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Published: 2006-03-11 04:35:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 4621; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 266
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It's been a while since I drew Jonathan with Aeon, his trusty living weapon. In this form Aeon has wrapped aroudn Jonathan's back and not only formed itself into a Lance but a sheild as well. Now if only I could find a place for this weapon in the manga.~Lord Dragon Master
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seems like a dueling kind of thing if you had like a fight of near equal power where jonathan would either be riding something maybe something connected to the shield and someone would get run through and give their gasping last words and jonathan would feel ashamed all blood on his hands style and then later that same lance would be used in a different manner that would redeem him as well changing the nature of the lance sorry for like back seat writing im just throwing ideas out bored at 4 am also a helmet would be cool like something like that iron rose drawing
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Thanks for the suggestions. For now only specific parts of his body are covered by armour, as it takes more and more power to sustain aeon's forms.
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||looks at the 'lance'|| I swear that looks like an awesome musket/gun/gunlance... who cares... its from LDM so of course it is awesome. :3
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Thanks, it is certainly an old pic.
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No, Thank you for making such elegant art for us all to enjoy. :3
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wow the character looks awesome, the expresion on his face fits, I realy like it(I finaly found time to look through yur gallery!!)
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I am glad you took a look, thank you
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I have an idea, so to speak. Maybe Aeon changes based on the user who bases it on the situation at hand. For example, most of the time Jonathan uses a sword because that is all he needs. However, he comes across someone where he needs range and more defense. Voila, this is where this design can come in. Of course, its just an idea and I respect if you decide its not right for your story.
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Check out my gallery, aeon becomes sheilds, lances, hooks, even an avatar.
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*nods* I have seen the various forms of Aeon. They are all very well drawn.
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Don't listen to him, i have seen his art and there he shouldn't be telling you what problems you have when he is not that good of an artist int he first place. I think it looks great. Keep up the good work
Kisses*
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this image seems a little unbalanced with the contrast between areas of heavy shading and areas of simple linework. definitely seems to need a bit more attention
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Well, considering I dont shade with pen, and I didnt plan on colouring it, of coarse there would be areas of line work. Duh?
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oh boy, your'e one of those folks who shouldnt welcome critique, huh? its hard to think the lower body deserved so much black/white attention and nothing else even deserves a thickened line. the hair could use some detail as well. hell, while im at it, the pose is off balance too, the lower body and the rest may as well be from different pieces.
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Oh boy, your one of those annoying people, huh? The lower body was covered with clothing! Buh? Are you blind? That is why it got so much attention. Why would I give other parts thinkened lines? Check all my other peices, I dont do hair details. Trust me I've taken a look at your gallery, and your telling me about pose and body posture? I welcome Comments. Note it says comments on the page. I dont mind Critiques, but you've got nothing nice to say at all. You just sould like one of those people who sits on DA critizing other work without saying anything good about it at all. Before you start telling people what is wrong with their art, I suggest you take time to reflect back on your own works, and make sure you are practicing what you preach.
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you apparently have no idea what the purpose of devart is darling. go ahead and critique my work, tell me everything you dislike and ill only like you more, perhaps you see the point you missed?
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You know what is funny? I wrote you a comment in reply to your last one. Apparently it didnt go through. So I got a chance to think. DA is not critiquers corner. It is a place to express peoples art. You are entitled to your own oppinion, to that I will give you. But I supposed I have always seen that constructive criticism allowed people to improve the most. You tell them what they are doing wrong. But also what they are doign right. You give them confidence that they can improve. If all people hear are what they are doign wrong, they give up. I never missed your point. I was just looking for a slightly different answer. If you had posted your first comment, and some where in there you said something like 'I like the design of the sword', I would have replyed thank you. Thank you for the comment and the critique. We are no doubt different people, and see things different ways. And although this debate has taken up so much room on my comment section, I am glad we had it. Thank you.
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