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Zixerlu [2015-08-05 20:52:26 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. ^-^
But there are some things that I recommend you go through.
-Could you add more negative traits to his personality?
-Add more things he dislikes, and if you want, more fears.
-Add more things that he would find attractive and unattractive in a cat. (Prefers and Dislikes in the Relationship section)
-Marrow's name should have a suffix in order to follow suit. (Ex: Marrowpelt, Marrowclaw, ect.)
Everything else is fine as far as I can see.
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Zixerlu In reply to lostmeawhileago [2015-08-06 07:06:01 +0000 UTC]
I forgot one more thing!
Could you update the main file/ picture to say the name is Marrowpelt instead of Marrow? Thanks!
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lostmeawhileago In reply to Zixerlu [2015-08-21 01:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I want to make another warrior but I would like to give him the ban of having two heads. Is that okay?
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Zixerlu In reply to lostmeawhileago [2015-08-21 06:06:40 +0000 UTC]
Yes. Marrowpelt isn't filling any bans, so I guess you can have the ban.
Just a side note: cats with mutations do not live for very long, especially if the mutation is more drastic, such as having two sentient heads. I mean, one of them could just not work, and that might give him/ her more time to live, but that's the sacrifice.
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lostmeawhileago In reply to Zixerlu [2015-08-21 06:44:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you and that's fine. Do you have a an idea of how long he should live? Cause it was a rare case but I found a cat who lived for 15 years (frankenlouie). I wasn't going to make my cat live for that long but do you have any suggestions?
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Zixerlu In reply to lostmeawhileago [2015-08-21 06:45:28 +0000 UTC]
Well, how old are you planning on having him/ her be?
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Zixerlu In reply to lostmeawhileago [2015-08-21 06:52:37 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but I imagine that they might die in December or January if that's fine.
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lostmeawhileago In reply to Zixerlu [2015-08-21 06:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I understand. ^^ thank you again
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Zixerlu In reply to lostmeawhileago [2015-08-21 07:00:06 +0000 UTC]
No problem! ^-^ Submit your application to the Pending Applications folder when you're ready for me to look it over.
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