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LuBue — A Detective Conan story: Double Trouble Chapter 1

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Published: 2018-04-16 18:20:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 6718; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 30
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Description This is the first chapter of many to come. If you want to read the others, visit my profile and the folder to this fan-manga: lubue.deviantart.com/gallery/6…

Because this is a fan-fiction, nothing should be taken as canon, it simply serves as a form of entertainment.

I do not own the characters, all rights go to Gosho Aoyama, the original creator of the Detective Conan series.

If you liked this sort of project, feel free to share and rate it. Every form of review is highly requested.
There will be similar works like this one in the future, so become a watcher, if you want more.


So now I will write a little bit about some decisions and plans I made for this  series:

1. Originally I wanted to make a series in which Ran is the one who gets poisoned, but that would be so unrealistic and I would have to pull some series strings for plot armor, in order for it to work out.
The reason for that is, it would just make no sense for Shinichi to not uncover the truth immediately. Heiji only needed two days to figure out the truth and it is probable that Shinichi is a little bit better than he is. Besides he has known Ran for years, so the story would just be a story how adult Shinichi hunts the organisation while a child Ran goes to kiddy school (as if Shinichi would put a Ran in child-form in any danger, when he doesn't even want the adult Ran to come close to the organisation.) That's why I changed the story.

2.As you might have noticed, while I followed the original chain of event (something I will continue to do, at least for the beginning), I change the dialogues of  Vodka and Gin. The intention behind this is to give them more distinct characters. As for now, in the original Gin seems to be an absolute genius and Vodka is just a small henchmen, what is a rather odd pairing for such a dangerous organisation. That's why I want to make Gin to a character, who is very good in planing and fighting but sucks at social interactions and can't cope with "stupid people". This task, like blackmailing and hostages, would be handled by Vodka who understands the average person better and is more charismatic than Gin. 


3. As a little peck for the next chapter, I do not plan to let Shinichi and Ran stay with Kogorou, because I seriously doubt that even he would be dense enough to not recognize his own daughter. However he will have his own role in the whole story, which should give him enough to do. As for the future home of Ran and Shinichi, I can say that they will stay with some  well know characters, but not Agasa or Shinichis parents. 

So that's it for this chapter, I hope you found it somewhat entertaining and will come back for the next chapter. 

Fair well.
 

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Comments: 13

zakudosukin [2024-01-06 11:03:02 +0000 UTC]

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LuBue In reply to zakudosukin [2024-01-06 11:22:56 +0000 UTC]

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MeiTanteixX [2018-04-19 13:11:16 +0000 UTC]

My god! I'm so intrigued by this idea
well done! I like the art.

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LuBue In reply to MeiTanteixX [2018-04-19 14:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, even though I must admit there are still a lot of things which don't quiet look like they should. Especially Gin looks a bit odd in my opinion.

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MeiTanteixX In reply to LuBue [2018-04-19 20:59:16 +0000 UTC]

It's ok, there's always room for improvement. So long as you are enjoying it  

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LuBue In reply to MeiTanteixX [2018-04-19 21:55:54 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, I enjoy it all most too much, in fact when I have a good idea for a plot twist, I often find myself grinning like a mad-man, a occurrence which terrifies the people around me. 

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MeiTanteixX In reply to LuBue [2018-04-20 17:16:32 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling xD
Sometimes, I catch myself unintentionally imitating the facial expressions I draw too.

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LuBue [2018-04-17 15:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, i forgot to mention: making one chapter is a pretty big piece of work and I don't quiet have the time to draw right now, that I would like to have. So the next chapter will probably be finished in about 1 to 2 months.

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Sydney-Chan7 [2018-04-17 01:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This should be interesting.

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LuBue In reply to Sydney-Chan7 [2018-04-17 15:29:50 +0000 UTC]

I hope you won't lose that new found interest. 

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Sydney-Chan7 In reply to LuBue [2018-04-26 13:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry I won't.

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Mentogami [2018-04-16 22:31:50 +0000 UTC]

I always wondered what it would be like if Ran took the poison too xD

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LuBue In reply to Mentogami [2018-04-17 15:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Well i can't guarantee that you will like what I have in mind, but it will be surprising or at least I hope it will be.

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