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LuciaTan — Meeting in the garden (Pinku Friends Contest)
Published: 2013-08-18 20:48:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1311; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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Onmmmmg!!! This is the best draw I make with my Bamboo Tablet!!This is my entry for the contest!! >///<
They are Chissa (the blonde neko with the blue dress), Chiio (the pink haired neko with a pink bow) and Missu (the pink haired neko with a butterfly in her nose).
I love they so much!! I really liked how it turned Chiio's clothing, the pose of Chissa (but stay a little ecchi inadvertently and wanted to cover her ass with her tail but I hate the tail so curve o///o ) and the hair of Missu (and her expresion with the butterfly in the nose >u<) Her pose is a little ecchi too but her panties are covered :3
They are going to have a picnic in the garden! ^u^
©Chiio by
©Chissa by
©Missu by
©Art by Me
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Okay. Since I haven't done any critiques in a while, I thought I should critique this picture,since I really like this picture you did,and your style,too! <3
...And to start off, I'm going to say what I like about this picture. The poses are what I like the most; they're creative and cute! The hair is well done,with it being all wavy and shiny *u* And the eyes and clothing are done well too,not to mention the background! So yeah, I pretty much like the whole thing,like I had just said in my comment. XD
--Now to the pros and cons.
Pros: The anatomy is done really well,nothing is out of proportion,by the looks of it! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Cons: Nothing much is wrong with the picture,except one thing. One of the roots of the tree looks a little bit crooked. To help you out, I suggest that you make it a little thinner. Sorry if I sounded rude or anything at all!
So yeah. I hope this critique helps! And I wish you luck on the contest! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
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Kyaaaah!!! Thanks so much!!! It is a very good rate!!! ;A; I do not know if I deserve that!! This is my second critique and the best!! I'm glad that you liked my entry!!!;u;
It is true! That root is very rare! XD Even I have a lot to improve and learn about drawing. Thanks, you gave me a lot of spirit! <3
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You're very welcome! I'm glad I did! <3333
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SIENTO NO HABERTE RESPONDIDO ANTES PERO ME ENCANTA
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AWWWW Gracias!!!! Y muy bonito tu icono :33
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Maldito ratón. Quería decir que ha costado mucho trabajo finalizarlo
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Si la verdad es que costo y si soy sincera es el mejor dibujo que he dibujado por ahora. Bueno, soy principiante aun, solo tengo 14 años y no llevo mucho tiempo usando SAI :3
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No te preocupes. Tienes mucho tiempo por delante.
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Te ha quedado muy bien el dibujo pero el coloreado se me hace muy plástico en los personajes, siguen pareciendo un tanto de carne pero estarían a un pequeño paso de convertirse en muñecas de porcelana. El ambiente tiene la apariencia de ser muy estático. Es como si hubieran revelado una foto si no fuera por las proporciones, que la verdad están de lujo si son niñas de entre 7 y 12 años. Me atrevería decir que la fuente de luz proviene de vario lugares y que el ángulo de camera parce venir de arriba hacia el lado derecho si estoy en lo correcto. He de admitir que me ha hecho mucha gracia ver que las orejas de gato pertenece más al pelo que a la cabeza XD. En conclusión: Aparentemente el dibujo parace sencillo y simple pero se ve luego detenidamente que ha c
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Bueno aun tengo mucho que mejorar XD
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I really liked the picture. The three girls were cutely drawn and the garden looks beautiful too as well as the happy little picnic. Maybe, since it was garden maybe there should have been some different kinds of flowers added to it. Maybe, like ten or five something. I thought the color scheme was pretty good too.
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AWW Thanks so much!! ;A; Admittedly, I should have drawn more flowers >.< I Draw small yellow flowers but they are little... T.T
Thanks for your encouragement! <3
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Your welcome. And small flowers are okay, but make them a different color!
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Aaah! This is so adorable! >u< I like the poses of the three girls,with Chiio holding a flower in front of Chissa's face,and the butterfly on Missu's nose EEEEE
And besides from that, I love how you did the hair and clothes! The shading looks awesome,not to mention that the whole drawing is too! <3
But anyways...you did an amazing job on this! I think all three of them will like this!
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ONMMG!! Thanks so much!!! ;A; I really work in my entry! I apreciate so much your comment!! >///<
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You're very welcome~!
I'm glad you do! <333
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OMMG Thanks so much!! O///O
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