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Lonma — In Me
Published: 2003-12-28 05:40:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description Constantly on my mind.
Held close in my heart.
The dull ache of my arms.
We're still so far apart.

Alone and with you.
Such a desired thing.
Trying to think through.
Is it just a fling?

I'm head over heels.
I know that it shows.
I couldn't keep cool.
Now everyone knows.

It's been two years.
Two years I've been dreaming.
In those dreams she waits.
An almost fated meeting.

It's just text on a screen.
I allow my interest to be keen.
But it makes some of my friends scream.
Is my love for you all it seems?

Assualted constantly by doubt.
I need to set my heart and mind free.
Many questions but just one answer.
I'll stay with you if you stay with me.
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Comments: 8

MemoryFinder [2004-04-01 05:06:18 +0000 UTC]

wow... i SO get this right now... i mean, not about waiting for a girl... but yah...

im sorry!!

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monotone-magpie [2004-02-12 02:31:03 +0000 UTC]

...I'm sorry I screamed

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monotone-magpie In reply to monotone-magpie [2004-02-12 03:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Nevermind...if it didn't hurt you, then I'll try not to feel bad.

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Lonma In reply to monotone-magpie [2004-02-12 02:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Nani?

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degausser333 [2003-12-28 20:04:01 +0000 UTC]

this is a great poem with alot of emotion, i enjoyed it.

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Katryn-Noquisi [2003-12-28 18:37:56 +0000 UTC]

beautifuly laid out rhythm and rhyme. The piece realy flows!

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Lonma In reply to Katryn-Noquisi [2003-12-28 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Katryn. That's one of the parts really confusing me. It's like.... way too good to have been made by me! Seriously, I'm so happy with how it came out. Just... can't believe I did it. -shakes his head-

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carnagefiend [2003-12-28 09:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Powerful. I love this.

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