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luciol-sunaki β Sunaki's story Chap 9 p2
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The kid is my second son Dimitri (9)
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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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I want to be that boy o.o Reminds me of Tsunade hugging Nawaki.
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HA HA HA
I don't remember that part with Nawaki
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It's Tsunade kissing Nawaki's forehead leaving him staring at her gigantic boobs. o.o
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Oh yeah... I remember... But it's sister boobs, it doesn't count
I mean, staring is ok, he doesn't have his nose in it
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Gotta love brothers. We know our sisters too well
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gaara should be next in line for a boobie hug LOL
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Yes he should XD ... But it won't happen soon I fear...
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poor gaara no boobies for him yet... oh well lol
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Yay she gets to see him again and i was wondering could you put my oc in there
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Yes, I'd be glad to put your OC in it !!! But I don't know your OC, so give me link to description and after I have to think about a part for her(?)... That can take time...
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well i could give her the description now and a link to her pic
part 1
name: Chrisse Suzuki
Chakra: water
Status:Gennin
She is a jinchuuriki in he but she doesn't know, gaara killed her parents, she has short brown hair, with red streaks and wears a gold love Kanji necklace, she likes to wear a black shirt and short black shorts, she's usually barefoot,she likes to wear black cut off glove, and she has grey eyes and a step sister named yuri.
Part 2
the only difference is she can control all elements, but mostly likes water, she was banished from Suna because she has transformed in to her jinchuuriki and she is now a Jounin, here is a link [link]
here is her transformed [link]
and here she is in between [link]
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She's more cute than Gaara when he transform into shukaku !!
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haha yea don't get me wrong she's more dangerous that gaara well here's another one that shows the demon and chrisse together [link]
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What could I do with her ?
I could put her as a :
Sunaki's friend
restaurant client
accademy student
vilain
In all case I couldn't take her with her whole story
If you have any Idea...
hmm i'm kinda wondering between villain or sunaki's friend
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Sunaki's friends are civilians
Villains are usefull (for me) they often dies, but not always
It can also be as a Suna random ninja, during an attack, or a war
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well chrisse is from suna, but she could be a villain because she was banished from suna and want's to take revenge
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Ok !! I'll need 4 villains in chapter 22... It isn't for tomorrow !!!
But she can appear in the street or as a client before
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she'll appear on the street maybe gaara could recognize her?
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Hes adorable
Yay! She gets to see him again!
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I'll tell him
And yeeees ! We'll see him again and I hope people will like this cahpter, this is one of my favorites !!!
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I can't wait for more pages ^^
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