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Loxre — The winter howl
Published: 2016-11-04 20:08:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 321; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Yeess finally some real art. So this is my second howling wolf!! (Fourth wolf I've ever made) Looks more like a cry than a howl though. Oh well. Anywho yeah, I should really buy a tablet, it would probably look a little nicer... Please don't steal! <3 Oh and btw is says "The sky is dark. The ground is white. The world is peaceful on this wintery night." Since I am not a core member I can't ask for critiques the cool way. So I'll ask on here .
Rip shading ;_;
Take only memories, leave only comments <3 ~Violina
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(c) Google for poem and background
Please critique on what I could do to make this better! Please don't leave anything out, you won't hurt my feelings!
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oh cool, it kinda does.
Hers/his is waaay beeter though
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well that's cause they practice a lot!
that's the key to getting better
none of those tips you're asking for will help you more than practice
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Hmmm, this drawing is okay. I do like the subject of this picture. I love wolves. The proportions are pretty good. There are some things I suggest you fix tho
1. The line work is a little shaky. If you use a tablet, I suggest making fast strokes to make the lines a little straighter. If you use a mouse, I suggest doing the same thing.
2. The shading is pretty good. I love the blur technique. To add more depth, you could use a darker color and shade in the parts like under the fur. If you want to add texture, you could make some strokes the way the fur goes.
Overall, this painting is good, but I suggest you change the things above. I give this a 6/10. I really hope I didn't come across as too harsh.
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Thank you so much for the wonderful tips. I will defenitly keep this is mind!
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you did wonderful on this! keep up the amazing work! ^^
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ysw (your so welcome i'm not the best at making new acronyms )
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X3 bad at making new acronym buddies! ^^
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Yaay! tisc (this is so cool XDD ) ^^
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thank you for the points and llama! ^^
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Of course! It's my pleasure.
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aww thank u!!!you're so nice! ^^
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X3 i had too i couldn't resist the random icons!
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same! XP They are so cool compared to the other website I go on
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X3 lel, Whaa the other site you go on? U don't have to answer I was just curious.
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I'm on scratch as _Angel_Rocks_
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cool! i'll have to check that website out ^^
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why did you commented in your own post? like, wtf
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XD Idk. Why shouldn't I?? I was talking with a friend ^^
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Ooh, I love wolves. 
That shading is really good, and I mean that. It helps to balance out her white fur with the background. 
All in all, that is a good wolf and I love the detail with the wispy breath! I recommend googling holwing wolves for reference, but keep going.
-Your friendly Project Commenter
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Thanks for the amazing critique! 
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Ah. I understand, been there. ^^ Glad it was helpful, thank you!
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If you can, try and not add words to the drawing, it just kinda gets in the way of the image itself and forces a meaning down meh throat.
Background could use work as it's just an image with an overlay, drawing a winter forest background with the style of the wolf itself will mesh well with the overall image
other than those two nit-picks, Looks great
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Okay, I'll use your advice for future art. Thanks so much! <3
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Please critique on what I could do to make this better! Please don't leave anything out, you won't hurt my feelings!
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I love this image and her words ^^
(rip shading,i'm dying ahah)
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