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Cheri216 [2016-05-20 20:24:42 +0000 UTC]
This was excellent. I really enjoyed your writing.
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polkadotpeony [2011-11-27 07:44:41 +0000 UTC]
Perfection. Absolute perfection. Can this be canon please? Because to me it is. How do you always manage to write Severus with such breathtaking perfection? You never cease to amaze me. As always I also love your conversations with Dumbledore. I LOVE how Sev blames Dumbles for his road to Deatheaterdom. I also love the scenes with Rita. There are very few things more enjoyable than seeing Severus insult a complete dunderhead.
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blackeyedlily [2011-10-16 04:31:23 +0000 UTC]
I was browsing through Spinner's End and found this piece. It is wonderful writing. It made me tense just reading it. I don't normally look for reading material on DA, but I'm glad I found this. Severus' evisceration of Ms. Skeeter is priceless.
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Cissy-88 [2011-01-09 21:00:42 +0000 UTC]
This is really an outstanding piece of writing, and I'm usually very strict in my judgements about HP fics, expecially when Snape is involved.
I was going through the entries on :spinners--end: when I found this, and now I'm really glad I stopped to read it!!
Your portrait of this period in Severus' life is very in character and believable, which is not an easy accomplishment..kudos to you!
Also I loved how he pwned Rita!XD...He's such a clever bastard!
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Cissy-88 In reply to ls269 [2011-01-09 23:07:18 +0000 UTC]
I'll be sure to check them as soon as possible!!
I really like your style!
And I really understand the obsessed part!
For me it has been going on since 2001, when only the first 3 books were available in my country and I was 13!
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QKelly [2010-05-09 20:02:11 +0000 UTC]
Excellent -- well-written and with spot-on characterizations; your mercurial Dumbledore, twinkly and flinty by turns, is beautifully imagined. And Severus, all anguish, anger, and fear, is just as I imagine him.
~~Kelly
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islandsmoke [2010-05-08 15:36:47 +0000 UTC]
This is an absolute gem! Marvelous characterizations, and lovely writing; thank you for your insights!
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whitehound [2010-05-02 14:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully written, and a lovely character-sketch.
What canon evidence we have suggests that Snape never did kill anyone prior to Albus, but I suppose Albus may mean that he must have been at least willing to go along with other people killing, to be a DE.
If you accept interview canon, JKR says that Voldemort *did* try to recruit James and Lily, and refusing to be recruited was one of the three ways in which they defied him. But Severus wouldn't necessarily know that of course.
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CreativeLittle1 [2010-04-14 11:52:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm never very good at reviewing other people's writing - but I thought that was stunning. You know Snape very well and definitely communicated that in your writing.
I imagine this would have been very similar to what he was going through on that first day. I'm definitely going to check out some of your other stuff!
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Emeryx09 [2010-04-11 22:48:50 +0000 UTC]
great convo between snape and rita!
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karabaja [2010-03-10 16:23:46 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful work again!!! You have an amazing way with words, and the pictures you manage to create with them are as vivid as any painting, photography or drawing I can think of! I particularly love the comparison of Severus to a caged animal, with Dumbledore as an amused watcher.
"He had never understood why Dumbledore – who could have done anything – who could have been Minister for Magic, or Chief Healer at St. Mungo's, willingly came back to this zoo every September. Was he just insecure about his intellect, and needed to have it accentuated by contrast? " ...well, this one made me roar with laughter! I know I probably shouldn't find it so humorous, but comparing the school to the zoo is SO Sev-like and, well...I agree with him. It was good to read there was somebody who shares my view, even if it's a Death Eater
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karabaja In reply to ls269 [2010-03-10 18:58:00 +0000 UTC]
I could never be a teacher, not in a million years. Children are too often so unbelievably cruel to one another and to anybody and anything not strong enough to stand up to them that it makes my skin crawl. Perhaps it's a horrible thing to say about children, but that was my experience through my entire childhood, and watching today's kids isn't helping the matter none. That's one of the factors that make me a bit hesitant about becoming a mother; I don't know what would I do if my kid was either a bully or a victim; the mere thought makes me shudder. They show exactly how cruel the human race really is, because they're not calculated enough yet to know how to hide it.
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Melorik In reply to ls269 [2010-03-11 02:14:18 +0000 UTC]
and yet we have to keep in mind that by the time he was in a position to stop bullying... he really didn't.
I don't think anywhere in the books did he ever step in and stop kids from tormenting each other. Guess he figured that if his childhood was miserable, then everyone's should be the same.
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whitehound In reply to Melorik [2010-05-02 15:03:03 +0000 UTC]
At least twice when we see the Slytherins behave in a bullying way, we are specifically told that they do so silently and only when Snape turns his back. This suggests that they know that if he caught them bullying, he would be angry - so rather than condoning bullying, he is gullible and too willing to believe that his Slyths are all put-upon little angels.
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greeneyes-17 [2010-03-10 15:35:46 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! I loved the way Severus distilled everything to anger.
Like you, I've often wondered what Lily knew. Suspicions she must have had, and I think she could not help but listen, whenever there were rumours about her ex-friend's allegiance to Voldemort and/or Dumbledore too, eventually.
Poor Sev! To even hope that Rita's Skeeter's vitriolic stuff would perhaps reach Lily's ears...hoping she might see him in a different light!
Anyway, nice work!
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LaMoonstar [2010-03-10 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed, you delved into Severus' attitude and mannerisms so well!
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Vizen [2010-03-09 13:14:53 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Dumbledore promised he would never reveal the 'best part of him' (of Severus). For me, he never said he trusts Severus to the Potters (he could accept Severus only in order to use him) and never said about him telling the Prophecy. Maybe Lily had a guess and hoped that Severus was changing of side but who knows.
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Vizen [2010-03-09 13:06:03 +0000 UTC]
Out of habit, he scanned his coffee for signs of poison, but found only signs of bad coffee
Severus Snape raised his eyebrows. It was the most cordial greeting he could muster
"The dungeons are the limit of my jurisdiction."
...the dashing new Potions master....
Snape raised his eyebrows again. It was a mistake to flatter him anyway, but to do so with a quill in your mouth, half-garbling your words, was a move that ought to have landed her in detention.
Brilliant. And I absolutely love how you show the differences of understandings/minds because Dumbledore and Snape.
BTW, it's incredible but I have an idea for the Challenge and it is precisely in the "you are the natural teacher" spirit of your fic. I just hope I can convey it in a pic, as you did brilliantly in words here.
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Delicious Rita, too. I love it, when Rita is flirthing with Snape. Snapesforte's did a great job with the idea in her fic (Soul Play). Have you read it ?
I love also how your young Sverus is already the Professor... I can recognize his features and special behavior.... (extase)
And I love
But that was stupid. He didn't want her to know. He didn't want anyone to know. That was why he turned every sensation into anger. Anger was the acceptable face of feeling, for Severus Snape.
He folded up the paper with a crisp motion, letting his eyes skip over the Dark Mark on the front page, just as they skipped over the Dark Mark on his forearm. It would be time for lessons soon. If the dunderheads were good for nothing else, they kept him busy. Merlin knew what would happen if he relaxed.
Shortly, thank you for this, I deeply enjoyed it !
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