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loveDoodlez — The Exorcism Chapter 1

Published: 2010-10-07 23:29:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2256; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 4
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Description                                                         Chapter 1: The watchful eyes
       
                Perched high up, i felt at home. I glanced over at Noel, her brown hair waving in the wind, my black-brown hair flapping messily around my head. Her eye is activated, searching with meaning for the akuma sure to appear. My equipment innocence pencil clasped tightly in my hand, warming it, ready for the up-coming battle. My pens were of higher Lvl innocence but they too, were ready.
               We were in a secluded wood behind Noel's house, even though this place was off-limits, people still came here. Though most of them weren't your normal people-people. They were your danger prone, id-love-to-kill-you, akuma people. Noel and my 'job' was to was to kill these akuma with a substance called the 'God Crystal' or innocence, if you prefer. Only five people swam into and out of view, but no akuma. Maybe i should tell you about Noel's cursed eye? Er... maybe not, Noel just signaled me for four akuma.
               I tensed, blood pumping. Noel smiled wickedly. Of course she was ready, she always was. And i needed to be too, even though this was my first time on duty. She mouthed to me 'when there's two left, let em have it. No mercy when it comes to these games.' I nod tensely. Her smile gains a little creepiness as she jumps down to battle. And almost immediately shes immersed with four Lvl 3 akuma, growing out of their human shells.
               As i watched the akuma stared hungrily at her... nasty little smiles spreading across their armored faces. You couldn't really say that they were 'nights in shining armor' more like the Devil's army. Which it really was in fact. I clench and unclench my fists, waiting for the moment where there would only be two of them... Not really dreading and not really excitedly. Just... Anxious. Wouldn't you be too? If you had to fight these monsters for the first time?
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Comments: 37

DreamerGirlD [2010-11-05 22:58:07 +0000 UTC]

That's really cool! I like it!

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loveDoodlez In reply to DreamerGirlD [2010-11-05 22:58:35 +0000 UTC]

OH MII GAWD THANKS YOU SOOO MUUCCHH

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DreamerGirlD In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-11-05 23:05:31 +0000 UTC]

You welcome!!

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loveDoodlez In reply to DreamerGirlD [2010-11-05 23:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Zomg! thankiesfor teh fav again xDDD

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DreamerGirlD In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-11-05 23:14:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I love it, and tomorrow I'll read more, now I have to go.. =/ but great job! I wish I could write like you XD

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loveDoodlez In reply to DreamerGirlD [2010-11-05 23:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Lolz thanks! ahh, my writings not all that good! o.o i always feel the need to edit and edit and edit some more xD but okayz! Bye! ttyl x3

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Erika1004 [2010-10-08 01:50:12 +0000 UTC]

that is awesome! i like the part how Noel's smiling creepily. that would so be me bahaha xD

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-08 23:51:44 +0000 UTC]

lolz! chapter 2 will be up in a few! xD if i can concentrate with my awesome music!

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-09 04:11:55 +0000 UTC]

I just read it! xD I'm such a fail when i write xD I'll be writing and see SOMETHING and go and fallow it either by moving or just with my eyes. I get so easily sidetracked xD I got lost into thought a lot of the time too, so i'll just be sitting there fingers on keyboard and staring into nothingness. C;

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-09 16:25:04 +0000 UTC]

Lolz! Im just sitting there staring at the screen trying to get the perfect song up! xDDD its a wonder how i finish anything@! xDD and thanks for reading it

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-10 01:02:09 +0000 UTC]

hahahah xD i know what u mean ;3 and no problem! sometimes i'll be listening to some hardcore song and i'll get up and play air guitar out fo nowhere xD my family thinks i'm insane sometimes <3

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-10 21:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh ive been down that road! xD my dad wants to send me to an insane asylum! xDDDDD

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-11 07:15:44 +0000 UTC]

WOOO fun stuff >D my friends say i should be in one :3 i always say "why thank you very much!" xD

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-14 23:03:42 +0000 UTC]

lmao i can tell you know getting out of a straight jacket isnt very haaarrrddd :3

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-15 00:15:50 +0000 UTC]

nope >D mwahahaha done it too many times C;

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-16 13:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha! xDDDD you my friend are my type of person!

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-17 02:22:20 +0000 UTC]

OMG another person who says "You, my friend..." I ALWAYS SAY THAT >D i'm just kinda insane

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-17 03:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Omg awesome! lolz and somewhere, deep down inside all of our pancreases (xD) were all a little insane! Dont cha think? :3

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-17 03:33:00 +0000 UTC]

PANCREASES? LMAO YES I AGREEEE xD HAHAHAHAAHHAHAHA

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-17 14:32:56 +0000 UTC]

LMFAO THE PANCREAS IS AN ORGAN! I HAD NO IDEA WE HAD ONE TILL RECENTLY!!!! XDDDDD

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-17 19:18:48 +0000 UTC]

ASDFGHJKL LMAO SERIOUSLY? ahahahah xD i knew that since like gr 5 cuz we had to make and outline of ourselves and put all our organs in the right places. it's like...behind your liver or something. hahahaha

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-17 20:48:58 +0000 UTC]

lolz yeaaaa im just not that great with the human body xD o.o i had no idea it was behind the liver (or something xD)

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-17 23:18:54 +0000 UTC]

hahaha yeah...or something xD i can't quite remember. it's really small and is hiding C; i don't even like thinking about science it makes my head hurt. speaing of which i have to do a poster on chemical reactions v....v at least i can draw on it >D

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-19 19:51:47 +0000 UTC]

xDDD yay drawing!!! P: science makes my head hurt too

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-20 05:32:25 +0000 UTC]

science....*smashes head against desk* that's what i feel about science.

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-21 19:33:05 +0000 UTC]

science *twitch twitch...* i can tell you a million different things about crazy f***ed up scientists Srry for my french

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-22 06:27:01 +0000 UTC]

that is OK xD i like those bad words >D helps put a point across loud and clear :3 my eyebrow twitches when i talk about science.

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-22 22:02:32 +0000 UTC]

lolz i do believe so! xD idk i space out in science but i get really good grades

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-23 05:19:49 +0000 UTC]

same O....o i never listen anymore, i just copy notes down, then do the worksheets and somehow, i get it without listening xD I also get good grades :3

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-23 19:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Lolz woot! Yup! i get everything from my science geeky friend xD

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-24 02:16:47 +0000 UTC]

yeaahhh xD when i'm too lazy to do anything in class i just get my friend to give me her homework once she finishes it xD

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-24 14:02:17 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!!! xD

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-24 19:50:26 +0000 UTC]

great minds do think alike my friend xD

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-10-28 18:51:58 +0000 UTC]

omg i love that saying too owo

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-10-29 01:24:16 +0000 UTC]

IT'S AN AMAZING SAYING FOR THE KOOL PEOPLE Xd

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loveDoodlez In reply to Erika1004 [2010-11-02 16:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Yuuuuuussssss! o0o xD

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Erika1004 In reply to loveDoodlez [2010-11-03 00:22:28 +0000 UTC]

x3

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