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Published: 2007-11-25 06:34:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 983; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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Description "Mother! Father!"

Fee flew over to his parents, smiling and singing his words to them. It had been yet another pleasant day in Nightopia, and Fee and his parents were about to go to their home.

"Fee, slow down!" Fee's mother chuckled. "There's no rush, we have plenty of time before it gets dark out." Fee giggled and stopped in midair, waiting for his parents to catch up with him.

"Your mother's right," Fee's father sung. "It's at least two hours before the sun will go down. No worries." Fee sung a high note of happiness, and continued on the path with his parents.

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Not long later, the happy Nightopian family was only a few dream minutes away from being at their house. Fee looked back to see both his parents smiling and laughing together, and he smiled. His father was very respected as the first King Nightopian to come out of an egg in quite a while, which meant he basically ran the little area of Spring Valley where Fee and his parents resided. Fee never bragged about this. He simply enjoyed his fairly quiet life in Nightopia.

Fee looked back again.

...Where were they?

Fee's heart started to race. His parents had just suddenly disappeared into thin air--but there had to be a logical--

"EEEEEEEEEEEheeeheeHEEEEEEEE!"

The shrieking laugh jolted Fee upwards. He began to shake in fear and look around. Nightopia seemed to become black all around him as he madly tried to figure out the source of the cackle.

"Little Pian-Pian-Pian! Guess what IIIIIIIII've got!!! EEEEEEheeeHEEEE!"

Fee suddenly saw a mysterious shadow cast over him, and when he turned around, a nightmarish being that had to be at least 15 feet tall was towering over him. He shrieked. The first instinct he had was to run, but Fee somehow knew that would get him nowhere. So he flew upwards, past the dirty white, orange, red, and yellow of the mantle the being wore, trying to find out what the heck it was talking about.

And the moment Fee got to the being's gloved hands, it knew.

"F-------Fee------e-----e---" Fee's mother sing-cried. "R------ru------uuu-------n---"

"Mama! Papa! No!" Fee wailed, shaking horribly. He nearly fell out of the air with the amount of fear he was experiencing, and that horrible, cruel laugh just made it all worse...

"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEhe! Oooooh, loooooooky what we've got here! The King Pian of Spring Valley! And this must be his love-er-ly Queeen! EEEEEEEHEEEEHEE! Now, little-little one, which do I eat first?! Aaaagh, I'm so hungry!" the being shrieked. Fee shook his head and cried out, and it just made the mostly-invisible being laugh all the worse. "If I'm not gonna get an answer, I'm just gonna pick one all by myself!" Fee sing-screamed as he saw his mother being raised up to the being's mouth.

"NOOOOOO!" Fee shouted. The being stopped for a moment.

"What d'you mean, little-little Pian? My stomach doesn't know the meaning of that word! EeeeeeeeeeheeeeeeeHEEEEEEE!"

Fee heard and saw the whole thing. The sickening crunches were enough to make his blood run cold; they were enough to reduce him to a blubbering mess.

"Mmm... salty, yet satisfying. Did you little-Pi's go swimming today? Cause I like that taste," the being stated, licking his gloves slightly. "Ehehehehe... Don't worry little-little one, the King's gonna be next!" And with that, the being lifted Fee's father to his mouth full of fangs, and dropped him in.

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Fee didn't know what happened after. He passed out, and the next thing he knew he awoke on the very same grass he'd been walking on right before the death of his parents. He had no intention of standing up, or even walking back to his house. All he did was lay there. A few tears rolled down his cheeks as he wondered, "Why?" Why did it have to happen so suddenly? And so cruelly? Did someone up there decide that he deserved it? What had he done wrong?

Rolling over, Fee suddenly saw a glint in the grass. Slowly, he reached his hand out and grabbed onto the shining object. He brought it to his face and saw that it was his mother's locket. Opening it up, Fee saw a picture of his whole family, all together. A soft lullaby-like tune drifted up from the locket as well; an old tune that Fee had heard his mother sing to him to help him sleep.

Fee slipped the locket on around his neck and tucked it under his collar and shirt.

He would never forget.
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Comments: 56

LordBlumiere In reply to ??? [2007-12-11 14:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Glad you enjoyed it.

Jackle's part was really hard to write actually. I kind of felt sick while doing it...

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-11 15:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Ahh. But still, you pulled it off! ^_^ And rather well, I must say.

XD Whenever I write stories, it IS a little hard to know how Jackle will react to things. He's a tad bipolar...sometimes he's a little crazy, but a tad refined, sometimes he's flat out typing-in-all-caps insane.

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-11 23:41:12 +0000 UTC]

I do think, in this, he was hungry enough to be the latter. No food in the Maren fridge,

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-11 23:45:57 +0000 UTC]

XD There's always the sugar plums...but then again, they don't run away screaming.

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 00:26:50 +0000 UTC]

The thrill of the huuuuuunt!

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-12 00:57:45 +0000 UTC]

*insert Jaws theme here*

Jackle: *stalking a 'ian* >D...

Nightopian: *twitches*

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 03:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Fee: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *tackles Jackle*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-12 04:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Jackle: Wha-? *turns head to look*

Nightopian: *runs away*

Jackle: *looks down at Fee* >8D Well, well, well! What have we....here? Hey, I remember you! *evil grin*...your parents were tasty! OH NO, YOU DON'T! *grabs him by the scruff of his neck* *yanks him up to eye level* I'm not ravenous anymore, so I'm a tad more picky about who I devour. *looks him up and down*

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 04:36:51 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *waits...and then suddenly starts to glow red*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-12 04:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Jackle: *examines* hmm...you're a little on the scrawny side...ah, what the hell. *cackles* PIAN-CHU, I CHOOSE YOU!! *throws a poke-prison (coughpokeballcough) that catches Fee*

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 04:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Fee: .... *still glowing and the ball begins to glow as well* "Grrr..."

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-12 04:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Jackle: *leaps up with the poke-prison in hand* *begins to soar backwards* XD I don't know whether to eat you, hand you over to Reala, or just give you to Thorn!

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 04:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *suddenly hits the side of the ball HARD*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-12 05:13:15 +0000 UTC]

*the Poke-Prison jolts out of his fingers, but he catches it again*

Jackle: OhHO! 8D You're a FIESTY little one, aren'cha? *flies into castle* Should I call Reala? No, no...he'll try to fry you alive.

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *suddenly goes extremely still...waiting for the right time...*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-12 23:42:49 +0000 UTC]

NiGHTS: ^^ Hi Jackle! What's that you've got there?

Jackle: *rolls his eyes, mutters under breath* T_T Wizeman, this guy's annoying-HIYA NiGHTS!!!! 8D

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-12 23:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *slams against the side of the ball again*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 00:13:05 +0000 UTC]

*once again, the ball nearly slips out of his fingers*

NiGHTS: *notices* What's in there? *suspicious look* Jackle, are you eating Pians again?!

Jackle: *catches the ball* No, no! This is, erm...a pet for my cat!

NiGHTS: *looks at the ball*...you got something for Clawz?

Jackle: 8D Yeah, let's go with that!

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 00:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *slams against the side again...and again...and again*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 00:22:04 +0000 UTC]

*the ball finally breaks*

NiGHTS: *points* I KNEW IT!

Jackle: Crap! *tries to grab Fee*

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 00:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *flies orf* "HA HA HA."

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 00:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Jackle: *glares* I swear, I'll be eating my cereal out of the bottom of that Nightopian's skull...

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 00:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "No you won't."

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 00:54:36 +0000 UTC]

Reala: *standing in the forest about ten yards away, staring off into space*

NiGHTS: *waves frantically, holding Jackle back* Run, little Nightopian! Run away!

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 01:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "Why?"

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 01:19:14 +0000 UTC]

NiGHTS: *Jackle starts to slip through his fingers* He's-going-to eat you alive, that's why!

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 01:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *flies orf again*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 01:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Reala: *spots him* ^_^ Hello there! *waves*

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 01:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *squeals in fear*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 02:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Reala: *blinks, confused* What's the matter?

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 02:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *points* "MAREN!"

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2007-12-13 02:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Reala: *cocks head* Really...*walks over to Jackle* Jackle? What's all this about eating that innocent Pian?

Jackle: I gotta kill, kill, KILL!!!

Reala: *rolls his eyes* You leave him alone, you monster; you KNOW I LOVE the little darlings...*dropkicks him over the wall* Now...*sits down next to Fee* ^^ What's your name?

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2007-12-13 03:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "Err--Fee."

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 04:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Reala: ^^ Fee! Pleased to meet you, my delicious little turkey! *extends hand* My name is Chamelan.

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 04:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "Turkey?!" O.o;

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 04:42:55 +0000 UTC]

Reala:...yes, a 'turkey.' It's a highly intelligent bird from the Dreamer world. Top of the foodchain. Yupyup. So! *sits down next to him* What happened with you and Jackle, anyway?

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 04:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "He tried to eat me."

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 04:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Reala: *looks shocked* What, Jackle did?...was he starving?

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 04:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "He also ate my parents."

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 04:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Reala:...he...WHAT? He ate....*penny drops*...my apologies. You know...*taps chin*...it's pretty dangerous around here if you don't have a guardian...

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 04:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "A guardian?"

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 05:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Reala: Y'know, a guardian! Someone to show you the ropes around here, how to get around...how to avoid Nightmaren who are ravenous with hunger...

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 05:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "Ohhh...okay!"

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 05:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Reala: Great! *stands up* Stick close to me, kid. We'll go places. *begins to walk*

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 05:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Fee: *follows him*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-07-13 05:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Reala:...you might wanna stay under my hat, as Jackle's probably going to be tagging along after me...

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-07-13 05:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "...oh." *wriggles under Reala's hat*

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ToothandFang In reply to LordBlumiere [2008-09-04 05:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Reala: *voice comes inside the hat* I'm going to have to talk to you this way from now on, or else everyone'll think I've gone mad. Goodness KNOWS, I'm not a madman. *under breath, so quiet it's hard to make out*...at least, not anymore...

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LordBlumiere In reply to ToothandFang [2008-09-04 13:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Fee: "Ok ^^" *wriggles in deeper*

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evilblackcat22 [2007-11-25 07:18:16 +0000 UTC]

...Good Lord ;_____________________________; *gives fee a tight hug* That's just so--so---uhhgg, I don't think I can sleep tonight...

I HAVING THE HATETH OF JACKLE--!!! Though I've thought and seen this many times--This is just unexceptable--Fee was just a good little egg-head and--and--I just wanna--AAARRG!!! ...*unexpectingly bursts into tears*

((Write IT. I commmaaandd youuuu~ ...not really--but I got my eye on ya now!))

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