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Lord-Kiyo In reply to xXLightningWolFXx [2013-09-13 21:16:55 +0000 UTC]
The parts that are furthest from each other you like.
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Shadowprower30 [2013-09-12 22:44:07 +0000 UTC]
whoa poor thing"
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Jblask [2013-09-12 20:37:25 +0000 UTC]
Β He doesn't really look burned to me. But he might just have mostly healed. I think you did do well with making the face look expressive and sympathetic. The lighting and shadow does had a "on the run" feeling. Who's after him exactly?
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Jblask [2013-09-12 23:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Well it is supposed to be after he heals up a bit and the bandages hide the scars.
I was told that humans are the ones that don't like him
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Jblask [2013-09-16 11:06:43 +0000 UTC]
Well they make such easy targets.
Well in the Dragon story humans are portrayed as bad guys, however it also shows that they are victims as well and some of the things they do are in desperation for survival.Β and there are some bad guys that are not human.
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Jblask In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2013-09-18 00:59:44 +0000 UTC]
Β Eh, makes sense enough. Are you referring to the dragons you drew in the city scene?
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Jblask [2013-09-18 02:15:32 +0000 UTC]
yes
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Jblask [2013-09-12 23:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Well maybe I should have done some research on burned people, but i thought this was a time after he got to heal some, but the bandages covers the scars.
Well they person that commissioned me said it was humans.
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Jblask [2013-09-16 11:07:21 +0000 UTC]
yeah, never know
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Mancoin [2013-09-12 18:52:48 +0000 UTC]
Well the bandages don't look dirty, more like "duct tape".Β
Other than that he does look like an exile
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Mancoin [2013-09-12 23:48:32 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps texture would have helped them look dirty then?
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Mancoin In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2013-09-17 19:35:35 +0000 UTC]
Well I don't think textures would have done the trick, more like - adding some cleaner/dirtier spots on it
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Mancoin [2013-09-17 21:52:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, thats what I was meaning.
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Mancoin In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2013-09-23 09:12:05 +0000 UTC]
well it should have cleaner spots too
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Tonythunder [2013-09-12 17:04:11 +0000 UTC]
Poor fella,if I saw this guy on the street,I'd love to help him and give him a good home
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Tonythunder [2013-09-12 23:47:53 +0000 UTC]
but what if he bites?
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Tonythunder In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2013-09-13 01:22:03 +0000 UTC]
I'd imagine he would do that
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Tonythunder [2013-09-13 08:38:37 +0000 UTC]
even he bite ...will you help him?
or should 'human' finish what they start with his tribal.
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Tonythunder In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-13 18:18:04 +0000 UTC]
I'd help him rather than kill him but then again other people will think I'm turning against them
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Tonythunder [2013-09-13 18:35:42 +0000 UTC]
hmmm i think they will just said "heretic!! burn him/her!! "
bad formula of theocratic + totalitarian stateΒ mind set citizen.
(as for human in this character world)
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Tonythunder [2013-09-12 23:47:37 +0000 UTC]
But what if he bites?
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Centro [2013-09-12 14:40:58 +0000 UTC]
Poor thing... he deserves shelter and care, lots of it.Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-12 14:47:30 +0000 UTC]
sorry those are for 'human' only .(for his world setting.....sadly not so different from our world much)
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-12 15:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... if you'll let me I'll invade the human world and reverse the conditions. Humans aren't anything special, it's about time somebody kicked them hard enough for them to realize that.Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-12 16:15:25 +0000 UTC]
the point is human is special then other species ...
they relentless and determination hunter then other race.
not a desire for basic needΒ but for personal purpose .
then again with out you invade, human is kill they own race every day anyway.
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-12 16:26:45 +0000 UTC]
I know, humans aren't special, they cannot hunt other species. We rely on tools and intelligence, we are the caretakers of this planet we do not and have never owned it. We are neither special nor gifted in any form, we're lucky to be here for crying out loud.Β
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-12 16:46:50 +0000 UTC]
That is true, but the "races of man" are just man, they like to think they are different but they aren't, not sufficiently anyway.Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-12 17:02:27 +0000 UTC]
but as you know human is only race from earth , that have chance to expand there race from this very planet. (the other doom to die with earth)
(if we not kill our self first)
as for this character as i plan.
his family and tribal got kill by local human......as casualties of hundred years war between human and demon.....and his tribal just unlucky to be caught in crossfire.
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-12 23:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Possibly, my fictional setup challenges humanity's lonesomeness, quite violently.Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-13 02:43:28 +0000 UTC]
how so?
(do you have link to you story?)
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-13 03:07:05 +0000 UTC]
My story is mostly still inside my head sadly x_x I am a horrible writer.Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-13 04:18:28 +0000 UTC]
same to me too.
(full of plot but got to ask other to write for me)
(but you have scrap of you story detail right?)
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-13 14:17:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, here and there ^^Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-13 14:28:06 +0000 UTC]
......
and what you story plot then?
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-13 21:10:57 +0000 UTC]
Mostly survival o.oΒ
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-14 03:31:47 +0000 UTC]
more detail to fill in?
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-15 00:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, what detail do you desire?Β
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Neotokyo6 In reply to Centro [2013-09-15 03:51:14 +0000 UTC]
like a setting of world / faction / character ....etc
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Centro In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-15 20:45:08 +0000 UTC]
The setting is my own fictional universe, following the Interstellar Systems Commonwealth or ISC.Β
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Neotokyo6 [2013-09-12 13:55:43 +0000 UTC]
it may not like what i image 100%,Β but i can work with this design. (his skin seem to heal up pretty good then i expect.)
then if i do with another commission will you do it? (continued this character situation)
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Neotokyo6 [2013-09-12 14:20:19 +0000 UTC]
Well I suppose I should have made his hands look more raw or something.
Perhaps at some point.
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StoryTeller288 [2013-09-12 13:36:02 +0000 UTC]
wow, he look's like he has been through alot
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Neotokyo6 In reply to StoryTeller288 [2013-09-12 13:58:41 +0000 UTC]
he is on the run with warrant on his head for crime against nature
to be born as not 'human' a freak that church must extermination.
that is idea of this character.Β
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