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"Yo, Auntie Shy!" Chakra Blossom called, stepping boldly into his aunt's cozy little cottage. "You home? I have a couple of questions. You, uh, know anything about bat ponies....?"

"Chakra?" Fluttershy suddenly came around the corner, looking quite surprised to find her nephew standing in her home. ".....Oh, dear. Pardon me, but, um...how did you get in here?"

"You still leave the key under the welcome mat. Maybe not the best home security tactic." Chakra chuckled. He caught her in a fond wing embrace, pulling her close. "Why, what's up? Not happy to see me? I'm hurt, Auntie Flutters, truly wounded."

"Oh no, I'm always happy to see you, sweetheart." Fluttershy smiled, and eagerly reciprocated his hug. Chakra felt his face heat at the warm affection, and he felt that niggling loneliness at the back of his mind, where he had so badly missed his aunt, her cottage full of animals, Uncle Bulk Biceps....and even his snooping cousin Rosemary. He missed having something that resembled a home. For a lone, rare moment, Chakra relaxed, and leaned down to press a kiss to his aunt's cheek. "Maybe I'll, uh, come visit more often, then."

"More than twice a year would be nice." Fluttershy sighed. She spared a quick glance down the hallway, then spoke in a hushed, worried tone. "Just, um....not right now, okay? You should leave and come back tomorrow for breakfast-Bulky's making blueberry pancakes-"

"Wait, you're not trying to get rid of me, are you?" Chakra's brows knit, now actually hurt. He scowled. "What, does Rosemary desperately need your help brewing more of her nasty health tonic teas? What does she need that's so much more important than m-"

"Chakra." Fluttershy interrupted her nephew's jealous tirade, placing a gentle hoof on his shoulder. "Listen to me, honey. Your mother is he-."

A voice-an awful, familiar, drawling voice-suddenly gasped behind the pair. "Blossom?"

Chakra bit back a swear-he'd vowed to watch his language around Auntie Shy. Instead, he drew a deep breath, forced a smile, and turned to greet the newcomer.

"Well, well. Spiritual salutations to you, Ma."

"Oh, Blossom. My sweet little baby Blossom." Treehugger lilted, offering up a tranquil, lopsided smile. "How wondrous of the universe to return my only son, to place my little blossom back into the loving light of his mama, to grow and flourish." She blinked unevenly, then giggled at a joke known only to herself. "I still remember the day you were born, y'know, I was just telling Fluttershy all about it. So soon after your father and I lay entwined in the way of cosmic bliss, I gave birth in a meadow to a tiny green foal-only at the time he wasn't so green, because he was covered in blood and fluids-"

"Haha, oh, Ma." Chakra laughed, but it was mocking, devoid of real humor. "You always had a penchant for telling the worst stories. Why don't you go off somewhere and meditate, hm? Don't you have some dream diaries to write?"

"Oh, you haven't changed a bit." Treehugger smiled serenely, and extended her arms. "Come to me, cosmic child. You've strayed so far away, but now the universe has sent you back to me, your point of spiritual origin. Come here, my baby. Back to mama's loving bosom."

Hell no. Chakra took a step back, wondering if it'd be rude to simply bolt from Fluttershy's house. He smiled wider. "I'd really rather not-"

"If you won't come to me, then I'll come to you." Treehugger advanced, and before Chakra could flee, she wrapped her arms around him in a tight hug. "Mmm, see? Feel the love and be cleansed, my son."

"Ma." Chakra did not like to be touched, not without permission, and especially not by his mother, who currently smelled of grass and wet dog and enough incense to choke a cow. "Let go, please-" He struggled in her hold. "Ma, stop-" Treehugger, sensing his discomfort, did her best to rock him soothingly, and began her strange, sonic therapy whinnying sounds, attempting to comfort his frenzied aura-

"Shh, be calm, bliss out, sweet child-"

"Get-" Chakra managed to get his hooves against her, and he shoved her away, "-Off!" Fluttershy touched his shoulder, and her eyes were pleading-but Chakra had had enough. He advanced on his mother, scowling down at her. "This right here? This is exactly why I left. You're goddamned delusional, Treehugger. You don't care a lick about me, or what I want-all you care about is the freedom to spout your stupid hippie crap. How many times did you leave me home alone-for days-just so you could go off on one of your stupid peace retreats and frolic in the woods? Hell, Auntie Shy's probably the reason I didn't starve to death, or got an actual bath every once in a while-"

"Chakra, sweetie-" Fluttershy tried to interject-

"You remember, don't you, Shy? When I was a colt-you even said it yourself-the worst flea problem you'd ever seen-"

Fluttershy did remember. Bathing and cooing over an itching, blubbering little colt, rubbing salve over bitten skin, bundling him up in a hug and reluctantly agreeing to his desperate plea not to tell anypony....but still, she bit her lip with resolve, and spoke sternly. "Dear, she's your mother."

"Oh, right." Chakra rolled his eyes, then fired a withering glare at Treehugger. "How long did it even take you to notice I left, Mother Dear?"

Treehugger paused, thoughtful. "Um, about four minutes, I think. You see, Chakra, I like, made you. In my womb. Although your umbilical cord is long gone, there's still a deep, spiritual connection linking you to me-a metaphorical, magical umbilical cord-"

"Oh my god I take it back, stop talking-

"So I sensed it right away when you left. I knew you flew away because your chakras were out of whack, and I wanted to help you, but....I dunno, I could sense that....you didn't want me to follow you." A shadow of some unknown emotion flickered across Treehugger's face. "So I drew spirit circles everyday and sent you blissful vibes, so that you could maybe..." Her tranquil drawl was fading. "Uh, feel how much I missed you."

Chakra blinked at her. "You missed me."

"Well, yeah, little dude, why wouldn't I? You're my baby." Treehugger smiled at him. "And I love you, Chakra."


Chakra's face grew dark. "....Liar."


Treehugger let out a quiet, dull gasp, and Fluttershy swiftly turned on her nephew, glaring. "Chakra Blossom-" She reprimanded sharply-

"Oh, what?" Chakra snapped. "I'm supposed to drop everything and fly into her arms because she said she loves me? It's a lie. If that were true-she would have been there for me, she would have been an actual, good mother. She would have at least tried. But she didn't, because for all her talk about love and harmony-I was still an unplanned little roadblock in her freedom, and she did her best to carry on with her hippie-dippie life as though I barely even existed." Chakra felt boiling, angry tears well in his eyes, and he let them fall, well past caring about holding back. "She doesn't care. She doesn't love me. She didn't miss me. It's all lies, Auntie Shy-and you and I both know it."
 
"Chakra." Treehugger's voice was now devoid of its normal dreamy quality, and she only sounded tired, and strangely sad. She reached out to him feebly. "...Sweetheart. Please, I'm telling the truth-"

Chakra ignored her, and turned to go. "As far as I'm concerned, you were a better mom to me than she ever was, Aunt Shy." He stopped, taking a moment to wipe carefully at his face, feigning indifference, even though his voice was quaking with emotion. "So...t-thank you for that. See you around, I guess."

Both mares called after him, but Chakra opened the heavy open door to the cottage, and simply took off, in a whirl of green feathers.

A heavy, painful silence followed.

"Fluttershy?" Treehugger said calmly, staring at the faded oak door. "If it's okay with you, I was wondering if I could, um, sit here, and maybe, like, cry for a bit?" Although she was still smiling that peaceful smile, tears had begun leaking down her cheeks. "I'm feeling like I kinda maybe blew it, so I have some, um, negative c-chakras I'd like to, uh, clear out...."

"Oh, Treezy." Fluttershy enveloped her friend in a hug, and let her cry in her arms, wishing she could fix this, wishing today had never happened. "I'm sorry."

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haha i meant to write this scene as humorous but it got dramatic instead whoops


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some info from Chakra's bio for context:

Treehugger and Zephyr Breeze never married, and Chakra was entirely unplanned. Treehugger birthed him naturally out in a flower field, and kinda just showed up on Zeph's doorstop like "hey lookit this foal I made lol". Because of the on again/off again nature of Treehugger and Zephyr's relationship, Chakra mostly lived with his mom growing up, with weekend visits from dad sometimes.

    The two of them were...pretty bad parents, with Treehugger being loving but wildly irresponsible (sometimes leaving kid Chakra home alone to go on various hippie retreats) and Zeph often feeling like parenting was "cramping his style". So Chakra was often neglected, and grew up to resent both his parents. As an adult he simply avoids Zephyr Breeze (Zeph is a little hurt by this but tries not to show it), while Treehugger...Chakra finds his mother incredibly annoying, with her constant, stupid hippie talk that she genuinely believes in. He can only tolerate her in small doses before the cracks begin to show in his "peaceful, unbothered hippie" facade, and he has to work very hard to control his temper and keep smiling while she coos over her sweet little "Blossom".
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Comments: 260

TLGdragon [2023-08-02 18:23:21 +0000 UTC]

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Undertaletrasha [2018-08-02 06:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Shit.
I do not know who to feel more sorry for in this scenario. I love treehugger, but she's not a good parent, I don't mind Zepheir post get off his ass and work episode, but he'd not be good either, and Chakra... I simply feel sorry for him. True, others in this verse have had a worse family and come out better, but I'm not so sure having loving but trash parents is better then just having abusive parents. (Jesus christ Jay shut up already) Because it's much, much harder to break away or avoid parents you know are good people who want the best for you, yet they're shit at parenting, then people who are just shit (Even abusive) Parents. Of course deliberate emotional manipulation on top of that makes it much worse.
TLDR, understand very much, where Chakra is coming from, and wish he'd found balanced friendships and/or relationships.

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Wolfina305 [2018-02-13 05:44:08 +0000 UTC]

just asking why is he a bit well....mad?

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F-ishyCookies In reply to Wolfina305 [2018-02-14 20:58:54 +0000 UTC]

Because Zephyr Breeze, his father, took absolutely ZERO care of him, and he's a huge jerk. Also TreeHugger was loving to him, but took like 10% care of him. So Fluttershy kinda cared for him and raised him.

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Wolfina305 In reply to F-ishyCookies [2018-02-16 10:16:11 +0000 UTC]

aww oh ok

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AmberOfTheMudSand [2018-01-08 06:58:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm new to these gen. And from what I see that kashara is upset of the fact that his mother is hugging him

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F-ishyCookies In reply to AmberOfTheMudSand [2018-02-14 21:51:26 +0000 UTC]

I know you're new to this next gen, so I just want to tell you Chakra's backstory

if you don't want to know please just don't read this.



Zephyr and TreeHugger are NOT married. TreeHugger hadn't seen Zephyr in ages, and all of a sudden: First Meeting  TreeHugger just showed up with Chakra without warning. Since they never married, Zeph took ZERO care of his kid and TreeHugger took almost 0 care. Chakra is an only child, and is a big jerk (well a more than that) and he's upset since TreeHugger took no care of him and he finds her hippie talk annoying. 

Hope this helped!

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AmberOfTheMudSand In reply to AmberOfTheMudSand [2018-01-08 07:04:38 +0000 UTC]

And I also think that tree huggers and zephyr children are still alive , only fluttershy didn't adopt him. And that's what I think happened because I'm not so well experienced with this gen

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AmberOfTheMudSand In reply to AmberOfTheMudSand [2018-01-08 07:02:25 +0000 UTC]

My opinion is that if it was real life, the government would have taken away the right to be the parents of their children, which in my opinion, that's what happened

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AmberOfTheMudSand In reply to AmberOfTheMudSand [2018-01-08 07:00:40 +0000 UTC]

My opinion is that it's because both parents were alcoholic and we're smokers and didn't spend any time with, because you know of that aura that they need around and keep it balanced

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SACRlLEGE In reply to AmberOfTheMudSand [2018-12-04 09:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Zephyr was young and didn't want to take care of a kid because it was "cramping his style", meanwhile, Treehugger loved Chakra but didn't take good care of him. It's in the description.

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Kyonarai [2017-12-12 07:16:58 +0000 UTC]

As a child who had emotionally distant and relatively, although not criminally neglective parents, this resonates with me very strongly.

One of my worst memories is being 14 years old and begging my Mom to take me to the doctor because my periods had stopped and my belly was getting bigger, and I had bad abdominal pain. My voice also dropped significantly and I was having horrible angry mood swings. I was a virgin, so I knew I wasn't pregnant. She kept insisting that periods are weird sometimes and could be irregular, but this was a definite issue. Finally, I reached out to my step dad that I didn't get along with, and begged him to make Mom take me to the Doctor...

I had a dermatoid cyst/tumor the size of a grapefruit on my right ovary, that was making 10 times the amount of testosterone as should be in a young teen girl's body, and they were so worried about it rupturing that they scheduled me for emergency surgery the following Monday. I lost my entire right ovary and gained a huge vertical scar from belly button to bikini line. If they'd have caught it sooner, it probably could have been removed with a less invasive surgery, but dermatoids are a mix of cyst like fluid and tumor like tissue, so it all came apart and was so ingrown that it took them awhile to get it all out, and had to take the ovary with it. And then I developed Hypothyroid from the lower amount of female hormones(from only having one ovary) while I was still growing and developing. Kind of a nightmare all around. I'm just blessed and grateful that it didn't prevent me from having my children.

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wilczus2 In reply to Kyonarai [2020-06-02 23:38:08 +0000 UTC]

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AviRayburn In reply to Kyonarai [2019-07-11 01:52:23 +0000 UTC]

This comment makes me thankful my parents are very kind people and actually take care of me.

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SpudsMcFrenzy [2017-11-29 20:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Not joking, did treehugger lick the baby clean and eat the afterbirth?

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Koalalova122 [2017-10-19 18:15:31 +0000 UTC]

moondancer and chakra are my favourites

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CoralineButtons [2017-09-13 23:43:21 +0000 UTC]

My Honey Nut Feelios.

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Orangcreme [2017-06-10 19:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks my fEELINGS

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AyosDesignz [2017-05-25 12:30:26 +0000 UTC]

 
 
 

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ChrysCorps [2017-05-09 13:09:50 +0000 UTC]

This may sound arbitrary, but I'am loving Fluttershys hair!

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bbb35 [2017-05-02 02:05:18 +0000 UTC]

So sad!!

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sassyquatvh [2017-04-29 20:17:28 +0000 UTC]

while that hug is going on, Fluttershy is just over there like, "Oh, shiiiiiiiiiiiii-"

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Anubis-hound [2017-04-03 06:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Chakra is definitely justified in his anger. I hope things turn out well for him in the end.

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Shiina-Mako-Chan [2017-03-26 12:25:16 +0000 UTC]

wait a minute, did fluttershy just comfort the idiotic sack of bones who neglected her own boy? is fluttershy really that oblivious to her own nephew being neglected? if i were fluttershy i would've cut treehugger and zephyr out of my life because of what they had done to chakra.

honestly how could fluttershy not have known anything about this? i know chakra lived with treehugger mostly but still... god...

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HayStarlight In reply to Shiina-Mako-Chan [2017-04-14 02:32:18 +0000 UTC]

well... it's Fluttershy, she's incredibly forgiving and she doesn't wanna shout at her friend or her brother. but maybe she should

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TheExhorsecist [2017-03-12 20:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay kids, pop quiz time!  Put away your books and phones and answer this question:

If Fluttershy's one older brother knocks up Fluttershy's one oldest friend, and then spends zero effort on the child, how many days does it take trifilin' good-for-nothin' brother to recover from the beating Fluttershy gives him?

Yes, you can use your calculators.

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DarkTentacles0666 In reply to TheExhorsecist [2017-06-17 11:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Zephyr is her younger brother. 

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lolzwaitwhat In reply to TheExhorsecist [2017-03-14 03:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Isn't zephyr her younger brother? 

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darksmirf [2017-03-04 11:28:53 +0000 UTC]

What a little shit

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ShaleZookeeper7 In reply to darksmirf [2017-11-24 06:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Can you really blame him, though? Treehuger and Zephyr did neclgect him pretty badly and werent really there for him when he really needed them. So I don't blame him in the least; he has every right to hate and be upset with his parents, and it is completely his choice if he wants to never speak to them again.

If you want my honest opinion, I think he should just cut them out of his life entirely.

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ShadyWinters [2017-02-13 03:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Man, its gotta suck having to live with not one but two neglectful parents. If I were in Chakra's place, I would definitely be feeling the same way.

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brunotoru [2017-02-08 03:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I'll like to see what happened to Treehugger ones she realize how his son feel about her and thinking in how much of a horrible mom she was for her only son.

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UabetAntu [2017-01-31 15:31:39 +0000 UTC]

I just made a stomach-turning connection to something Chakra said.

"When I was a colt-you even said it yourself-the worst flea problem you'd ever seen-"

Now, recall that in Flea Bath (lopoddity.deviantart.com/art/F… ), Stormy says that it was Chakra that suggested he forego bathing, which resulted in Stormy needing to be shaved. Meaning that Chakra willingly and intentionally inflicted the same pain he went through on another pony, one that he was ostensibly dating. Honestly, that's really frellin' low, and a pretty good example of just how terrible Chakra is capable of being.

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Snoop-Katt In reply to UabetAntu [2017-02-09 12:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit.  

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Roseymia7 In reply to Snoop-Katt [2017-12-09 00:03:29 +0000 UTC]

 

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Diablo2000 [2017-01-28 06:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Man i hope he lets hsi father have it too! Stinking failure of A FATHER as well!

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Shiina-Mako-Chan In reply to Diablo2000 [2017-03-26 12:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Wish granted! lopoddity.deviantart.com/art/N…

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Diablo2000 In reply to Shiina-Mako-Chan [2017-03-27 14:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Well i hate to say  really do, but Zephyr changed alot.
When his son said  it's ok Dad, the old him would accepted that to go back in state of denail bout his screw ups.
But isntead he refused to do that, and fully admitted he fubar badly, and does seem want to make up for it, or some of it and even knowing so much time had passed already, he willing to try.

Treehugger had to have the dam truth shoved down her throat to make her understand, thank goodness for Fluttershy was there to raise him.

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Kraden [2017-01-23 04:49:41 +0000 UTC]

I like your version better, it has feelz

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Herowebcomics [2017-01-17 21:18:02 +0000 UTC]

Now THIS is some tough stuff!
I actually feel sorry for everyone involved!
The son for what his parents did to him, and his parents for how much hatred he sends their way.

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kayyeh1 [2017-01-13 06:17:58 +0000 UTC]

i am literally crying, i have tears streaming down my face

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DanVaverick [2017-01-02 17:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Will we see that tender and sad moment with Treehugger and Fluttershy just after Chakra left?

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wilnet1tractor [2016-12-19 06:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Boy friend?

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weehawk99 [2016-12-18 04:01:38 +0000 UTC]

god I can relate to this kid, if not for all the same reasons

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CrimsonFireNightress [2016-12-13 09:06:19 +0000 UTC]

 feel like you really nailed the absolute Hate in Chakra's eyes. I can totally see the emotion in him and the panic of Flutters, well done again.

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221Bsherlockholmes [2016-12-13 02:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I have to ask...does Chakra ever go back and ask Fluttershy about bat ponies like he planned to?

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Godzillamaster69 [2016-12-10 01:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Geez, I know his parents were bad, but he didn't have to do that to Treehugger. Also, my father was one of the worst guys you could ever meet.

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Mieuun In reply to Godzillamaster69 [2017-01-02 14:59:59 +0000 UTC]

She sounds like she deserves it to be honest. She neglected him.

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ShaleZookeeper7 In reply to Mieuun [2017-11-24 06:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Eeyup, she certainly did.

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Godzillamaster69 In reply to Mieuun [2017-01-27 02:52:45 +0000 UTC]

I can't say I disagree with that.

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