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lostmeawhileago — Glintclan Application: Marrowpelt
Published: 2015-08-05 20:29:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description
||Basic||Name: Marrowpelt
Gender: Male
Breed: American Bobtail
Birth Season: Leaf Bare
Age: 16 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Lives: 1/1
||Personality and History||
Personality: adventure seeking, stubborn, kind, likes to do things the hard way, gets too defensive or irritated quickly, and violent
Likes: rough housing, seeing with how far he can get away with things, and just being called Marrow
Dislikes: selfishness, being mistaken for a delinquent, insects
Fears: death, getting exiled for just having some fun
Other:
History-
Marrow was a quiet kit until he was apprenticed. Having to learn to balance play and work always challenged his beliefs of having more in life and his life is the Glintclan. He would get scolded for not reporting back after hunting or getting too close to other territories, but he hasn't been severely punished yet. As he got older, he does take his job more seriously. Fighting is his favorite thing but sadly the smallest active he gets to do. Though he doesn't want to die, the risk of it makes it all the exciting. He will never say it out loud but he likes to think he is the strongest cat of the clan. It will really make his day if you compliment him on that.
||Physical||
Build: heavy
Fur Type: semi-soft
Size: medium
Scars or Injuries: none
Voice Description: deep
Other:
||Mate/Relationship Status and Other Important Cats||
Orientation: pansexual
Current Mate: none
Past Mate(s): none
Kits: none
Prefers: nice, well rounded cats so they can helped him when he falls short on his job or when he is in trouble
Dislikes: cats that are rude or too blunt, thinks he is weak or cowardly, and cats that are strict/ perfectionists
Interested in Having Kits: maybe
Mother: Buddingpetals
Father: Ashdust
Siblings: none
Mentor: Blueveins
Relationship Legend:
Family
Dead
Mentor/Apprentice
Mate
Despises
Loathes
Hate
Unsure
Distrust/Discomfort/Fear
Acquaintance
Respect
Admire
Irritating/Annoying
Jealous of
Likes
Friends
Best Friends
Crush/Attraction
Prominent/Solitary Crush
Love
Can't Live Without
-GLACIERCLAN-
-GlacierClan Thoughts-
-FOGCLAN-
-FogClan Thoughts-
-ABYSSCLAN-
-AbyssClan Thoughts-
-GLINTCLAN-
-GlintClan Thoughts-
Role-Play Examples- Marrow sniffed the old markings of the clan's territory. He crosses over it and smirks to himself. He takes a few more steps before heading back to his clan's side of the forest.
Role-Play Availability-
=Yes
[G]-
[PG]-
[PG 13]-
[R]-
Comments- yes
Notes- yes
Chatrooms- maybe
Other- I have a skype
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Comments: 14
Interesting. ^-^
But there are some things that I recommend you go through.
-Could you add more negative traits to his personality?
-Add more things he dislikes, and if you want, more fears.
-Add more things that he would find attractive and unattractive in a cat. (Prefers and Dislikes in the Relationship section)
-Marrow's name should have a suffix in order to follow suit. (Ex: Marrowpelt, Marrowclaw, ect.)
Everything else is fine as far as I can see.
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I forgot one more thing!
Could you update the main file/ picture to say the name is Marrowpelt instead of Marrow? Thanks!
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Looks like you've fixed everything. Congrats, and welcome to GlintClan!
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Hi, I want to make another warrior but I would like to give him the ban of having two heads. Is that okay?
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Yes. Marrowpelt isn't filling any bans, so I guess you can have the ban.
Just a side note: cats with mutations do not live for very long, especially if the mutation is more drastic, such as having two sentient heads. I mean, one of them could just not work, and that might give him/ her more time to live, but that's the sacrifice.
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Thank you and that's fine. Do you have a an idea of how long he should live? Cause it was a rare case but I found a cat who lived for 15 years (frankenlouie). I wasn't going to make my cat live for that long but do you have any suggestions?
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Well, how old are you planning on having him/ her be?
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Yes, but I imagine that they might die in December or January if that's fine.
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Yes, I understand. ^^ thank you again
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No problem! ^-^ Submit your application to the Pending Applications folder when you're ready for me to look it over.
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