017-07-09 19:43:33 +0000 UTC]
That's cool! I heard they made that book into a movie (didn't see it) but it sounds pretty good.
Oreonna of the sun? Forces of darkness better run.☀️
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TheJolteonmc [2017-06-03 04:35:28 +0000 UTC]
octavia melody cross between a name of a cookie and a cat
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Dawnslight3 [2017-04-25 08:22:06 +0000 UTC]
That weapon is so cool
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Allard-Liao [2016-04-22 01:33:27 +0000 UTC]
A bit of hilarity I just realized:
Oreonna's Semblance lets her split into two warriors; one dark-haired wielding a shield, the other pale-haired wielding a sword.
Just one week after you posted this, YouTube user "Mark" (full name Mark Zhang) released this fan-trailer www.youtube.com/watch?v=BfoRYP… for one of his RWBY OCs. In the trailer, the OC's enemies are two robots; one dark-colored and wielding a shield, the other pale(r)-colored and wielding a sword.
If that isn't a case of "Great Minds Think Alike," I don't know what is.
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LongSean22 In reply to Allard-Liao [2016-04-25 02:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah. I love those trailers!
"Silver" is my favorite. THAT is a creative weapon.
But yeah, that's a hell of a coincidence.
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skyking96 [2016-01-18 02:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Her reminds me of my death strings, but only by the fact that it's a violin weapon and the bow is a sword. All in all, well done.
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WhiteFreak14 [2016-01-06 19:17:37 +0000 UTC]
Look! Another comment from yours truly!
Nice weapon name! I was actually planning on calling it something cute like... Third Crusade... but hey, Symphonic Discord also sounds pretty cool. Sounds like two things that shouldn't be; symphonic usually goes with harmony and peace, while discord goes with... well... discord. It definitely goes well with Oreonna's whole "Two side" deal.
Or maybe I'm just looking too much into this. I dunno.
Intelligent, and book-smart, eh? Well, I think she may be the most badass nerd in Beacon. Wouldn't you agree? Yeah, Oreonna won't be blackmailed into doing someone else's homework anytime soon.
At all.
...I messed up the joke.
But I look forward to you traumatizing the character as well!
(P.S. What if her split copies had their own personalities? All the memories of Oreonna would be in each of them, but the white-haired one would be calm, kind and peaceful, while the black-haired one would be angry, aggressive and rude.)
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WhiteFreak14 In reply to LongSean22 [2016-01-07 13:35:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh, don't be so hard on yourself. You ARE clever! After all, you were able to make these amazing pictures, right? I'm not sure what that was supposed to mean, but just take it as a metaphor for "You're clever!", alright?
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WhiteFreak14 [2016-01-01 05:33:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see we've made this "Delsole" last name canon now, haven't we? No complaints here! I think it's a great last name! Also, Happy New Year's, mate! Hope to see even greater stuff from you this year!
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WhiteFreak14 In reply to LongSean22 [2016-01-02 03:12:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh no... I always knew this day would come...
Well, time to get the scotch.
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LongSean22 In reply to WhiteFreak14 [2015-12-25 03:36:26 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic. So glad this is a thing!
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Allsmiles98311 [2015-12-22 23:59:45 +0000 UTC]
(... I love that weapon. I created a character who used a Violin and Bow, however his Violin was also a gun, firing from the end with the tuning pegs changing the ammo type, and the actual bow for the Violin being strung with a Dust-String, like the strings of the Violin itself, Wind-Dust, to raise the gales and make them blow...
Ahem. The point is, that I think this is cool, and particularly love the colored pegs, and how much you can potentially do with that musical string-shield and bow-string sword. Very cool weapon design for me... oh, and, ah, she's cool to.)
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LongSean22 In reply to Allsmiles98311 [2015-12-24 01:45:09 +0000 UTC]
Your idea sounds fantastic though! I was never good at the whole "also a gun" thing.
So I guess I just went with dust-casting instead.
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Allsmiles98311 In reply to LongSean22 [2016-02-04 02:16:11 +0000 UTC]
(Worked out beautifully I'd say. And a preliminary glance has shown that you went further and made more characters to work with her. I'm going to have to look as I catch up here.)
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LongSean22 In reply to Allsmiles98311 [2016-02-04 04:13:04 +0000 UTC]
Yup! Here's where all this madness started.
NO REGRETS!
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Allsmiles98311 In reply to LongSean22 [2016-02-13 15:55:49 +0000 UTC]
(No regrets! No prisoners! No mercy! ... Those last two might be from a different series/media altogether. Still! One out of three ain't bad. Nods sagely.)
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LongSean22 In reply to alpacaMonty [2015-12-24 01:50:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow. You noticed the ear huh? Impressive.
Nah, in my head, I always had it as she came into Tukson's care after his White Fang days. And he never told her about his time with them... Which I'm sure would raise some questions with her when he was murdered by them.
I'll keep from writing a whole fan fiction in one comment.
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psychoman4 [2015-12-22 23:20:43 +0000 UTC]
is there a story behind why her left faunus ear is cut?
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LongSean22 In reply to psychoman4 [2015-12-24 01:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Jeez. Didn't know I made it that noticeable. Good eyes!
But no, not yet anyway. I just thought it'd look cool.
Feel free to come up with your own theories though.
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psychoman4 In reply to LongSean22 [2015-12-24 23:15:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm just one of those people who notice the more obscure and unusual details. As for theories/story something like Oreonna is the daughter of Tukson and Neo. She is proud of her faunus and human heritage, but it was Oreonna who convinced her father to leave the White Fang. Agreeing for them to meet in Vaccuo, but her father is killed. Inraged she tries to take revenge on Cinder's group for killing her father, but came face to face with her mother. Neo was conflicted about killing her own daughter, but was too loyal to Cinder and fearful of what Cinder would do to her daughter she fought against Oreonna to force her to retreat. During their fight a fire started distracting Oreonna into making a mistake and getting her ear cut by Neo's blade. As the hallway collapsed the last sight Neo saw was her daughter looking at her with tearful eyes. Oreonna did manage to get away, but not without spending the next three months in the hospital. Unsure of what to do next, she sat in the hospital bed as a grey haired man with a black suit and green scarf with a cane walked in.
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LongSean22 In reply to psychoman4 [2015-12-25 03:25:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I feel like I should start clapping now or something...
This is great! I endorse this and any other origin story you guys create.
Also, I'd read the crap out of this it if were a thing.
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psychoman4 In reply to LongSean22 [2015-12-26 03:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Truth be told I kind of just wrote it off the top of my head, but thank you VERY MUCH. Recently I have actually been working on my story writing so with your permission I'd like to write a full story for Oreonna continuing from what I've already told you and her journey to become a huntress at Beacon.
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LongSean22 In reply to psychoman4 [2015-12-26 06:09:28 +0000 UTC]
By all means. I kind of feel like I might be spreading my character too thin, but honestly I'm just thrilled you guys have taken to her so well.
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psychoman4 In reply to LongSean22 [2015-12-26 06:16:35 +0000 UTC]
Just her design alone is worth pursuing, but the idea of a daughter between Neo and Tukson, who could pass that up. Although, I will be re-evaluating how I want to do her story. WhiteFreak14 showed me their really awesome fanfic and I want to try and do something that does her justice.
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LongSean22 In reply to psychoman4 [2015-12-26 17:26:53 +0000 UTC]
Aww you guys.
I really look forward to reading what you come up with!
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psychoman4 In reply to WhiteFreak14 [2015-12-26 04:58:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow... just Wow... you really hit the nail on the head. The ideas for her weapon's functions were even better than what I was planning, just WOW it was awesome. I haven't read the other three chapters yet, but I am looking forward to them, just wow. I am just so grateful for you taking my little idea and just making it soooooo AWESOME!
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LongSean22 In reply to WhiteFreak14 [2015-12-26 01:43:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thanks so much, both of you!
I already read it and left a review on fanfiction.net.
This is really awesome!
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Tarsiereyes38 [2015-12-22 22:57:16 +0000 UTC]
She looks cool. I like her.
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Raptor-Comics [2015-12-22 22:55:13 +0000 UTC]
I see another "what if" comic on the way
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LongSean22 In reply to Raptor-Comics [2015-12-24 01:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Don't tempt me! I can't handle it!
...
Oh who am I kidding.
I'm already writing it in my head.
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Raptor-Comics In reply to LongSean22 [2015-12-24 04:43:12 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to see it, is it going to have some of your grimm in it?
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