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luciol-sunaki β Sunaki's story Chap25 p14
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Last page before I leave
Also : I need people to correct my English !!! I'd be glag you could tell me the mistakes you see.
Beginning : [link]
Previous : [link]
Next : [link]
Volume 3 : TO MAKE SACRIFICES
Chap 21: [link]
Chap 22: [link]
Chap 23: [link]
Chap 24: [link]
Chap 25: ---
Volume 1 : TO MAKE A FRIEND [link]
Volume 2 : TO KNOW WHAT LOVE IS [link]
En français : [link]
Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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Say...you were BEGINNING to feel a little cold
lol the snow in Suna must not be that cold--maybe even a little warm XD
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It must be cold enough for the snow not to melt
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Finally got caught up XD
Oh my gosh ;3; I cried so much when Gaara dumped Sunaki! But there is a bit of humour to this scene, which is nice!
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I'm happy you could read it again
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I feel so sorry for sunaki 
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Gaara don't know how much Sunaki loves him. He thinks she's gonna forget him quickly (and get an other bf). He's being stupid and selfish
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I'm not sure what you're trying to say in the second panel, but for the rest:
Niro: Don't come crying to me when your toes fall off one by one.
Sunaki: Thanks Niro, I was beginning to feel a little cold....
^^ Hope I helped! Great page by the way.
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Thank you so much ! I'll correct it
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No problem! ^^ Glad I could help.
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it's snowing and she has no shoes on. frost bite causes your toes to fall off
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No, I mean I understood what was being said, but not how to word it grammatically in english....
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