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Published: 2003-10-18 08:18:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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Description No one hears my silent fall
No one sees my darkness
No one feels my shadow, small
No one steals my weakness
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Comments: 3

WulfeMoror [2003-10-19 04:00:48 +0000 UTC]

I've felt like that before... when I'm depressed and either nobody notices or nobody cares. Nice piece of work, to express so much in so few lines. It's been said already, but hey.

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Katryn-Noquisi [2003-10-18 23:40:25 +0000 UTC]

It does say alot.. even when it's suposed to mean nothing. Especialy in poetry.. nothing, is something

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daylightfading [2003-10-18 10:06:22 +0000 UTC]

it really says something when a poet can say so much in 4 short lines. i love this.

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