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Published: 2010-08-28 03:44:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 8583; Favourites: 182; Downloads: 266
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Description This is the action Gene film I picked. I never drew guns before but I think that turned out well.

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Addiskrilla [2012-01-28 03:49:00 +0000 UTC]

damn

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bobingabout [2010-09-02 09:06:27 +0000 UTC]

i really like the belly

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BlackLupin [2010-08-29 05:26:48 +0000 UTC]

It's okay.



Anatomically speaking it could be better.

You could've put more definition around her upper ribcage area down towards her lower stomach area.

Shading could be a bit darker, specially on the lighter colored parts.

The eyes could be a bit more detailed, something even like the eyes of Sailor Moon would work better.

The hand and gun look really well drawn.



Highlights in the hair could've been more than just squiggly white lines.

You could've, hair highlights-wise, made it a lighter color with the lines more stretched out across the hair.

I'm very curious though did you draw this just using a tablet pen itself?

Or did you use the Pen Tool?

I'd recommend looking up tutorials here on Deviant Art to help you improve your shading skills (I'm not perfect either but that's what I do).

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LuckyBucket46 In reply to BlackLupin [2010-08-29 06:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Well first of all, all my artworks can look better.

hmmm... I never really thought of doing that, I was behind deadline so I didn't really put that much detail into it.

To tell the truth I just wing shading and highlighting. I mean I've never learned or anything I just go with it.

Again, behind deadline but I understand where you're coming from. I don't really mess around with the eyes too much but only when it's a close up.

Thank you, I was worried that wrist wasn't going to look right at first, but it turned out pretty good.

Like I said, I normally wing it because I really don't know how to use photoshop.

what do you mean more stretched out? I think I understand but I want to make sure, I mean this is all good information.

I used a tablet pen, I have a bamboo tablet. It's hard to draw and I feel like it holds me back on greater details but still it saves a lot of money on paper and pencils.

Pen Tool, I think that's what you call it. (the pen that goes with the tablet I use)

I've tried that a few times and I've even try to follow their steps in doing it to, but it seems I somehow mess up. When I do ask them a question on how to fix it, they never respond back. I'm willing to learn if I can do it right.

I just want to say thank you, this is really great advice. I was thinking of pushing myself harder on my next pic.

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BlackLupin In reply to LuckyBucket46 [2010-08-29 07:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay so the picture was behind a deadline and you only used the pen and not the Pen Tool that comes in Photo Shop.

I see.

Well the Pen Tool is very simple to use and there's plenty of tutorials on here that explain how to use it.

This one for example

Plenty more to choose from.

Lots of Photo Shop tutorials that teach so much and can help you improve.

Notice the glowing light purple that goes across the hair area and in more than one part of the hair.

Or if you're using just white you can combine colors to help bring out the highlights of the hair.

For example, in the link right above this, she used black as the base color then used purple to bring it out even further by combining the two colors leaving a small white area-or instead of purple you can use blue.

You don't need special paper or pencils.

I mean it's all about how well you utilize your tools.

This work , this piece and this work were completed with using basic computer printer paper and crayola color pencils.

Even I envy her skills seeing as how much I suck!

But yeah, it's all about how much you utilize your tools to the fullest extent.



Yeah, I know how that is at times.

Most of what I already know about color pencils and photo shop comes from guru

No problem.

Just glad to help you out.

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LuckyBucket46 In reply to BlackLupin [2010-08-30 05:52:58 +0000 UTC]

alright, i've attempted the pen tool part. I think I will take it one step at a time and get used to it. I'm still wanting to improve my skills, but it's going to take some time. Oh here's a link to the pen tool part [link]

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BlackLupin In reply to LuckyBucket46 [2010-08-30 06:57:16 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty good.

Just keep practicing and you'll get better at it.

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DJSeanD [2010-08-28 18:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job!

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WakaMiyafuji [2010-08-28 18:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I can't really begin to describe how awesome and badass you made Emily look. I absolutely love it!

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LuckyBucket46 In reply to WakaMiyafuji [2010-08-29 03:17:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry that it wasn't right for TFI though, but I will admit I had fun drawing her.

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WakaMiyafuji In reply to LuckyBucket46 [2010-08-29 03:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I care more about the quality of it rather than the content I guess you could say. Glad you had fun drawing her.

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wozza1508 [2010-08-28 11:32:35 +0000 UTC]

good job on the gun and the character lucky

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BalloonPrincess [2010-08-28 10:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Very sexy!

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Levia-the-Dragon [2010-08-28 06:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Huh... well apart from the trigger-guard being missing that is...

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Zanbon-Sengetsu [2010-08-28 05:57:07 +0000 UTC]

The gun looks amazing dude. Great job

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AltHentai [2010-08-28 05:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Guns are a bitch to draw a weird angles particularly cus all the reference pictures I find are always from the side and never at another angle
Her hair says to me cotton candy. Delicious

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LuckyBucket46 In reply to AltHentai [2010-08-28 05:47:37 +0000 UTC]

heh, thanks for noticing the hair too, I wanted to make it more alive in this pic. Guns are so hard for me but I can draw them somewhat okay.

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Wardern1337 [2010-08-28 04:32:45 +0000 UTC]

gj mate even tho we hardly see eye to eye anymore but school starting for me WOOT grade 10 art here i come!

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Slime-Series [2010-08-28 04:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Great work! The gun did come out very well and detailed and the gal is of course very sexy and looks great and wonderful pose!

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theduckofanime [2010-08-28 04:28:47 +0000 UTC]

This one does look pretty nifty. The gun turned out well, in my opinion.

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LuckyBucket46 In reply to theduckofanime [2010-08-28 04:30:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i've practiced in school but that was 5 years ago.

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Dragonranger10 [2010-08-28 04:21:43 +0000 UTC]

awesome work!

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NevermoreFox [2010-08-28 03:58:38 +0000 UTC]

ah... ah... WIN... and good gun to

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Rod-Roger [2010-08-28 03:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Two words to describe this. BAD ASS!

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