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im happy with this page. except for the speech bubbles and the last pannel. i really like the first pannel though. if i ever redo this page, im keeping it. and i can tell, i threw anatomy out the window. i really hated doing this orange horse, the color changed in each pannel. oh well, he wont show up much anymore, hes not a main character. this is probably going to be the last page for a while, until i catch up with my list of things to do.
territorial and all its characters (C)
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really!? so when will more pages come out?
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well, maybe.... im changing everything around a little bit, and rewriting the storyline so it makes a little more sense.
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Really!? so when will more pages be out?
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yes. actually im redoing all of these pages too.
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then when will the first redone page be out?
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im not sure yet. it wont be for a while. im going to sketch the whole thing out in a notebook first, then make the actual pages. its going to take some time.
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hopefully by then i don't die of old age. lol
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The Phantom Mare(ess)!
The Colt Wars!
Revenge of the Wolf!
A New Foal!
The Stallion Strikes Back!
Return of the Canine!
You were begging for that, writing in a galaxy far far away. What I'm saying is, I was provoked.
If I just inspired a dual-trilogy epic movie series, I want royalties, ok?
For context, I wrote a couple more Tunajuice style parodies last week. I can't help it.
Ooh! Ooh! The Phantom Salmon! The Carp Wars! Revenge of the Sunfish! I... yeah... um.
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hahahahaha ohmygosh im laughing my ass off.
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Glad to hear it. My work here is complete.
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I live to please.
Gimme a sec and I'll upload a couple parodies to my scrapbook.
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huurhur.... this ought to be interesting.
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It reformated when I uploaded, so it doesn't make sense unless you already know the songs.
I made a new version of your user icon. It blinks. Are you interested?
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uhhhhh... sure. i guess. i dont know if the original person who made it would mind though.
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In that case maybe I should make it more different. Aha, the eyes could flash red, and then blink!
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ooooh. interesting. by the way, if your interested in really good story and have a few...days... read this. [link]
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Will do, as soon as I'm done reading this [link]
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oh, i tried to read it, and it was kind of.....well really confusing.
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It's Late Middle English, yeah. Variable word order, unsettled spelling, and the poet was a little careless. I loved it myself, though the sloppy meter got on my nerves.
It's funny- being familiar with Middle English was a real help understanding German, I'm suprised that that doesn't work in reverse.
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i guess. ive just never really read anything like it.
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It's what Chaucer wrote. It's about a crowd of pilgrem on there way to Cantarbury, and they agree that they will each tell two stories, one on the way to, and one on the way back. Whoever tells the best story buy every one supper at the inn they met in. So they each have a story, and some tell bawdy ones, and some tell pious ones, and some tell epics and some tell romances.
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It wasn't half bad. I'm glad my copy was lost, though- gives me an excuse to get a better one, a facing-page one. With interliniar, it's very hard to tune out just the Middle or just the Modern English, so I'd end up reading each line twice. Drove me crazy.
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well, when you do get a new copy, can i borrow it?
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Absolutely.
I remember when I picked up a German-language copy of the Nibelungenlied, you said you'd like to borrow it sometime. You're welcome to that too. I've read the story in English so many times I can figure out where the story is at within a couple stanzas when I open it at random, but I just don't have the vocabulary. Maybe we can read it together sometime, so you can help me with that. Bewarned- it's an awesome story, but the word order is as roundabout as the Robyn Hode link I sent.
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errr... i can try then, if its difficult.
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