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luciol-sunaki β€” Sunaki's story Chap 9 p2

Published: 2010-10-30 17:18:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1334; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 3
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Description The kid is my second son Dimitri (9)

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Chap 1 : [link]
Chap 2 : [link]
Chap 3 : [link]
Chap 4 : [link]
Chap 5 : [link]
Chap 6 : [link]
Chap 7 : [link]
Chap 8 : [link]
Chap 9 : ---
Chap 15 : [link]

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Comments: 28

NinjaKittenFedora [2014-02-20 15:56:50 +0000 UTC]

seriously? the boob hug?

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CocaColawithIce [2013-01-06 00:35:26 +0000 UTC]

I want to be that boy o.o Reminds me of Tsunade hugging Nawaki.

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luciol-sunaki In reply to CocaColawithIce [2013-01-06 18:12:07 +0000 UTC]

HA HA HA
I don't remember that part with Nawaki

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CocaColawithIce In reply to luciol-sunaki [2013-01-07 01:28:51 +0000 UTC]

It's Tsunade kissing Nawaki's forehead leaving him staring at her gigantic boobs. o.o

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luciol-sunaki In reply to CocaColawithIce [2013-01-07 08:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah... I remember... But it's sister boobs, it doesn't count
I mean, staring is ok, he doesn't have his nose in it

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darker-deep-down [2012-04-11 01:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Gotta love brothers. We know our sisters too well

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waterlady15 [2011-05-07 05:37:20 +0000 UTC]

I just agree with everything down below.

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joy1579 [2010-10-31 02:30:58 +0000 UTC]

yayness!!!! <3

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girlofgames [2010-10-30 17:45:21 +0000 UTC]

breast hug LOL

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luciol-sunaki In reply to girlofgames [2010-10-30 17:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Poor kid !!!

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girlofgames In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 17:57:21 +0000 UTC]

gaara should be next in line for a boobie hug LOL

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luciol-sunaki In reply to girlofgames [2010-10-30 18:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes he should XD ... But it won't happen soon I fear...

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girlofgames In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 18:01:41 +0000 UTC]

poor gaara no boobies for him yet... oh well lol

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luciol-sunaki In reply to girlofgames [2010-10-30 18:05:33 +0000 UTC]

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twilighters01 [2010-10-30 17:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Yay she gets to see him again and i was wondering could you put my oc in there

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luciol-sunaki In reply to twilighters01 [2010-10-30 17:57:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'd be glad to put your OC in it !!! But I don't know your OC, so give me link to description and after I have to think about a part for her(?)... That can take time...

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twilighters01 In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 18:09:52 +0000 UTC]

well i could give her the description now and a link to her pic

part 1
name: Chrisse Suzuki
Chakra: water
Status:Gennin
She is a jinchuuriki in he but she doesn't know, gaara killed her parents, she has short brown hair, with red streaks and wears a gold love Kanji necklace, she likes to wear a black shirt and short black shorts, she's usually barefoot,she likes to wear black cut off glove, and she has grey eyes and a step sister named yuri.

Part 2
the only difference is she can control all elements, but mostly likes water, she was banished from Suna because she has transformed in to her jinchuuriki and she is now a Jounin, here is a link [link]
here is her transformed [link]
and here she is in between [link]

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luciol-sunaki In reply to twilighters01 [2010-10-30 19:35:52 +0000 UTC]

She's more cute than Gaara when he transform into shukaku !!

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twilighters01 In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 19:47:12 +0000 UTC]

haha yea don't get me wrong she's more dangerous that gaara well here's another one that shows the demon and chrisse together [link]

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luciol-sunaki In reply to twilighters01 [2010-10-30 19:58:01 +0000 UTC]

scary !!!
What could I do with her ?
I could put her as a :
Sunaki's friend
restaurant client
accademy student
vilain

In all case I couldn't take her with her whole story

If you have any Idea...

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twilighters01 In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 19:59:36 +0000 UTC]

hmm i'm kinda wondering between villain or sunaki's friend

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luciol-sunaki In reply to twilighters01 [2010-10-30 20:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Sunaki's friends are civilians
Villains are usefull (for me) they often dies, but not always
It can also be as a Suna random ninja, during an attack, or a war

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twilighters01 In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 20:28:38 +0000 UTC]

well chrisse is from suna, but she could be a villain because she was banished from suna and want's to take revenge

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luciol-sunaki In reply to twilighters01 [2010-10-30 20:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Ok !! I'll need 4 villains in chapter 22... It isn't for tomorrow !!!
But she can appear in the street or as a client before

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twilighters01 In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 20:35:02 +0000 UTC]

she'll appear on the street maybe gaara could recognize her?

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Aria-Abomination [2010-10-30 17:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Hes adorable
Yay! She gets to see him again!

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luciol-sunaki In reply to Aria-Abomination [2010-10-30 17:25:39 +0000 UTC]

I'll tell him
And yeeees ! We'll see him again and I hope people will like this cahpter, this is one of my favorites !!!

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Aria-Abomination In reply to luciol-sunaki [2010-10-30 18:51:56 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait for more pages ^^

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