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I love photos like this, where you are immediately pulled in and just want to know the story of the subject(s). Photos like these are rarely planned, making them is often difficult, and, like here, the angle of the shot may not be ideal. Your vision/eye is sound. You have a good eye for people. Just reduce the noise in the photo. I am all for creative cropping, and if the photo file is large enough, crop! I would like to see this one after it is cleaned up a bit, however is a great shot as is. Keep up the great work!
~dusty
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Thank you very very much for your critique
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You're very welcome
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This is my first critique and I am an amateur photographer, please bear with me and send me a note, should you wish to discuss,
The vision is great to capture what seems to be a private moment between to seniors, I love how the old lady seems to be playing shy/coyish.
I love the originality of this photo and the fact that it's capture the everyday living.
The technique is solid, it's just a shame that the frame of the window (?) compromises the photo, as a suggestion maybe you should include more in the future to frame the photo.
This photo is very impact-ful, it's speaks to me as a true reflection of life and everyday living.
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Thank you very much for your review, and forgiveness in advance for my bad english.
Strangely I like the framing, although at first I thought like you, but ultimately I think it pretty much covers the topics and Reforce the side a little voyeur, I took this picture hidden on top of a terrace, it was almost impossible to fit differently, which I think brings a little something.
Thank you very much for your review and for the time you took to write
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Your english is fine! Never apologize for how you speak, my first language is french and I strongly believe that we have to be proud of learning and maintaining a second, third, etc .. language..
I find the frame is blurred but photograph are subjective to what you like and we are all different there!! You call this project365 is your goal to take a photo everyday? I admire your discipline if that's the case, it's one of my ambition to do that but I find with winter, I lack motivation and inspiration... lol.. maybe if I start in the spring.... just maybe.
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Hahahah ben Γ§a tombe bien je suis suisse
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Ah oui, c'est très bien ça, je suis canadienne français et mon fils se nomme Xavier Lucien.. Très joli nom!! la prochaine fois, je te fais une critique en français d'abord ...lol..
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Hahaha
Toujours rΓͺvΓ© de voir le canada, pas trop dure l'hiver ? hΓ©hΓ©
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On dit que ca fait 20 ans que notre hiver n'a pas Γ©tΓ© si dur.. En 2008, on a eu beaucoup de neige mais on avait du soleil.. Cette annΓ©e c'est tellement froid que les enfants peuvent pas jouer dehors.
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Ah merde haha
En tous cas merci pour la critique
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This is a brilliant photo. It not only feels as though retro in technique (personally, I feel that is all too fitting, lol), but it also tells a story that keeps you wanting to hear more. I do feel that the window did compromise a bit, yet that is forgivable. However, I do feel the cropping could be improved ever so slightly. Bring out the scenery some more to give a taste of depth and setting. Make us feel what they feel even more....
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Thank you very much for your critique
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You're very much welcome.
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