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Published: 2013-09-12 12:49:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1705; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 11
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This is forIt's a fox that has been burned all over his body and he is in hiding and on the run all the time. I made his bandages a dirty color to try to give the impression of neglect and always in dirty places. Hope this is what you were looking for.
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so nice, I like the look of his feet and ears. 
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The parts that are furthest from each other you like.
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Β He doesn't really look burned to me. But he might just have mostly healed. I think you did do well with making the face look expressive and sympathetic. The lighting and shadow does had a "on the run" feeling. Who's after him exactly?
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Well it is supposed to be after he heals up a bit and the bandages hide the scars.
I was told that humans are the ones that don't like him
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Β Fair enough. I don't know much about burns so I can't say much.
Β Ahh yes always the humans of course.
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Well they make such easy targets.
Well in the Dragon story humans are portrayed as bad guys, however it also shows that they are victims as well and some of the things they do are in desperation for survival.Β and there are some bad guys that are not human.
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Β Eh, makes sense enough. Are you referring to the dragons you drew in the city scene?
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Well maybe I should have done some research on burned people, but i thought this was a time after he got to heal some, but the bandages covers the scars.
Well they person that commissioned me said it was humans.
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Β That does make sense enough. For all we know his species might have accelerated healing or something.
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Well the bandages don't look dirty, more like "duct tape".Β
Other than that he does look like an exile
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Perhaps texture would have helped them look dirty then?
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Well I don't think textures would have done the trick, more like - adding some cleaner/dirtier spots on it
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Yeah, thats what I was meaning.
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well it should have cleaner spots too
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Poor fella,if I saw this guy on the street,I'd love to help him and give him a good home
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but what if he bites?
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I'd imagine he would do that
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even he bite ...will you help him?
or should 'human' finish what they start with his tribal.
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I'd help him rather than kill him but then again other people will think I'm turning against them
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hmmm i think they will just said "heretic!! burn him/her!! "
bad formula of theocratic + totalitarian stateΒ mind set citizen.
(as for human in this character world)
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But what if he bites?
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Poor thing... he deserves shelter and care, lots of it.Β
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sorry those are for 'human' only .(for his world setting.....sadly not so different from our world much)
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Yeah... if you'll let me I'll invade the human world and reverse the conditions. Humans aren't anything special, it's about time somebody kicked them hard enough for them to realize that.Β
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the point is human is special then other species ...
they relentless and determination hunter then other race.
not a desire for basic needΒ but for personal purpose .
then again with out you invade, human is kill they own race every day anyway.
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I know, humans aren't special, they cannot hunt other species. We rely on tools and intelligence, we are the caretakers of this planet we do not and have never owned it. We are neither special nor gifted in any form, we're lucky to be here for crying out loud.Β
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then again i want you to see this clip
www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOFPN5β¦
is show that some time human have great care to other race as they own.
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That is true, but the "races of man" are just man, they like to think they are different but they aren't, not sufficiently anyway.Β
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but as you know human is only race from earth , that have chance to expand there race from this very planet. (the other doom to die with earth)
(if we not kill our self first)
as for this character as i plan.
his family and tribal got kill by local human......as casualties of hundred years war between human and demon.....and his tribal just unlucky to be caught in crossfire.
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Possibly, my fictional setup challenges humanity's lonesomeness, quite violently.Β
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how so?
(do you have link to you story?)
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My story is mostly still inside my head sadly x_x I am a horrible writer.Β
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same to me too.
(full of plot but got to ask other to write for me)
(but you have scrap of you story detail right?)
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......
and what you story plot then?
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Well, what detail do you desire?Β
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like a setting of world / faction / character ....etc
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The setting is my own fictional universe, following the Interstellar Systems Commonwealth or ISC.Β
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it may not like what i image 100%,Β but i can work with this design. (his skin seem to heal up pretty good then i expect.)
then if i do with another commission will you do it? (continued this character situation)
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Well I suppose I should have made his hands look more raw or something.
Perhaps at some point.
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wow, he look's like he has been through alot
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he is on the run with warrant on his head for crime against nature
to be born as not 'human' a freak that church must extermination.
that is idea of this character.Β
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