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Description
A "re-draw" of the previous days attempt at swimwear, with better focus on the anatomy and a cleaner mind, plus a shift into a two piece too better view the stomach and it's anatomy.

Negatives:
-Hands are very problematic, the left hand can slightly be understood even if not correctly drawn, but the right one is just purely bad.
-Arms appear to be too big, specifically the forearms + the shading, although representing the angles is too haphazard and does not convey good anatomy, especially on the right forearm
-Head and Ears don't feel correct yet, the angle doesn't feel correct on Ear hole and the size of snout feels to big.
-Left wing is a completely different tone, lack of symmetry is problematic on that aspect + the base, regardless of slight body lean are not the same size
-Chest is not correct, both shading and form, more form.
-Bottom of rib cage and mid-line of stomach need to be studied more, the illusion is slightly there for the ribs but it might've just been a fluke.
-Drapery needs to be revised, left is almost passable at least at the bottom, right is indiscernible
-Kneecaps need to be redrawn in another way
-The bone division by shading is understood on the right leg, not so much on the left considering the implication of light source
-Hooves not the same size.

Positives:
-The detail on the ribs feels like it's on the right track, the same for the structure of the wings., and the structure of the neck for what it's worth is one of the better ones drawn.

Description
A "re-draw" of the previous days attempt at swimwear, with better focus on the anatomy and a cleaner mind, plus a shift into a two piece too better view the stomach and it's anatomy.

Negatives:
-Hands are very problematic, the left hand can slightly be understood even if not correctly drawn, but the right one is just purely bad.
-Arms appear to be too big, specifically the forearms + the shading, although representing the angles is too haphazard and does not convey good anatomy, especially on the right forearm
-Head and Ears don't feel correct yet, the angle doesn't feel correct on Ear hole and the size of snout feels to big.
-Left wing is a completely different tone, lack of symmetry is problematic on that aspect + the base, regardless of slight body lean are not the same size
-Chest is not correct, both shading and form, more form.
-Bottom of rib cage and mid-line of stomach need to be studied more, the illusion is slightly there for the ribs but it might've just been a fluke.
-Drapery needs to be revised, left is almost passable at least at the bottom, right is indiscernible
-Kneecaps need to be redrawn in another way
-The bone division by shading is understood on the right leg, not so much on the left considering the implication of light source
-Hooves not the same size.

Positives:
-The detail on the ribs feels like it's on the right track, the same for the structure of the wings., and the structure of the neck for what it's worth is one of the better ones drawn.