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Lucefudu — Sky Matron

Published: 2012-09-12 12:51:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 751; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 16
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In a dark age in which corruption has its roots deep within the Equestrian society, I have aimed for the impossible. I've aimed for freedom.

~ Quote from Captain Rarity, self proclaimed 'Sky Matron' and 'Liberator of Equestria'. Excerpt taken from Equestria's Most Wanted Criminals.

"Have I told you the tale of the mare o’ the sky?
A tailor from Ponyville who learned how to fly
When Celestia’s hoof ached hard on her throat
She looked to the sky and manned her own boat

So all the brave ponies, tied to the ground
take a lick o’ salt and pass it around
Forget all your troubles and all of your strife
To the sky matron alone we’ll pledge our life"

-- From The Ballad of the Sky Matron by Lyra Heartstrings.

My idea is of an Alternate Universe Equestria, in which there are no unicorns or pegasi. Rarity always had the will to be the greatest, but the corrupt government's oppression always forced her to a lowly life she didn't belong. So what she did? She defied everypony and shot out to the skies, becoming the first and most prominent Sky Pirate.

Fanfic idea for Owlor ([link] ). He might take it or he will discard it; who knows?
* Twilight Sparkle: The main antagonist of the story. Someone who also believes that there is wrong in the world, but she, as a member of the Equestrian Elite Task Force is bound by her oath to Equestria, to defend it from any threat. Think of her like an Inspector Finch, from V for Vendetta.

* Pinkamena Diane 'Pinkie' Pie: Rarity's trustworthy sugar-high engineer. Pinkamena, as her real name goes, was always seen as a threat to Equestria due to her hyperactive and happy demeanor. Eager to act, but wise nonetheless, she had always looked up to the Sky Matron in secrecy. One day, in which a raid-gone-badly forced said Sky Pirate to raid her repair shop and hold Diane hostage, she was more thrilled than scared to comply with Rarity's demands to fix her airship. When Twilight Sparkle and her Task Force arrived, her agents cared little for who was friend and who was foe, forcing Rarity to save the innocent mare from her certain death. Since then, Diane adopted the pseudonym of Pinkie Pie and has faithfully served Rarity and her crew with the utmost diligence.

* Rainbow Dash: Rarity's right hoof and second in command. Her backstory is unknown even to Rarity herself, who was wiser than to tamper with Rainbow's short temper. Still- Rarity trusts Rainbow with her life, something that the cyan pony has proved to be a intelligent decision time and time again. May be brash and sometimes obnoxious, but once she sets her mind in a goal, she will travel lengths in order to make it happen.

* Applejack: A farmer from the town of Ponyville. She is a strong-willed individual and has an exemplary sense of righteousness. Although she knows about the Matron's quest for freedom, she doesn't know her personally and does not condone to her violent actions. Still- she can sense that there is a storm being brewed, and Rarity is not the one bringing it to a boil.

* Fluttershy:

Credits:
Wanted Poster by DAWildGuns ([link] )

Rarity Vector by Mackaged ([link] )
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Comments: 11

Lacey-Lilly1234 [2014-01-03 04:12:42 +0000 UTC]

No Horn!XD

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Lucefudu In reply to Lacey-Lilly1234 [2014-01-03 04:49:10 +0000 UTC]

As intended.

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Lacey-Lilly1234 In reply to Lucefudu [2014-01-03 04:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Lol!XD

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Lucefudu In reply to Lacey-Lilly1234 [2014-01-03 05:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Did you even read what is written in this submission?

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Lacey-Lilly1234 In reply to Lucefudu [2014-01-03 15:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Sorry,I just read it today.Good Story!

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Toby15 [2013-04-07 23:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Well im a christain so yeah Poney lady :/

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Lucefudu In reply to Toby15 [2013-04-09 00:19:14 +0000 UTC]

What?!

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GhostlyReader [2012-10-05 19:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh god I've been reading this on FimFiction, and I can't get enough. I love your work, as well as your use of art alongside it... and dang, that is good art.

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Lucefudu In reply to GhostlyReader [2012-10-05 20:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^
I'm glad you enjoy it. Chapter 3 is being getting its extra polish as we speak.
We don't want to disappoint the readers, after all.

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twistedgear [2012-09-15 06:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh ,it is a great draft though I did laugh at some of the cliche character descriptions if just as a jest ,not really making fun of them just found some humor out of it ,since I have't played many a rpg in my lifetime I would love to read this though ,hope it goes though the inspector!

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Lucefudu In reply to twistedgear [2012-09-15 11:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Funny thing you mentioning that, because we're just giving its extra polish before publishing on FiMFiction.net. I will be sure to send you the link over a note when it's done.

And yeah... the descriptions are kind of too much, but I assure you that the story tones it down from my natural ability to cliché things. XD

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