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LttleGhost — 'Songpaw's First Day' before and after meme

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Published: 2018-12-17 18:22:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 4223; Favourites: 218; Downloads: 6
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a direct side by side comparison of these two pictures!!! I kinda wish I had payed more attention to keeping the foreshortening on Songpaw like I did in the first one, but otherwise I think I improved the background texture and anatomy a lot

Crowfeather (c) Erin Hunter
Songpaw/step is mine

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RawrDrawss [2022-06-16 01:00:24 +0000 UTC]

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RawrDrawss [2022-05-10 02:30:59 +0000 UTC]

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LucyDraws-12 [2021-06-28 16:59:04 +0000 UTC]

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FluffballCharlie [2018-12-18 04:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!! The improvement in this looks really good!

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LttleGhost In reply to FluffballCharlie [2018-12-29 20:21:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!!

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FluffballCharlie In reply to LttleGhost [2018-12-30 04:04:30 +0000 UTC]

No problem~

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RoyalWisteria [2018-12-18 04:07:31 +0000 UTC]

That improvemebt is precious!! It is so inspiring!

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LttleGhost In reply to RoyalWisteria [2018-12-29 20:22:02 +0000 UTC]

thank yoU!!

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JericaWinters [2018-12-17 22:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Great progress!

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LttleGhost In reply to JericaWinters [2018-12-29 20:22:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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WinterMallow [2018-12-17 22:34:37 +0000 UTC]

the values and detailing have improved so much! so have your style! 

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LttleGhost In reply to WinterMallow [2018-12-29 20:22:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!!

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Ridraw [2018-12-17 20:35:46 +0000 UTC]

The background and shading certainly look much prettier in the new drawing! Although I have to admit, I prefer the original one for its perspective and the more natural anatomy / proportions of the cats. I actually think the anatomy in the first drawing is much more accurate than in the second one (it's less comic-style-y). ^^ But both look really good!

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LttleGhost In reply to Ridraw [2018-12-17 20:45:58 +0000 UTC]

comic-y style is honestly what I was going for tbh, and while there are some things that are more stylized I do think I made Song's front legs more anatomically correct, but I do agree on the perspective, that was something I kinda messed up on when I was re-doing the sketch

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Ridraw In reply to LttleGhost [2018-12-17 21:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the front leg is definitely improved ^^ I guess I just prefer the more realistic style, their chests and necks especially ^^

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user172839 [2018-12-17 20:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Your shading and your colors have improved very much and this sooo beautiful ! But, I prefer the perspective of the first drawing, It's more...dynamic I think. Great improvement ^^

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LttleGhost In reply to user172839 [2018-12-17 20:26:37 +0000 UTC]

yeah that was one thing I think I missed out on with Song's position when I was trying to correct the anatomy, but thank you!!!

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bayIin [2018-12-17 18:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Your fur textures and shadows have improved so much!

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LttleGhost In reply to bayIin [2018-12-17 18:33:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!

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Smallwarrior [2018-12-17 18:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Holy guacamole talk about improvement! Personally I think both are amazing, but the newer one is absolutely gorgeous!! Keep up the awesome work!

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LttleGhost In reply to Smallwarrior [2018-12-17 18:34:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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