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RosyWindFox [2019-03-30 19:38:14 +0000 UTC]

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Sorry if this isnt the best it is my very first critique
for the vision it is very catchy and the colors go well together the 2 thing i am (complaining) (not really that much its amazing) the background is kind of simple and you need a fade or 2 in the wings what i reccomend doing is having the black and color on diffrent layers that way you can use the blur tool to make a fade.
originality the dragon is slightly a typical dragon maybe add one element that makes it really unique and you maybe add 1 accessory or maybe make it have a split tail. the thing that could use the most improvement is the background. for the technique very nice lines are very clear not too faded not to bold the lines are a little bumpy but thats it
Impact though the red is eye catching red black brown tan and yellow are kinda standard dragon colors so it could be a little for unique maybe by using a magenta or purple or light grey love the design cute and fierce at the same time
ok considering everything i give this a 9/10 could be improved but not by a ton
again sorry if not detailed enough or if i was to nitpicky had to find something again this is my first critique sorry about some spelling i tried my best e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Breezetailwarriors [2019-03-27 02:45:15 +0000 UTC]

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I don't usually write critiques, but why not ^^

Vision: I like how the red of the dragon is the first thing you see, making it very clear what the art piece is about. Though I do think it pops out a bit to much and maybe a brighter background would work best for this piece. I think something you could have added is different shades in the sky, maybe adding light blue at the top (or wherever you think the sun might be in the drawing, even if no sun is there in the actual end result) The lineart does look a bit shaky as well, but that just might be DA fault or the software you use.

Originality: Though I have seen this pose used many times, you did use it in a way that made it seem different from the others. As I said before, the background could use a bit of work, but of course that's all up to you, and it's always a bit hard to be original when drawing a simple sky.

Technique: Like I said before, the pose was done very well, though the legs and wings look a bit awkward. Since he's floating in the sky I feel like the legs would look less awkward if they were tucked in. With the wings, maybe having them bent down and having the other side be seen would add a nice touch I think.

Impact: Not really sure what to say for this one ;w;

Overall this piece is amazing and I love how you drew the eyes. Sorry if I was to serious but I just wanted to help out ^^

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GermanShedder17 [2019-03-26 23:55:59 +0000 UTC]

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Ok so I’ve never done a critique before, so please forgive me if I do it horribly wrong!

Vision-This piece really catches your attention when you first look at it. The colors you used really draw my eye to the dragon. The shading also brings out “drama” to the piece, it catches your attention and makes the wings pop!

Originality- I find that this pose is used a lot when drawing dragons, but you drew it really well! I think if you added a background as well, it’d be more unique!

Technique- Once again the shading is awesome, but the lineart is a tad scratchy. (I’m kinda nitpicking here because it’s really hard to find bad stuff about it.)

Impact- As I said earlier it DEFINITELY catches your eye!

Honestly, great work, I’d give it a 9/10!

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faryba [2019-04-22 09:25:05 +0000 UTC]

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moon-relish [2019-02-25 23:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! I’m just seeing this!! It looks reallly good!

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Hazzy-art [2019-02-23 10:49:34 +0000 UTC]

She is beautiful!! i love it so much!Her colors are gorgeous!
And i think it is as good as mine! You work hard on it and put as much effort as me or even more!
Thank you so much and soon i will try to draw her!

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AldoAlucard-Cartinos [2019-02-23 08:41:00 +0000 UTC]

awesome :333

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RaspberryDragonfly [2019-02-23 08:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous!!!! You are improving so much!

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