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Published: 2006-03-08 22:43:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1200; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 59
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Model : [AttempteStock]Background: [CausticStock]
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β’ Prigioniera β’
-Federico Garcia Lorca-
Sui rami
indecisi
andava una fanciulla
ed era la vita.
Sui rami
indecisi.
Con uno specchietto
rifletteva il giorno
che era lo splendore
della sua fronte pura.
Sui rami
indecisi.
Sulle tenebre
andava sperduta,
piangendo rugiada,
prigioniera del tempo.
Sui rami
indecisi.
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Comments: 21
itΒ΄s wonderfull!!! very very sad but.. so beautyfull.. love it
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very sad..exactly...It expresses my mood when I created it...but I'm happy you like it
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Thank you so much
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Nice work here ... Nice to see Maddies work in use .. but I will have to disagree with her (sorry Madd's :S) in my opinion because the light is from behind her the contrast should be left alone and maybe have her darkened off a lil .. not too much because this is a wonderful stock image and has a lot of delicate detail in it that needs to be shown, also put a lil bit of shading down her right hand side (as we look at her from the viewers viewpoint (her left side)) again more from the light source .. she seems to be lighter on the right athan on the left and the light would be coming from the left .. if you just darken the girl a lil I really think this would be perfect ..
OK I been a tad picky on this one so I'll put it right .. This is a really nice picture and the B&W really does work wonders and gets the feel across perfectly .. the stock REALLY does help the dev to get its message across and for that you really have done your homework on this .. great job on that .. so if you can just sort out the colour balance you got a winner on this one 
Great work .. awesome in fact and thanks for the stock usage really happy with this as so should you be too
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Thanks a lot for these suggestions. They are very precise and sure they will help me to improve my technique.
Obviously thanks a lot for your wonderful stock
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No problem keep them rolling in
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Nice work! It makes me proud for me to be in one of Brian(causticstock)'s pictures.
Since Advance crtitque is encouraged, I'll suggest some stuff. I'd increase the contrast and the girl a bit and use the dodge tool (large and soft) to lighten up the far left part of her skirt so it looks more realistic.
Thank you for using my stock.
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Thanks a lot for your comment. I'd like to improve the use of graphic programs, so I like when someone give me some suggestions ^^
Tomorrow I'll try to do what you say ^^ Then, if you want, I'll show you the result.
P.S. Compliments for your stock. It has given me the inspiration
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No problem! And of course I'd like to see it.
Thanks, I do enjoy making stock photos, and it's a pleasure to have other people use and enjoy them.
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I have tried to lighten up the far left part of her skirt...and this is the result. I hope It is more realistic now ^^
I'm not expert about photoshop...I'm learning it at school, so at the moment I am not precise
Thanks a lot for the suggest
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It certainly is.. I'm not an expert either, I'm just teaching myself, but I hope to be oneday.
No problem.
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