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Description Na Sgorran

We have seen solstices you have never seen,
waiting here in silence, standing patiently,
for the voice of winds to carry tales of old,
for shiny drops of rain to dress us up in gold.
And we have listened for those words,
spoken as slow as the seasons turned,
although each whisper is turning us to dust.
'Tis only right. 'Tis only just,
for we have long guarded the way the seasons spin,
and learnt the ways to end and to begin.

And we have seen solstices you too have seen,
as you try to decipher the patterns of your being.
We have watched you, seen all your deeds,
felt warmth of pyres, your bodies' heat,
dancing around the bonfires of many hogmanays,
celebrating moons to come, tributing old days.
We've grieved for those now long gone,
rejoiced for those we saw come,
adding new streaks to tartans made of old.
We know that you will break down-we know that you can hold.
'Tis only right. 'Tis time going by.
And waiting in our long goodbye
when we at last to earth return,
dyin' in the way the seasons turn,
we accept that this is how it should be.

We shall greet solstices you' ll never see.
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lacychenualt [2006-07-11 05:28:17 +0000 UTC]

*LacyChenault

lacychenault thinx you whine 2 much and ur art is most unfairylike.
She also thinx ur art blows big shitty chunks but will go into detail l8r.

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lacychenault also regrets wasting her valuable time telling you this but
will leave u with the following goodbye:


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fairys r us. visit lacy chenault at [link]

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raistlin [2002-07-14 19:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Ok,I quit writing poetry and concentrate on my career...you are too $#@#@! good at this...

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greumach [2002-07-01 07:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Do I actually have to tell you I think this is great . All the Best

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doughnut-hole [2002-06-07 19:59:21 +0000 UTC]

as ususal. you know how i feel. i really love how you start each stanza with two similar (almost) sentence. sorta binds them together. your poetry tends to have an ethereal feel to them and i love them. thank you for posting them. makes me happy to read them.

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asleep [2002-05-23 13:29:57 +0000 UTC]

We shall greet solstices you' ll never see.

Damn rocks... not fair they get to experience eons while we are here for such brief seconds..

Ohh well.. thats life..

Great poem. You can feel the time. You can definatly feel the ages roll by. Love the "Pagan" images it conjores.. The bone fires, mother earth, titans of old, and how they slowly pass...

Anyways... Once again a great poem..

Dave
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David Demski

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epsylon [2002-05-22 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]

my favourite lines:last 3 of first stanza, 4 last of the second, the closing line and now that I'm thinking about it... all of them! (geez, if I was to quote my favourite lines right now, I would copy the whole poem). Like the concept and it sort of leaves a sweet sorrow in the heart...

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white-alcemist [2002-05-21 15:31:51 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT... It reminds me of the battles of the Scotch, and especially the one in Culloden where the heroes fell... The power of this poem gives me a tragic feeling, about the way they felt... (The Brave) ...

Don't mind if i make it a fav ??????????

Stay Devious !!!

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slatan [2002-05-21 12:54:11 +0000 UTC]

and for once more, I am in the uni's computer room... HOW could I possibly CONCENTRATE to read your stuff (just like I didn't with Eilidh's poem, and I MUST)?

I am sorry, but I do not dare tp read this now because I know I cannot sit down IN HERE and think about it silently... just like I feel doing!

Will return... will take sometime (for I will be absent off the net for a while) but I will
For I am sure this is great indeed



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spunj13 [2002-05-21 05:20:03 +0000 UTC]

a very smooth progression to this...very moving piece as well... the stones continue on...generation after generation, and will continue on long after we have gone...

//spunj13

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mortalpsyche [2002-05-20 15:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Simply beautiful depiction, in a wonderful style of writing...
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-The only thing that is yours, is your soul;
everything else is borrowed.

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eilidh [2002-05-20 13:51:38 +0000 UTC]

This is so, so amazingly beautiful. A song of the Sidhe, in every sense. I am deeply honoured that my abstract image (Na Sgorran= the Rocks in Scots Gaelic) triggered this...
Like most of your poems, this goes to my favourites folder -- and to a very special place in my heart.
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Love and Faeriedust

Reflections [link]
Apollons Music [link]

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skwish-e [2002-05-20 12:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. I can see the stones without ever having seen them. I feel their quality of slowly slowly aging, yet watching humanity march past. I especially like the last line.
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