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This was done for me by the ever-talented Gagala

This movie-styled POSTER is based on my current KP fanfic, The Worst of Both Worlds in which Kim, Shego, and Bonnie find themselves on the run from both sides of the Law.

Bonnie's outfit is thanks to and found here: [link]

I just have to call attention to some of the details:
• Bonnie's guns are gold-plated 9mm clones of Whitney Wolverines, she wears them in the same dual back holster made famous by Nicolas Cage in the movie: Face Off
• The car is an Aerovette, a futuristic 1973 Chevy concept car that was in fact killed for production by then GM general manager DeLorean a month before he walked to start finding investors for his own company...
• If two of the aircraft, which will be known as Switchblades, seem familiar, that is because they are the variable-rotor Whispercraft heli-jet seen in the movie: The 6th Day
• The boat is a Sea-Doo Challenger 1800 jetboat
• Kim's motorcycle is the same one showcased in a vinyl kit of Asuka Langley Soryu. I don't know if it's a real bike or not…
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Comments: 93

muozwp In reply to ??? [2020-07-25 21:48:04 +0000 UTC]

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Gagala-van-Org In reply to ??? [2014-07-15 08:07:09 +0000 UTC]

This critique is ridiculous. Sounds like a frustrated person, shooting on everything without having any idea of what is all behind it. Pitiable.
 

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muozwp In reply to Gagala-van-Org [2020-07-25 21:51:11 +0000 UTC]

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oldsoldier2 In reply to ??? [2014-06-04 15:53:40 +0000 UTC]

I marked the critique as unfair.  

As it has been quoted 'ad nauseum' over the years "You are entitled to your opinion."  However, had I submitted a critique as vague as this one to my art teacher or English Lit prof back in the day, they each would have ripped me a new one.  To me, if one is going to provide a critique then one should explain the reasoning behind any assertions whether good or bad.  How can you fix it if you don't know why it's bad (if it is that at all) or learn what you did right if it's liked.  Also, it doesn't seem as if you are aware that the actual drawing was done by Gagala since, by the wording, you're criticizing 'her' drawing style.

"Love Robin is a Kim Possible and a Care Bears fangirl and she have children, Sorry for off topic.".....I'm curious as to the point of this statement or it's relevance, especially when you admit and apologize for it being off topic.  Why was it included in the first place?  

You point out Love Robin is a 'Kim Possible' fan: well that is obvious by the subject of the artwork.  You also mention she is a fan of 'Care Bears'; maybe she is, privately (I really don't know), however, I've seen no 'Care Bear' stories on her site at FF.N nor is there any related artwork on her DA site.  Still, these two points, on their own, could have been considered acceptable as an introductory sentence to the critique.  It still behooves you to check your facts first.

However, pointing out she has children is completely irrelevant to the critique: what does her having a family got to do with the quality of a deviation?  

I noticed a number of spelling and grammar errors throughout your critique; it would appear it had not been properly proofread.  I will refer only to the above quoted text as an example.  Check your conjugations, it should be has not have, and punctuation: I believe a period and not a comma would be appropriate after the word children.  Also, it would seem to me, "Sorry for getting off topic." would come across better than the original, "Sorry for off topic."


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LoveRobin In reply to ??? [2014-06-03 08:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I did not make this art. It was a gift to me.

So it is not me you are critiquing.

And I never liked Care Bears. You'll not find a dingle mention of them any where on my pages but right here.


If you intend to flame me, at least get your facts straight.

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Phillip-the-2 In reply to LoveRobin [2014-06-03 19:25:57 +0000 UTC]

Heh.  Jesus.  Five years and I just now noticed this is a Gagala piece.

As for your "criticizer"....flame on bub, flame on.  It's usually helpful to have artistic skills before one poo-poos other peoples work.

But I digress.

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Lucario0608 [2017-08-21 03:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Could you send me the link of the 2 images where Kim Shego and Bonnie are hugging ? That look really cute ^-^

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LoveRobin In reply to Lucario0608 [2017-08-21 09:01:53 +0000 UTC]

-replied to wrong comment, moved to correct one-

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LoveRobin In reply to Lucario0608 [2017-08-21 08:08:37 +0000 UTC]

A search for Gagala should pull up his Patreon. He does a lot of KiSheBo.

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Lucario0608 In reply to LoveRobin [2017-08-30 01:57:25 +0000 UTC]

my god! perhaps I typed it  wrong but   I searched her name alongside kim possible and  I didn't expect that... uff Rule 34  why do they always do that to the Kp characters?

Sorry but would it be much to ask  if you just passed me  the direct link to the images?

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micknutson9 [2015-01-15 19:48:22 +0000 UTC]

I also noticed that you gave a local shoutout to minnesotamutt aka Mutt-Lii but I also noticed that he/she is no longer on dA. Do you ever know what ever happened to him/her? I really liked his/her work.

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RobinHoodForLifeFTW [2014-09-21 22:19:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't like DannyCat1209's critique

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LoveRobin In reply to RobinHoodForLifeFTW [2014-09-22 07:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Most people did not.

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Dim432 In reply to LoveRobin [2015-05-27 22:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Why not find a person to make a comic to this

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LoveRobin In reply to Dim432 [2015-05-28 08:39:50 +0000 UTC]

That is easier said than done. Most even half-decent artists have their own concepts and projects to spend their time on, and it is not in my budget to *commission* anyone for a consistent basis for this story's planned length.

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Dim432 In reply to LoveRobin [2015-05-28 14:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I suppose I think you should give it a try

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LoveRobin In reply to Dim432 [2015-05-29 18:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Tell you what. Find me a *decent* artist interested and willing to work with me on it, and I'll enter negotiations with them.

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Kermitthefrog223456 [2014-06-13 01:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Wut

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LoveRobin In reply to Kermitthefrog223456 [2014-06-13 03:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Wut "whut"?

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Hrodwulf123 [2012-09-17 11:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Have you tried to implement more exotic weapons in this story like the M-29 Davy Crockett nuclear rifle?

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LoveRobin In reply to Hrodwulf123 [2012-09-17 22:54:08 +0000 UTC]

Truthfully gotta say, no, hasn't yet crossed my mind.

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Levia-the-Dragon [2012-04-19 05:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Huh... Bonnie fighting alongside Kim... that's somehow more implausible than Shego doing the same...

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LoveRobin In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2012-04-19 06:17:54 +0000 UTC]

"A Rockwaller trapped at a Hard Pace"

At first Bonnie will be more or less trapped along for the ride. However as events unfold, she gains the spine her family is known for. Hopefully her growth will be beleivable. Mainly Bon Bon will reach a point where she gets pissed…

Mind you, Kim and Shego will be mostly fighting for their own side, y'knau, like the saying "Who's side are you on?" "Mine". Both sides of the Law will be out to get them.

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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to LoveRobin [2012-04-19 06:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, fair enough then.

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LoveRobin In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2012-04-19 07:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Chapter 1 is up, link thru my sig

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ChrisTheKitty [2012-04-19 02:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome.

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LoveRobin In reply to ChrisTheKitty [2012-04-19 06:12:00 +0000 UTC]

I know, riiight?

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MilesTheCalicoCat [2011-09-11 21:53:52 +0000 UTC]

So this movie comes out on the fifth of neverary? Can't wait!

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LoveRobin In reply to MilesTheCalicoCat [2011-09-11 22:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Chapter 1 is up and chapter 2 is nearly completed.

BTW, Welcome to the Haven too.

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MilesTheCalicoCat In reply to LoveRobin [2011-09-11 23:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Sweeeeeeet. /)^3^(\ and thanks! Just lookin around. :3

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micknutson9 [2011-05-27 11:39:17 +0000 UTC]

I just did some research, Bonnie has a twin sister, her name is Larxene, The Savage Nymph from Kingdom Hearts. Their personalities are just about the same, it's almost scary. Give Bonnie skills of a Ninja *Ahem* Kunoichi, and give her throwing knives, then she could pass for her. It's almost ironic what you can find in between a game and a popular Disney show like Kim Possible these days isn't it? Do you think those similarities between Bonnie and Larxene were intentional when they designed her or was it just some random fluke it happened that way?

PS The Asuka Langley Soryu Motorcycle is based off of the Kawasaki Ninja ZX-10R Racing Motorcycle if you're still curious about that little piece of info. Just thought I'd be helpful is all. Good day to you, ciao.

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-27 12:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the motorcycle info! I see he link is dead now too. I'll have to check my HD to see if I copied it.
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I don't know anything about Kingdom Hearts, so I can't speak about Larxene. I know that KH is owned by Disney and that artists who draw certain characters like to recycle their models, but isn't KH 3D/CGI? Bonnie the Vampire Slayer will be very kick-ass in her skills.

Most of my visions of the MHS cheerleaders give them mad skillz.

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micknutson9 In reply to LoveRobin [2011-05-27 19:05:51 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I'm glad I can help out as best I could. Hopefully it won't be too difficult to update the bio for the WBW poster.

As for Kingdom Hearts? I tend to agree that Disney likes to recycle characters alot so maybe that is what i was thinking about eh? As for the game itself, You should definitely try it out, especially Kingdom Hearts: Re:Chain of Memories for the PS2 to get a feel for Larxene cause if you love and are a fan of Bonnie, you're definitely going to love her if you know what I mean. And as for the KH CGI? Yeah it is during the cinematic cgi cut-scenes, the in-game cut-scenes are not as much cgi as the movie ones. But I agree, all the cheerleaders would having mad skills if be kick-ass in Larxene's skills, and you pretty much nailed it with Bonnie, she would be one savage nymph with her skills especially if the were based off of Larxene, LOL! Hope this helped, and btw, glad I can help.

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micknutson9 In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-28 07:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Say, is the 1973 Chevy Aerovette Bonnie's car? Yes or no? I was just curious because she's the one who's driving it in the pic. Let me know okay? Thanks!

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micknutson9 [2011-05-25 08:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Since I like this pic so much, I decided to add it o my faves, hope you don't mind.

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-25 09:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Not at all! Thank you!

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micknutson9 In reply to LoveRobin [2011-05-25 09:40:30 +0000 UTC]

No, Thank You!

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micknutson9 [2011-05-25 07:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Yo! LoveRobin, I don't know if you've seen it yet, but uh, minnesotamutt has just updated her Shake Your Bon-Bon Artwork just recently. You should check it out, it's actually pretty cool. Thought I should give you the heads up, keep up the good work, looking forward to all the crazy zaniness you'll put our titular heroes in so to speak, LOL! Until then, later.

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-25 09:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the heads up

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micknutson9 In reply to LoveRobin [2011-05-25 09:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome, hope you enjoy the improvement my friend!

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-25 14:53:23 +0000 UTC]

I always suspected the coloring was due to light/shading, but I still liked the zig-zag look to tie her into Shego

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micknutson9 In reply to LoveRobin [2011-05-25 18:57:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, me too! Btw, did you give her a Martial art to suit her personality and/or her slender, very curvy build? Or is it one of the major spoilers you can't divulge yet until later chapters? Please clear this up for me will you? Thanks again!

PS Zigzag patterns rule!

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-26 02:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Actually, to parallel her with Kim, I've given her 16 types of dance styles, which in Bonnie the Vampire Slayer is revealed to have been secret training for martial arts. Her father had figured her to be unnecessary, anticipating that should the slayer, my OC oldest daughter Vonnie, fall, the Slayer Essence would pass to one of the twins Connie and Lonnie.

Their mother knew better than to leave Bonnie with zero training whatsoever, so all the focus on dances.

In WBW her skills will come from dance and a few other surprising sources.

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micknutson9 In reply to LoveRobin [2011-05-26 02:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Ah, ok!

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micknutson9 In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-26 03:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, in my story, she's classed as a Monk in the Final Fantasy game genre. Hence, I'm writing a FF fanfiction story where Bonnie is the primary protagonist of the fic, but completely original and no crossover whatsoever. So that's the only reason why I asked about Bonnie's Martial Arts status, get it? but each his/her own right? Thanks for your input anyway, I'm still deciding on what martial arts skill to give her that deals with dance movements, there's only 3 that I know of: Caporiea, Tai Chi Chuan, and Aikido. But I don't know if any of those will suit her much, if at all. Like I said before, that's why I asked. Well anywho, Keep up the good work, looking forward to your updates!

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micknutson9 In reply to micknutson9 [2011-05-25 19:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, ooh! I forgot to add in, if you really want to tie her in to Shego with her zigzag pattern, then what other way than to color one side of her top completely black, am I right? But hey, it's your story, you can do whatever you want to. I was just giving you some ideas that's all. hope you don't mind! Keep up the good work pal!

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micknutson9 [2011-04-24 03:45:59 +0000 UTC]

I love the design of the outfit that Bonnie Rockwaller is wearing since she's my second favorite Character that's a rival to Kim Possible. Do you think it's okay if I use this particular outfit for a story that I'm writing, but in a different color?

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-04-24 16:11:28 +0000 UTC]

*I* have no problems, so long as credit is given first to for the inspirational source and then me (as the place you first saw it; have you read my Worst of Both Worlds? Link to my ffn page in my siggy).

However I would also be remiss if I don't also urge you get *minnesotamutt 's okay.

And please, link us both when you post!

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micknutson9 In reply to micknutson9 [2011-04-24 03:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Oops, I meant to comment on Minnesotamutt's Shake Your Bon-Bon link, sorry ignore my last comment. But I do like this story that you're writing though. When are you going to update it next?

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LoveRobin In reply to micknutson9 [2011-04-24 18:35:59 +0000 UTC]

LOL, replied to yourself... I've done that too. I'd not have seen this question had I not decided to review the pic again.

I've been dealing with medical and medication issues, but the next update is just about ready. I've also gotten most of the full story outline completed, you'll not believe some of the stunts I have planned for them to do!

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