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luciol-sunaki — Sunaki's story chap32 p6
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Feel free to correct my English. Help will be much appreciated
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Chap 32 : ---
Volume 1 : TO MAKE A FRIEND luciol-sunaki.deviantart.com/a…
Volume 2 : TO KNOW WHAT LOVE IS sunaki-san.deviantart.com/art/…
Volume 3 : TO MAKE SACRIFICES sunaki-san.deviantart.com/art/…
Gaara (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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Go Temari-sensei! And it's 'taught' not 'teached'
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Since you said feel free to, I'm happy to correct.
Instead of "Remember what I teached you" it should be "Remember what I taught you." and "...too much risks" should be "...too many risks"
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Thank you for corrections !
I'm gonna correct all these mistakes
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I'm a bit of a grammar nut so no problem ^^
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