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loopy-lexyDecember 25th
Published: 2010-11-27 09:27:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 6212; Favourites: 293; Downloads: 86
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Description December 25th and I've had 365 days to forget
your aunt's incredible roast turkey and braiding tinsel
through your sister's hair and interpretive dancing
to cheesy carols with your drunken Uncle Mark.

Firelight flickered across the curve
of your lips, the shadow of your jaw
and boy, you were beautiful,
all smoke and cinnamon.

December 25th and I'm ignoring the urge
to mess up your sleet slickened hair
and the fact that your card now says "from"
instead of "love".

I almost don't notice the way your eyelashes
glitter with snowflakes
and the fact that you look adorable
while you laughingly attempt to make a snow angel.

December 25th and I'm going to cheer
along with the rest of them
when you kiss her under the mistletoe
and then I'll gush about how sweet her embarrassed blushes are.  

The pudding is brim filled with wishes
and maybe this year they'll come true better
than the last, because it seems "forever"
was too much to ask for.
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Comments: 102

loopy-lexy In reply to ??? [2011-01-07 05:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thanks for the fave!

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wufeisgirl [2010-12-26 01:45:43 +0000 UTC]

One of a very few poems i truly enjoyed reading.

Thank you.

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loopy-lexy In reply to wufeisgirl [2010-12-27 04:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's lovely of you to say so! Thank you!

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MonksTrunk [2010-12-23 14:16:47 +0000 UTC]

... touching.

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loopy-lexy In reply to MonksTrunk [2010-12-24 03:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RequiemsandReveries [2010-12-22 05:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and nostalgic

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loopy-lexy In reply to RequiemsandReveries [2010-12-24 03:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Nostalgic is my favourite word =]

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baby-h [2010-12-21 00:00:58 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAHHH! WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN!!!! Congrats congrats congrats my beautiful talented Lexy!!!!! xoxox

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loopy-lexy In reply to baby-h [2010-12-21 00:08:48 +0000 UTC]

I knowwwwwwwwwww!! Hahah I have so many messages to reply to!! >.< Eep!
P.S. Malex and I spent ALL of yesterday making ginger bread houses. It was exhausting.

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baby-h In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-21 00:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah frick I forgot to send you the template!!! Sorry But I'm glad you had fun haha, how many did you make?
But congrats this is really awesome and you totally deserve it. But yeah I was like "333 favourites? That's a LOT of people" hahaha

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loopy-lexy In reply to baby-h [2010-12-21 03:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah I know. It's ok. We've made 2 (one for him and one for me), we're decorating them right now but we ran out of choc melts so he has to go down to Coles and get some more. We spent from 2-10 in the kitchen yesterday making them (with a 2 hr break in between) and OMG never again! lol.
Thanks, I don't really think I do but it's really lovely anyway =] Yay half of evil!

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Eruhaha [2010-12-20 12:05:21 +0000 UTC]

You reminded me of some one with this.
Thank you for the bitter sweetness.

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loopy-lexy In reply to Eruhaha [2010-12-25 09:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment

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Eruhaha In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-26 10:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the lovely poem 'ㅂ'

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neonsquiggle [2010-12-20 07:42:21 +0000 UTC]

GOD, this hurts. But it's beautiful like that. o-o

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loopy-lexy In reply to neonsquiggle [2010-12-22 04:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww I'm sorry! Thank you very much!

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neonsquiggle In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-23 02:14:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm okay. It's amazing! (:

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zaouri1-80 [2010-12-20 07:17:00 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute dude, i think my best friend would enjoy this

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loopy-lexy In reply to zaouri1-80 [2010-12-22 04:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! =] Feel free to pass it on if you think so!

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zaouri1-80 In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-22 09:49:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks dude

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slyrunner [2010-12-20 06:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh I love it!

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loopy-lexy In reply to slyrunner [2010-12-24 03:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks!

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slyrunner In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-24 18:29:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem XD

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Tisala [2010-12-20 06:07:46 +0000 UTC]

This is really quite well done! The imagery invoked made me smile, especially when I discovered that it wasn't cliche! Yes, it's sad, but apparently the narrator has managed to get past all that and that made me gleeful.

Also, you must experience a wintry Christmas at least once in your life. They are epic. Trust me, the two feet of snow outside is making the world seem that much more beautiful.

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loopy-lexy In reply to Tisala [2010-12-25 09:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you didn't find it cliche
Alright, well, I'll put it on my to-do list!! It is definitely beautiful in my imagination =]

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Tisala In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-30 04:43:07 +0000 UTC]



Just remember to wear warm clothes (layers are your friend) and when buying hot chocolate, splurge.

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loopy-lexy In reply to Tisala [2011-01-02 07:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, well I am useless at layering so I definitely won't look fashionable Mmmm hot chocolate!! Will do

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Tisala In reply to loopy-lexy [2011-01-02 17:45:42 +0000 UTC]

So long as you're warm, fashion can generally go find someone else to bother.

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AdmiralSnow [2010-12-20 04:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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loopy-lexy In reply to AdmiralSnow [2010-12-24 03:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Lit-Twitter [2010-12-20 01:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. [link]

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loopy-lexy In reply to Lit-Twitter [2010-12-24 08:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SPEC-Nordanners [2010-12-20 01:32:38 +0000 UTC]

this is simply amazing!

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loopy-lexy In reply to SPEC-Nordanners [2010-12-24 03:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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SPEC-Nordanners In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-24 04:21:00 +0000 UTC]

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Vivilyna [2010-12-20 01:12:41 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, especially the second stanza

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loopy-lexy In reply to Vivilyna [2010-12-24 03:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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MartaNicolin [2010-12-20 00:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Really good. One of my favourite poems on dA, to date!

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loopy-lexy In reply to MartaNicolin [2010-12-24 03:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I'm so flattered! Thank you so much!

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MartaNicolin In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-24 04:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for sharing

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Birdie121 [2010-12-19 23:30:39 +0000 UTC]

I don't usually read poetry, but for some reason this caught my eye. It is beautifully done, invoking thought and feeling from the reader. Amazing writing

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loopy-lexy In reply to Birdie121 [2010-12-24 03:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading, then! I'm glad you liked it!

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Birdie121 In reply to loopy-lexy [2010-12-24 03:23:38 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Have a great holiday!

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ShadowsPuppetxxx [2010-12-19 21:52:17 +0000 UTC]

This piece is so beautiful but sad in a way.
I love it.

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loopy-lexy In reply to ShadowsPuppetxxx [2010-12-24 03:19:28 +0000 UTC]

I'd glad you like it! Thanks for the comment!

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Zillakiyah [2010-12-19 21:37:36 +0000 UTC]

I think that you did a lovely job on this.

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loopy-lexy In reply to Zillakiyah [2010-12-24 03:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for saying so! =]

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ThisBonelessOne [2010-12-19 21:32:51 +0000 UTC]

this is a beautiful piece and i am sure alot of people are experiencing this too.

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loopy-lexy In reply to ThisBonelessOne [2010-12-24 03:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, yes, I think a lot of people feel some sort of sadness at Christmas, even if not this kind.

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windfalcon [2010-12-19 20:38:43 +0000 UTC]

So very sad and beautiful. Great visualizations - it really feels like Christmas.

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